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manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 (Page 16)

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it was awesome very well written cont soon loved it

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Posted: 04 August 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Hey Pari Hug, jeet ki gadi derailed, and manveer ki gadi patri mein very interseting. loved it,Manveer rain scene was so hot Embarrassed, continue soon dear

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well written

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-17th

Manyata ko ehsaas hota h,to wo achanak uday ko thoda push krti h nd wo use dekhti h.
Uday bi shocked hota h.
She s cryng..
Dono ko bhoot jyada embressed feel ho rha h...
Uday bck step lene lgta h,manyata roti-2 rum me bhaag jati h...

Uday to phle rain me beith k puri trh bheega,or manyata ro ri h..

In nxt mrng.,
Jagat'oye hoye bhai hall me hi,o teri tujhe to bukhaar h...

Uday'arey ni bs aise hi..wo
Unanti bhagi-2 aati h,manyata ko fever h..
Jagat'bda ajeeb concidnce h.
Uday'arey,concidnce ni h,kal hm rainy rainy khel rhe the dono.chal rum.jaldi.

Manyata beithi hui h njre jhuka k.
Uday'tum thi...he thout'kis muh se puch rha h,meri wjh se sb hua h'wo phr piche jane lgta h.
Manyata'pura sawal to pucha kr,wo kal rat ko
Jagat'ha ha malum h rainy rainy khel rhe the,hme bi bula lete na..
Uday'ha rainy game khelna bhari pda,fever game ho gya.
All launghng...
Uday'o teri hitler or maa ka date ko chal pe plan kiya tha na.
Jagat'o teri,main jata hu wrna.
Uday'jaldi jaa,wo dono to hmse bi jwan h...
Jagat laughng'bhai..maa ka pta ni lekin hitler hmse bhoot jwaan h...
Wo bhagta h..
Unanti'main kaada bnake lati hu..tum dono k liye...
Wo bi chali jati h.

Rum me uday or manyata h.
Uday'wo kal k liye sry,wo maine
Manyata'clappng ek hath se ni bjti,tu glti smjh k bhul ja...
Uday'tum itni samjdar kb se ho gai?mtlb itni shaant,mujhe to lga tha tum such me mujhe
Manyata'tujhe tod dungi,yhi na...kbi-2 shant hona pdta h...
Uday'ab wo tera hone wali dulhan tera picha chod degi.
Manyata'dulhan..
Uday'qki dulhe jeise to tewar tere h,wo to dulhan hi tha tere saamne.
Both laughng...

Jagat'arey baap re bhai,kal rat mumy papa bi rainy rainy khel rhe the...

Gr'arey,jaldi kaadha leke aa..aaj k bad chat pe kbi ye sb mt krna.
Uday'o bs kro na,bimar ho lekin awaaz sher wali hi chahiye.ha ni to.

Gr'ye uday ki awaaz h,
Maya'tusi rhne do,aapko or hmsbko pta h aapka uday kitna ziddi h.jb tk bulaoge ni tb tk wo aane wala ni h..'to awaaz kha se.
Jagat'kaan bj rhe h inke.ye lo kaadha pee lo...
Jagat phr rum me jata h...
'o g manyata g rainy rainy keise khlte h?mujhe bi btao..main bi kheluga jb rain hogi.,
Manyata'rhne de tej hwa ayegi to ud jayega,barish ho yegi to hm to bhaag bi aye,lekin tu whi jam jayega..ha ni to..
Jagat'ha tu..
Manyata'tu kya?
Jagat'kuch ni,ab kuch glt bolne ka man ni kr rha h,khin ro degi to chup krana mushkil hoga...
Manyata'tune mujhe rote huye kb dekha.
Uday'jo hsti itna bhaynak h,wo roti to bhoot bhaynak hogi.
All launghng...

Jagat'wo pink mirchi kb ayegi...?
Manyata'wo ni ayegi,papag ki tbiyet thik ni h.'

Uday darte-2 manyata ka 4head check krta h'jagat iski med.leke aa,wrna ise tej fever ho jayega...
Manyata'haddi,mere med. K 7th apne bhai ki bi med.leliyo...

Uday'mujhe med.ki jrurt ni h,main apne aap thik ho jaunga.
Manyata'automatic body h kya?
Jagat laughng..uday smile...
Jagat'main med.leke aata hu..
Gr:oye jagat ja mere liye or apni maa k liye med.leke aa.jaldi.
Uday irritate hoke'ha aapke liye to med.ki factory bnwa rha hu.
Jagat laugh
Komal:o g khana to kha lo...
Br:o mujhe meri manyata chahiye,mujhe meri beti lado main wada krta hu uske 7th koi zbrdasti ni kruga..
Jay'papa g phle aap utho...di ko hm leke ayenge..
Vijay'ha phle aap khana kha lo.wrna bimar pd jaoge..
Br:ni mujhe ni khana.
Jay'chod do jb tbiyet or khraab hogi tb kha lenge.ha ni to...

Jay rone lgti h'or jake phone krti h manyata ko...

Jagat pic d cal'hello,ha pinky bol kya kam h?
Jay s cryng'jagat,di ko phone de.
Jagat thoda imotional ho jata h'oye kya hua?ro kyn ri h?ruk deta hu.
Manyata ko phone deta h wo'ha jay kya hua?
Jay'di aap yha jaldi aa jao,papag ki tbiyet khraab ho ri h bhoot jyada,wo kuch kha pee ni rhe h,kh rhe h manyata ayegi tb khauga...
Manyata'hy bhagwan sb mere dushman bne h,ek min.behosh kr or gulcose chda de.
Jay smile di aap.
Manyata'bs tu hsti rha kr,or main aati hu.
Sb ye bat sunke chok jate h.
Specialy uday..
Uday phone leta h'jay sun jeise jo sambhala h sambhal le,manyata ni jayegi,uski tbiyet khud thik ni h...
Jay'kya?main aati hu.cal cut...
Manyata'ye kya pagalpan h mere papag ne khana ni khaya h wo mera wait kr rhe h.
Uday gusse me uski trf jata h'mujhe ni pta lekin tum puri trh thik hoke jaugi.smjhi..
Manyata'ye kya mtlb hua?mere papag ki tbiyet khraab h,or tu mujhe jane se rok rha h,.main thik hu,or main jaungi..
Uday'ha ni to..tum ni jaungi to ni jaungi.bs.
Manyata soute'pr kyn?
Uday double shout'qki main tumhein yha se jane ni...
Chup

Maya door knock krti h'oye unanti ye keisi awaaz aari h itna kyn chila ri h.ye din bhar kmre me krte Kya ho?
Manyata-uday angry eye cntct me h.
Jagat'arey kya h?jake aaram kro na,unanti ne t.v me bhut ko dekh liya,to chila ri h.
Break both eye cntct
Gr:oye darwaaza khol menu bi dekhna h bhut...
Uday'ha to apni sakal mirror me dekh lo,bhoot bi dar jayege.
Gr again cnfused'ye to
Jagat'ab ye mt khna bhai ki awaaz h...
Gr rote huye'oye jagat ja mere uday nu le aa,uske bina sb sunaa h..
Unanti'sachi.
Gr'ha
Jagat hapy'oye to thik h main aaj hi dhund lunga..

Manyata'tu to apne ghr aajayega,or main kya zindgi bhr idhr rhugi.
Jagat'bhai,bat to ye bi shi kh rhi h.
Uday ko chid ho ri h uski jane ki bat sunke.
Manyata'arey bolna,jb jwab ni hota to aise hi chup ho jata h tera bhai,main ise aachi trh janti hu..
Uday'ha to jb itni aachi trh janti ho to smjh kyn ni ri ho main kya chahta hu?
Manyata'dekh phliya mt kr,main thik hote hi chali jaungi.ha ni to.
Uday'ha thik h,jb thik hojana tb jana..
Jagat thout'bhai,phli bar jitni meri chinta krte ho,utna ya usse khin jyada chinta aap kisi or ki kr rhe ho..i m happy 4 u bhai or apne liye bi..
Uday'tu kya soch rha h,kha gayeb ho gya.
Jagat'kuch ni,bhai jra idhr aana,wo dhire se bolta h..'apne dil ki bat bolo to shi,uske bad hm dono sambhal lenge.'
Uday mtlb.
Jagat smile'mtlb tu smjh rha h,bs deir mt kriyo...

Manyata'saare akal k aandhe h.
Jagat'oye hoye,shi kh rhe ho aapke ghr me saare akal k aandhe h..
Uday laughng
Manyata'abe o haddi main tere ghr k logo ki specialy ye uday k baare me h.

Uday'ha ha tum to akal aankho dono ki aandhi ho..
Manyata'jyada mt bol mujhse wrna
To jgat uday 7th bolte h'ha ha pta h tod dogi ya uthake patak dogi.bhoot taqtwar h tu.

To na manyata jagat k kaan pkdti h'tu bhoot bolta h,tujhe to aaj hi tod hi dungi,idhr aa.
Jagat'mere najuk bdan ka mjak mt udao,himmat h to bhai ko utho..

Manyata'ye kuch jyada hi mota h.
Uday'mota ni hu tumhari trh,body sody h meri.ha ni to.

Manyata'tu na hat wo use push krti h or jake chup chap beith jati h...

Jagat-uday laghung..
Precap-manyata bhaagne ki koshish krti h..
Pari

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
awesome please continue soon  Big smile

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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Read last two parts together. Loving the nok jhok and the romantic parts. Infact, even I dont want manyata to go back. LOL 

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it was awesome :)
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Posted: 05 August 2012 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
THANKS PARI FOR THE FANTASTIC UPDATE.Hug
OH UV CARES FOR MANYATA SO MUCH.Heart
PRECAP WAS GOOD.Wink
THANKS FOR THE AMAZING UPDATE & PM.
LOVED IT.Smile
Hug Hug

EDITED MY COMMENT ON LAST 3 CHAPTERS ON PAGE-15.Smile

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