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Posted: 11 years ago
🀣 πŸ€£ πŸ€£ πŸ€£ FANTASTIC & VERY FUNNY UPDATE PARI.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
ARE YAAR MERE TUMMY MEIN PAIN HO RAHA HAI ISE PADNE KE BAAD.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
I LOVE JAGAT-UDAY TUNIING.πŸ˜‰
GIRIRAJ & UV CONVO THAT WAS HILLARIOUS.🀣 πŸ€£
PRECAP WAS DAMN INTERESTING.☺️ β˜ΊοΈ
THNKS FOR THE FABULOUS UPDATE &  PM.😊
LOVE YOU.πŸ€— πŸ€—
THIS SS IS MY LAUGHTER MEDICINE.πŸ˜† NOW I'M ADDICTED WITH YOUR BOTH SS.😳
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brilliant update pari πŸ˜ƒ and sorry yr mai fb pe like and comment ni kr pai mera net problem kr rha hai by the way the best scene was when uday wipes manayta tears and vijey :me larki se shadi ni krun ga
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Hey Pari πŸ€—, again a hillarious update, Maya ka ghar πŸ€£, lol and love haddi ki dukan Jagat. And both Jagat and Uday are so naughty, love them πŸ˜†, continue soon dear 
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yaar tu mujhe doctor ke paas bhejdegi haan nahin toh.has has ke mera pet dukh raha hain..i loved it kudiye n thanx fr pmπŸ‘
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super funny update !!!


loved the precap !!!

cant type more cuz i m ROFL 


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lol it was super cute and funny loved it 
eagerly waiting for next part :) 
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-14th

Jagat manyata k pas jata h'oye manyata g tussi to idhr hi rhna h,to aap ki to khatirdari krni pdegi!!
Manyata'oye dur rh,jay tu ghr ja,aaram se jana..or ghr phuch k phone krdena..
Or maa-papa ka khyal rkhna...
Uday'or sb kuch thik rkha,koi brbaadi ho to btana..
Jagat'ha or gle milo,jitna rona h ro or ja kal jaldi aana.
Jay vijay manyata ko hug krte h.
Jay'di hm kal phr ayenge.
Unanti'ha jay tum meri dost bnke or vijay tum jagat k dost bnke aana.
Uday'ek 7th mt aaja baari-2 aana..
Vijay'ha thik h.chl jay jaldi.
Jagat'ha aaram se aana tumhara hi ghr h.
Jay'tumhara ghr ni h.kisi maya ka ghr h.
Uday'pta h maya kaun h?
Jay'kaun?
Jagat'hmari maa h.
Jay nd vijay shocked
Nd all laghng manyata also.
Uday'oye maya ka nam srf hm le skte h ha ni to
Bye shy..
Wo chle jate h..

Unanti'veerg main aapke liye or manyata k liye kuch khane ko lati hu...
Manyata'ni,rhne do,mujhe srf paani pina h.
Jagat'tum kya paani pee pee k itni phul gai ho balloon ki trh.
All laughng..
Manyata laughng nd little cryng.
Uday sbko chup krata h.'ye bdi bhaynak cryng h,hste huye ro kyn ri ho'
Jagat'o sry g,ab kuch ni bolege..aacha tum duniya ki sbse patli ldki ho...khush...
Manyata smile'sbko preshan kr rkha h maine,meri wjh se sb preshan h..sbko dukhi kr rkha h..apne ghrwalo ko bi,or idhr tum sbko..

Jagat uday k shouldr pe hath rkhta h'o bhai hm preshan h,or hmein pta bi ni.
Akash'manyata ye or preshan bhul jao,ye sbko preshan krte h,inhe koi preshan ni kr skta..

Unanti wipes hr tear
'manyata tumhare 7th apne bhai ko bi to chupana pdega...to tum kyn soch ri ho hm preshan hnge...

Uday'pta h tujhe tere pariwar me or hmare pariwar me kya same h.
Manyata innocently'malum h.
Jagat'kya? bta

Manyata fastly bolti h
'yhi ki muskilo me keisi pagalpanti krni h,koi hm 6 se sikhe'
All say 'ha ni to.
Jagat'phle bhai uday.
Manyata'jay
Uday'jagat
Unanti'vijay
Akash'unanti
Uday'manyata..

Manyata'tera nam to aaya ni akash

Uday nd jagat laughng.
'paglo k nam h ye,robot k ni..
Manyata langhng
Akash also
'manyata,main inki trh ni bn skta...
'aaj to jagat ko shant krne k liye main yha ruk gya hu..lekin isko srf uday hi shant kr skta h...
Jagat'ha ni to..mera bhai h...
Both hug...
Uday'main nhane ja rha hu main ganda ho gya hu.
Jagat'tu ja nhale,main so rha hu...
Unanti'manyata tum mere
Uday'ni bahr jane me khtra h hitler kb jg jaye pta ni hota.

Wo bolke chla jata h...
To phr sb whi beith jate h.
Jagat'o g kya soch rhe ho?bhai ne such kha h.
Manyata 'ni wo main soch ri hu hitler kaun h?
Again all laughng..
Jagat'hitler hmara baap..
Manyata shocked nd laughng..
'sbke nam nikal rkhe tum logo ne to
Jagat'ha to tumne kha kisi ko choda h.
Tera nam nikalu..?
Manyata'ha bol?
Jagat'jis din aacha sa nam soch liya na,us din bta dunga...
Uday aata h,sb baatein krte-2 so jate h...

In mrng...
Phle unanti uth k dar k apne rum me bhaag jati h,phr akash uthata h to wo bi jagat uday ko jgane ki koshish krta h.pr wo uthete ni h.to wo bi chup chap chla jata h..lekin darwaaz khula chod k chla jata h...

Then,uday Thoda sa phle aankh khol k dekhta h,to phr so jata h.
Lekin suddn he s open d eyes becoz beauty is sleeping..'manyata..

Phle wo notice ni krta,lekin jb wo aankhe bnd krta h to sudden aankhe kholta h ki uske saamne so rha h.
Wo cntinueos use ek chote bache ki trh dekh rha h...
He thout'sote huye bdi khubsurat lgti h..
'lekin khtbsurat to bolte huye bi lgti h..'
Sote huye kitni inocent lgti h..

Sudden gr ki awaaz aati h'oye maya g main jagat k kamre me ja rha hu,kal se usne kuch ni khaya h.'
Uday phr dar jata h
Wo phle bhaagta h washrum ki trf'jagat hitler aa rha h sambhal le'
Wo jaldi se bhagta h washrum me chupne..
Jagat jaldi se uthata h'or wo manyata ko khta h
'uth na kitna soyegi..
Wo bi jaldi se dar k uth k beith jati h..
Or jagat bahar bhagat,or door bnd krdeta h'ha papag ander kha ja rhe ho?
Gr:oye tere ko bulane hi ja rha tha,kal se..
Jagat'o mere kamre me nock krke aya kro,mere apne personal kam bi hote h..chlo breakfast krte h...
Gr smile'chl.

Mayanta dar ri h use kuch smjh ni aa rha h wo kre kya?
To wo door k nter side ki trf hath krke khadi ho jati h..
To maya pura breakfast try ready krke lati h.
'unanti,jagat kha h?
Unanti'maa,wo apne rum me hoga..
Maya'main jati hu,apne papag ki bat to wo sunta ni h.
Un'ha thik h.
Maya chali jati h.jb wo aati h to manyata dekhti h dar jati h,or door k piche hi chup jati h...

To unanti ko yad aata h jagat k rum me to bhai or manyata bi h to wo bi bhaagti h...
'o shit,maa 9 way..


To ekdum se uday dhire-2 washrum se niklta h,manyata ko to lgta h wo
Akeli h rum me,jeise face turn krti h,weise hi uday ko dekh k dar jati h or chilane wali hoti h,tbi suddn uday uske pure close aake uske muh(mouth)pe hath rkh deta h,or manyata ne apna hath dar k uday k chest pe rkh liya h..
Nd uday ne ek hath uske mouth pe rkha h,or ek hath door k nter side pe rkha h...
Manyata ki aankhe door side dekh ri h..nd uday use dekh rha h.
Uday ek deewangi aankho se use dekh rha h...
Then,sudden manyata bi use notice krti h..
Both in passinately solid eye cntct...

Tbi maya one side door open krti h,to jo uday ka hath door side jo usne rkha h,us hath ka finger door me aa jata h..
Use pain to hota h,bt wo chila ni skta bol ni skta wo srf junnon bhari njro se manyata ko dekh rha h.
Manyata ko feel hota h ki uday ka face radish ho rha h,use pain ho rha h ofcourse wo pain chahre pe dikh rha h..
To manyata face turn krke dekhti h uski finger fasi h door me,usne hath rkha h phr bi chilane me lgi h,phr uday guse me apni aankhe bdi krta h,or uske close aata h,or use cntinueos dekh rha h,or ishaara kr rha h mt bol..

Then jagat msti me aata h or dekhta maya aander jaane ki koshish kr ri h,2nd side door usse open ni ho rha h.
Jagat'o shit,wo bhaagta h,maa kya h?
Maya'tu bahar h,chl phr aaja breakfast krle.
Jagat'mujhe mota ni hona,papag k 7th khaya to..
Unanti bi aati h'main whi to btane aai hu,wo dono maya ko leke chle jate h...
Phr manyata sudden door bnd krti h or uska hath pkdti h uske finger me se blood nikal rha h...
'tu pagal h kya?ye kya kr diya..
Uday'ni wo thik

Or manyata Uske blood ko rokne k liye wo uski finger ko suck krne lgti h.

Uday surprized hota h,wo phr use dekhta h...wo ghabrai h...

Manyata suck kr ri h uski finger phr use realize hota h ki main ye kya kr ri hu,wo phr uska hath chod deti h.
Tbi jagat aata h,bhai sb thik...kya hua?
Manyata ko to embresed feel ho rha h wo jaldi me washrum me bhaag jati h..
Jagat'o teri ye khun..
Uday'maa ki wjh se hua h.
Phr unanti breakfast leke aati h...
Bhai,manyata kha h?
Tbi manyata bi aajati h,phr wo uday ko dekhti,bt he s notice hr,then phr uday use dekhta h bt phr wo notice ni krti...
Jagat'tum dono statu kyn bne ho?
Uday naughtynes'ye iski wjh se mera hath.
Manyata'haww..maine kha tha door hath gusa k khade rho..
Uday'tum mujhe dekh k chila kyn ri thi.
Manyata'ghost ko dekh k tum hste hnge,mujhe dar lgta h.
Jagat'bs bs meine bolne k liye kha tha earthquake lane k liye ni'

Precap-jay vijay tara ntry in gr home...

Pari
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Hey Pari πŸ€—, im on the floor laughing πŸ€£πŸ€£, gosh muskil mein bhi pagapanti ooosome πŸ€£, and Jagats hum pareshan hai aur hamein hi nahi malum line ws freaking oosome πŸ€£, 

Pari tujhe dialogue writer hona chahiye πŸ‘, thanks for the PM doll πŸ‘
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-15th

Maya'jagat beta tera koi dost aya h,papag bula rhe h.

Jagat'dost,mere dost ghr,
Uday'o teri vijay aya hoga.jaldi ja..

Jagat bhaagta h.
To akash khada hota h
'ye mera dost ni h ye akash h'
Vijay'arey main to hu na.
Jagat hsta h'arey tubi mera dost ni h,tubi vijay h'
Phr wo 3no hste h.
Gr:aaj se phle to ise ni dekha.
Jagat'ha to aacha h na,mere jitna sundr bi ni h...
Vijay'uncle jyada purane dost ni h,abi wo shadi me mile the to bn gye'
Gr:lekin mujhe lg rha h maine tenu khin dekhya si..
Akash'uncle isko dekh k sb yhi bolte h.
Gr:kyn joker h kya?
Jagat'ha ekdum shi phchana..whi h.
Vijay'in dono ka dost hu to joker hona bnta h.
Gr:lekin..
Jagat'oye tu ander chl,yha lekin lekin kbi khtm ni hota..
Wo 3no chle jate h..

Maya:aapko kuch ajeeb ni lg rha h,uday k bina jagat unanti itne khush.
Gr:oye,ajeeb tere bache h...

Jay nd tara'uncle aunty namste..
Gr:o beta g aap kaun ho?
Jay'main unanti ki dost or ye tara meri dost...
Maya'kya kam
Unanti'arey tum dono itne din bad,aao ander aao...
Wo unhe kamre me lejati h.
Gr:kuch to bat jrur h?
Maya'koi bat ni apna man hlka krne k liye apne dost nu bulaya si..
Wo chali jati h...

In rum.
Phr sb jay ,vijay nd tara gle milte h manyata se.
Uday'abi kal hi to gle mile the...
Jagat'oye hoye pink tubi idhr ruk ja..mera man lga rhega..
Jay'jyada bolega na to.
Uday nd jagat'ha pta h pta h tod dogi..
Both laughng.
Vijay'pta h tumhare pariwar me hmare pariwar me kya common h.
Uday'ek baap
Jagat'ek maa
Uday '3 bhai bhan
Jagt 'tu apni bhano ka iklauta bhai
Uday'unanti hmari iklauti bhan..or kuch h to bta.
Vijay'hahaha vry funny.
Uday'hahaha wo hmein pta h tu h.
Vijay'problem chahe keisi ho,hske ldna jante h hm.
Jagat'ryt,hm jeise ho to problm ni rh skti.,

Br home.
Jeet aya h.
'o uncle g tusi chinta na kro,us manyata ko to main dhund hi lunga.apne gunde maine sb jgh chad diye h.
Br'ni mujhe meri beti shi slamat chahiye tum apne gunde wapas bula lo,mujhe ni krani tere se shadi apne beti ki..tu aazad h ja.
Jeet'o g ye to mushkil h,ab to teri beti hi bnegi meri dulhan.smjha tu.
Br'vijay mera beta shi khta tha tu gunda h.
Jeet br ka gla pkad leta h'ha main whi hu...or mere se picha chudhana mushkil h.
Komal'ye sb chupke se dekhti h or vijay ko cal krti h.

Or idhr jeet br ko dhakka deke bhaag jata h,usko thodi chot lgti h 4head pe.

Vijay'ha to ab
Tbi komal ki cal aati h
'hello maa bolo..
To komal saari bat btati h.
Cal cut..
Manyata'vijay bhai kya hua maa ne kya kha?
Vijay phr saari bat btata h.
Manyata cryng wo jaldbaazi me uthati h'aaj us jeet ko ni chodugi,bs bhoot ho gya'
Wo jane lgti h sb use pkdte h.
V:ni meri bat
Tara:manyata ye shi mauqa ni h.
Jay:di bat suno to shi.
Vijay'ye to ab rukne se ri,manyata bhai meri bat suno.
Manyata'ni mere papag ki aisi halt uski wjh se hui h.
Wo ro ri h..
Then tbi uday aata h nd use tightly pkdta h,or khta h tej awaaz me manyata chup ho jao...
Sb 2min.k liye dar jate h..
Manyata bi chup..
Uday'kya krogi wha jake,kya jwab dogi sbko..
Agar wo jeet whi hua to,use tumhare aane ka pta lg gya to Wo tumhein chodega ni,or tum bina kuch soche smjhe jane ki bat kr ri ho..
Jao jana h to..

Manyata rote-2 beith jati h,'main us jeet se keisa picha chudau apna apne pariwar ka..
Jay'di jb tk tu ni h tb tk wha sb thik h,jis din tu gai wha wo jeet phr pta ni kya krega?
Uday'hm sb h na hm sb kuch soch lenge lekin abi tum khin mt jao.
Vijay'uday s ryt..
Jagat'oye vijay tu english bi bolta h.
Vijay irritate hoke'ha bolta hu to..
Jagat'so wht?menu bi aati h yar.bura kyn maan rha h.?

Gr:oye khote tere kamre se ye awaaze keisi aa ri h?
Uday shout'kya h?mere kamre k aas pas madrate rhte ho,t.v dekh rha si.bhai nu to bhaga diya aapne,or ab hr cheez roka toki.ha ni to.
All tightly laughng..
Gr:oye ye to uday ki awaaz h..
Jagat'kaan thik kra lo apne ya bhai ko wapas bula lo..
Gr:oye khote rum khol.
Uday'ni..main nhane ja rha hu.bye.

Gr phr guse me chale jate h..

Again all laughng...
Jay'apne papag ko aacha bewkuf bna lete ho.
Uday'ha or tum dono bda imaandar bnake aye ho na apne papag ko.
Jagat'ab bol..

Vijay'lekin ab kre kya?
Uday'ek plan h,cum sb suno..
Akash'fantnstic.
Un'yes.
Manyata'ab ayega mja.
All say ha ni to...

Vijay'lekin yha se aapke papa mumy ko bhejna hoga..
Uday'uski tansn mt lo,wo hmara kam h..
Unanti:ye kam hmara h manyata don't wory.
Jagat'bs tum dono kal us bnder ko leke aajana..
Jay'wo to ho jayega...
Jagat'oye hoye,wo to ho jayega...bol ri h..dhire-2 sb ho jayega..
Jay'chl hat...

Manyata ko chinta ho ri h wo kuch ni bol ri h chup chap beithi h..
Uday'koi yha chup rhta h to bilkul aacha ni Lgta..or rote huye to bilkul ni...
Sb manyata ki trf dekhte h...
Jagat'ab hsne ka kya loge manyata g..
Manyata'jay nd vijay tum log jao,or rat ko jaldi aana..
Vijay'ok..
Wo chale jate h...

Uday'main khin bahr ja rha hu jagat,mujhe kuch kam h.
Jagat'o bhai jaldi aana,dubaara mt bhaag jana.
Manyata'weise ja kha rhe ho?
Uday'oye jb aauga tb dekh lena..jaldi aajaunga preshan mt ho.
Manyata'chl ja,mujhe koi frq ni pdhta..ha ni to...
Uday smile'ha to maine kb kha tujhe koi frq pdhta h..bye.
Manyata use dekhti rhti h,wo chla jata h.
Jagat'o unanti chal chat pe apne maa-baap ko bnd krdu..
Manyata'bnd krdu mtlb.
Jagat'o plan succes krna h to unko to htana pdega.
Manyata'apne mumy papa ko jyada dukh ni dena chahiye smjha,unanti tu idhr rh chal mere 7th chat pe..
Jagat'chl.
To jagat or manyata jate h..
Wo chat pe dinner ka arrangment krte h,chat ko decorate krte h..mtlb ek acha do logo k liye romentic mahol bna dete h.
Manyata'chl jagat ho gya,apne mumy-papa ko ab laa chal pe,or sun aram se pyar se,gundo ki trh ni,wo uske chick ko pic krti h,smjha haddi..wo rum me chali jati h...
Unanti'of oh mumy-papa chal pe to chalo,kuch h aaplogo k liye..
Jagat'chat ka door open krta h,wo dono dekh k khush hote h.
Gr:ye kya h?
Un:aap dono k liye h,kitna kam krte h aapdono,in dino itni preshani thi ki,aap dono.
Jagat'ab ispe bi bolege kya?mere kam ki izzat rkh liya kro.
Maya'or tum 2no..
Jagat laughng'tum dono k romance me main ki kra...
Gr:ht bdmaash..chl jao.
Un:ha thik h door bnd krdege bahr se,or ha niche hm tej music Chlayenge..thik h.phle bta ri hu savre gusa mt krna..
Maya'o thik h..
Jagat'niche hm apni party krege,uper aap apni..gud nyt.bye

Wo door baahr se bnd krke chale jate h...
Jagat'o g,thanku hlp krne k liye g...ab bs apki bhan bhai ka wait h.
Gr maya to chat pe bnd h,to ab unka dar kisiko ni h,to sb khule ghr me ghum rhe h,uday bi door se aata h'itne dino bad apne ghr me aya hu..wrna ek rum me boar ho gya tha...
Ye lo tumhare liye h.
M:kya h ye?
U:dekhle.
Manyata dekhti h to 3-4 uske liye suits hote h..
'ye mere liye...
Uday smile'main to phnta ni ht,jha tk mujhe pta h jagat bi ni phnta..
Jb se aai ho,dulhan k luk me ghum ri h,ab to change krle...
To manyata chali jati h..change krne...

Akash'weise uday tere jagat ne phli bar tere siva kisi ki bat shanti se suni h or pyar se maani h..
Uday'oye kaun aagya meri jgh lene.
Unanti phr saari bat btati h..
Jagat uday k pas beithta h'oye teri jgh to koi le ni skta,main lene ni dunga,weise tubi iski bhoot fikr krta h...main bi notice kitta tere aankho ko...
Uday blushng'oye chl na aisi koi bat ni h..
Jagat'oye hoye blushng wlushng ho ri h..
Uday'abe o nautanki ek bar thik se hlp krdu,phr wo apne ghr main apne..

Manyata aati h green colour suit phn k aati h.
Un'oye hoye tere uper saare col.suit krde kudiye.green me bdi changi lgti h...
Uday use dekhta h,manyata ko ajeeb lgta h wo sir jhukaye khadi h,or jeise ghabra ri ho,or apne suit k dhaago ko khinch ri h...
Uday uske pas jata h,or manyata k ekdum close jata h..
Manyata piche-2 hoti h.or uday use passinately Dekhta h..
Uday'kudiye nya suit h,dhaage mt nikal wrna fat jayega.'
Manyata phr uski trf dekhti h or phr chup chap jane lgti h'to uday uska rasta rok leta h'weise,ye suit ki kimat jyada ni h,lekin tumne phna h to uski kimat bdh gai h..lg bhoot changi ri h..wo bolke smile krke chla jata h.
Manyata bi chupke se hsti h.
Jagat thout wid smile'bhai,tu to gya..

Precap-sb milke jeet ko pitte h...

Pari
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That was a cute update pari, please next part mein thoda jyada manveer please πŸ˜›