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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 17)

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 6:09am | IP Logged
both updates were awesome !!!!

loved de beating up of de loser jeet in part 16 
the romance was hawwt 

part 17 had me laughing 
it was also emotional 

are yaar Uday jaldi apne feelings ko realise kar or 
Manyata ko batha de apni dil ki baat 

tat way she wil stay wid u in ur house 
tat vud b lovely !!


awesome work PaRi 
and 
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY 

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
@sonam thanx darlng.
Love u 2..
Nd same 2 u dear.
Loved ur cmnt..

@lily thanx dear.
I m watng u r cmnts
nd same 2 u.

Happy frndshp day 2 ol of u.
Pari
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged

Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-18th
Jagat'o sun lal mirchi tere papa
ko kuch ni hoga..
Manyata'lekin wo khana ni kha rhe
h,unko weaknes ho jayegi.
Uday'hm khana khila ayenge,
Manyata'keise?
Uday naugtynes'phle tum btao
keise khilati ho?
Manyata'chamch se,weise wo
apne hatho se jyada khate h.
Uday jagat launghng'oye ye bi bta
chamch kise pkdti h.
Manyata'apne muh se gadho hath
se pkdti hu...ye to sb ko pta hota
h.
Jagat'oye hoye mujhe lga muh se
chamch pkdti h or tb khana khilati
h..
Uday'o mujhe ye lga ki chamch
pair se pkdti h.
Manyata'oye uday,tu kya apne
papa ko aise khana khilata h kya?
Uday uske pas jata h'o g wo kya h
na jo aapke papa kbi kbi khana
apne hatho se khate h,wo mere
papa roj krte h..ha ni to..
Manyata tightly bolti h uska coler
pkd k'mere papa bi roj apne hatho
se khate h.smjha tu...piche hat
mujhse.
Uday'o g man to ni kr rha h dur
jane ka pr,coller chod doge to
chala jaunga...
Manyata'tu na ek nu.ka.
Jagat'jhkaas h.arey main apne
bhai k baare me sb janta gu
mujhse puch le..
Suddn'akash knock d
door'drwaaza khol jagat.
Unanti darwaaza kholti h'jaldi
ander aao..
Jagat'oye hoye kya bat h akash
kya hua itna dra kyn h.
Akash'arey yar tum had krte
ho,raste me wo jeet k kuch
aadmi mil gye mujhe,dra rhe the
chodge ni..
Uday'or tu dar gya gadha,bolna
tha na uday jagat ko bula
dunga.apne aap bhaag jate.
Akash'arey maine kha ki,main
manyata ko bta dunga,tb
bhaagte-2 ruk gye...
Sb manyata ki trf dekhte h.
M'kya h?
jagat'oye tu to apni dhasat bna ri
h..
Uday'knife leke daray To sb dar
jayege..aacha hua hmne talwar ni
nikali...
Manyata'hoti tb to nikalta...ha ni
to...
Akash'hai to
Jagat'akash aja main tujhe
sikhata hu kaun si bat kha bolni
h..'
Akash'ha chal bhai.
Uday'ye akash bi na dimag ka
bhoot tej h,gadha.
Manyata'ha tumhara dimag hi to
bhoot birilient h na...pagl.
Uday'or tum pagali..ha ni to.bhul
gai..pagla-pagli..
Manyata'gadha tu...
In nyt sb soye h..
Lekin manyata window k pas
khadi h,or chand ko dekh ri h..
Ekdum se uday jagata h,to wo
dekhta h,chand ki roshni me wo
or khubsurat lg ri h...
Uday cusion ko hug krke use
dekhta h..
He thout'haaye..chand ki
khubsurti me to or khil ri h...
Manyata bilinkg eyes with smile..
Uday leita h use dekh rha h'yar ye
ek din jan lelegi,bolne me tej
h..lekin masum bhoot h bache ki
trh..njre htane ka man ni kr rha
h...
Phr achanak manyata bckturn
hoti h,to uday jaldi se aankhe bnd
krleta h...
Manyata uday ko dekhti h,'phr wo
uske chahre ko dekhti h..
She thout'tu sote huye peace ful
lgta h,jga hota h,to din bhar ldai
krta rhta h..lekin aacha lgta h...'
Manyata phr searious sochti h,sb
soye h,main window se utar k
apne ghr bhaag jati hu...
To wo apni chunni muh pe bandhti
h..or window se utrti h.
Uday phr aankhe kholta h,to wo
dekhta h..wo window se utar ri h...
Manyata jb utrti h,to piche mudke
uday ko dekhti h...
'jaane ka man ni kr rha h,pr papag
ka khyal aa rha h bar bar'
Uday'ye kha ja ri h?jrur bhaag ri
h...
Manyata ka pair ekdum se means
uska balance bigdta h,wo gir jati
h,or chilati h aa..aa..
Uday jaldi se uthata H..jagat bi'oye
ye keisi awaaz thi...
Uday khidki ki trf jake dekhta
h'manyata giri h.
Uday'ye manyata bi na,khidki se
bhaag ri thi,niche giri pdi h.
Jagat'o teri..bhai ye bdi ziddi type
h...arey preshan mt ho na,hm
pkad lenge chal.
Uday'isko fever h,weakness
h,isko samjhana bda muskil kam
h..chinta uski bi h,or jha giri h wha
ki zameen ki bi.
Jagat'arey ha.
Tbi,gr'oye kaun gunda ghr me
gusa h.talwar la meri.
Oye maya lyt chalu kr.jaldi.koi
chor h...
Jagat'o,ye to kbi sota hi ni h,jb
dekho taiyar rhta h...
Uday'main bahr jata hu,tu window
k pas khayal rkh.
Jagat'o aram se jaiyo,wo talwar
tere pe na chla de..
Udhr manyata giri h to usko pair
me chot lg gai
h...'haayee,rabba,ab kya kru,ye to
saare gunde jg gye.or mera pair
bhaag bi ni skti...
To gr apne rum se talwar leke
bahr niklte h,or lyt on krne jate h.
Tbi piche se uday'o papag talwar
mujhe do,or lyt bad me on
krna,or sidha face kiye
hue,talwar gr se leke chla jata h.
Gr'oye jagat aaram se,dekh koi
nuksaan na ho...chor ko pkad k la..
Maya'lyt to on kro...
Phr wo lyt on kr deti h...
Manyata dhire-2 drd hota h use
phr bi uthti h...
Or jane lgti h...
Tbi 2gunde'oye kudi kaun h tu yha
ki kr ri h..
Manyata dar jati h..wo bck turn
hone wali hoti h,tbi unke piche
uday aake un 2gundo ka muh bnd
krdeta h,or talwar se unhe marke
faint krke manyata k
pas,manyata ne bi chunni se apna
face cover kiya h,uday ne bi ek
kapde se apna face cover kiya h..
Uday uske pas aata h,or uske gle
pe talwar rkhta h,manyata feard
eyes nd uday angry eyes k 7th
unka eye Contct ho rha h...
Manyata'mein wo.
Uday'wo talwar uske gle me
gusaye ja rha h,or uske kareeb
aya ja rha h...
Manyata ne dar k uday ki waist se
tightly uski shrt pkdi h..or uday ne
ek hath me sword pkda h,or
dusre hath wall se touch kr rkha
h..
Gr'oye,jagat kha gya tu,chor
mila...kya?
Manyata or dar jati h..lekin uday
use cntinuos dekh rha h..
To jagat piche se aata h bolta
h'idhr kya kr rhe ho,chor udhr
h.chalo.
Wo phr gr ko leke chla jata h..
Or phr manyata'main wapis rum
me jati hu..
To wo ghabra k uday ko dhakka
deti h..or window pe carefuly
chane lgti h.. Lekin phr uska
bl.bigdta h,or gir jati h,to use uday
catch krleta h...
Uday'mujhe pta h tu bhoot smart
h,pr itna smart bnna bi thik ni..
Manyata dar ri h uski dhadkne tej
ho ri h..
To uday use arm pe pic up krke le
jata h,
Jagat'o papag aapke rum me koi
h.
Maya'haayee.
Jgt'arey jaldi dekho na jake,wo aa
rhe h.
Gr:kaun aa rha h?
Jagat'arey idhr hi khade ho,rum
me jao.
Wo 3no jate h.
To jagat baahr niklt jata h,gr or
maya ko rum me bnd krdeta h.
'so jao,koi chor ni tha.gud nyt..
Tbi uday manyata ko leke aata
h,both r eyecntct..
Jagat'arey nain milan bad me
krna,chalo jaldi rum me...
To wo 3no rum me jate h..
Uday use bad pe fall on krta h,or
uski chunni remove krta h.
'tumhein meri bat smjh ni aati
kya?maine kha tha,ki tum jb thik
ho jaogi,tb chali jana,bhagne k
chakker me apna pair ko chot
phucha di..ab jana or muskil
hogya.
Manyata chup h...
Uday shout'ab chup kyn ho?
Manyata'mera suit bi fat gya,pair
me bi chot lg gai,or uper se
talwar leke Mujhpe swar the,or
uper se papag ne or dra diya,un
2gundo ne bi dra diya..ha ni to.
Uday phr shocked hoke jagat ko
dekhta h.
Jagat'bat to shi kh ri h..dr gai h
bechari...
Manyata'oye bechari hoga
tu..smjha..main apne risk k bhaagi
thi.ha ni to.
Uday'ye bechari ni bechara h.or
tum risk mt liya kr,uska natiza
hmesha bura hota h.tumhare liye
to hota hi h,hmare liye bi hota h.
Jagat'bat me point to h...
Manyata apne pair ko dekh ri
h,use drd ho rha h..
To uday bndage box leke aata h
Or uska pair pkdta h,or bndage
krne lgta h.
'tum itni ziddi kyn ho?jo bat khta
hu smjha kro,fayede me rhegi..ha
ni to.
Manyata'tubi km ziddi ni h,mujhe
jaana h apne papa k ghr..plz.ab
wha sb thik h...
Uday'thik h main tumhein kal chod
dunga..lekin rat ko...
Manyata thout'mujhe lga phr
daatega pr ye to shant ho gya...'
Uday chat pe chla jata h,jagat bi
aata h.
'bhai,tu chinta mt kr,kal use
phucha denge..
Uday face niche krke khda h,jagat
'bhai meri trf..
He s little cryng.
Jagat'arey,tujhe aachi trh pta
h,tujhe aise ni dekh skta..kya
hua?
Uday'jagat,mera man ni h use
jaane dene ka...
Jagat use hug krta h'bs tu chinta
mt kr ro mt sb thik ho jayega...
Jagat'weise shi kh rha h,uske 7th
hmari sharate or mst ho jati h...
Are jha hm dono wha kuch
impossible ni h..
Uday'ha,chal niche...
Manyata talk jay
'jay papag ne khana khaya..
Jay'ni di,wo to aapki rat lgaye
beithe h...
Manyata'main kal aajaungi,rat
tk..tb tk tu sambhal le...
Jay'g di...main rkhti hu,cal kal bat
krti hu...
Uday-jagat aate h.manyata phone
rkhti h..
Uday kuch ni Bolta chup-chap jake
so jata h...
Manyata'jagat se dhire se bolti h
'ay haddi,tera bhai shant aacha ni
lgta.
Jagat'or use tum hr ada me
pasnd ho...
Wo bolke chala jata h..
Manyata'ye kya bolke gya..?
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Pari

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Hey Pari Hug, usse tum har ada mein pasand ho! wow so cute Embarrassed, par gadhi ko abhi tak samaj mein nahi aya hoga D'oh.

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
@chitra darlng
manyata h na dimag ki loose.
Original me shuru se uday k pyar ko smjhte-2 hmara show hi end krdiya.lol

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
hi Pari dear Nia yaad haina.So did u miss me.I missed u alot:)Ok now back 2 the update.Awesome update yaar.So cute awww.N Uv n M sword scene waz so so so cute.I like the bonnding between two brothers yaar.N the last scene haye idiot M samajh hhi nahi sakti kya?Love it 2 the core.n happy friendship day my kamini Hug

Edited by princessnia - 06 August 2012 at 1:16pm

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
yes i remember u.
Kamine logo ko main bhulti ni hu.
Tu mujhe bhul gai h.ab to mere ss bi aache ni lgte tujhe..
Ha ni to

same 2 u my kamini @nia.

Pari

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by maneet..

yes i remember u.
Kamine logo ko main bhulti ni hu.
Tu mujhe bhul gai h.ab to mere ss bi aache ni lgte tujhe..
Ha ni to

same 2 u my kamini @nia.

Pari

oyee kisney kaha mujhey teri ss achey nahi lagtey ha?jara uska naam bol.abhi uski hospital ki ticket katwati ho.n agar tuney kaha haina yeh toh Pari teri toh kheir nahi.tuna jada antaryami mat ban.yupp i dont like ur ss beacouse i love ur ss samjhi.apney dimaag main yeh baat gusa deh.

Edited by princessnia - 06 August 2012 at 1:41pm

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