manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update Pari.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
But Precap was HORRIBLE.😲
Bechare UV & M.πŸ˜” ek phas gaya Dolly ke saath or M phas gayi gunde ke saath.πŸ˜†
I hope in dono ki (UV-M) ki ek dusre se shaadi ho jaaye.😍
Thanks for the daily update & PM.😊
Love you. πŸ€— πŸ€—
Edited by sonam2801 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey  Pari πŸ€—, now what is this gadbad ghotala, u were supposed to start a love track between Uday and his mirchi, but yaha tho tu band baja rahi hai unka who bhi kisi aur ke sath😑, aur tere readers ka pura orchestra baj raha hai.

And the precap gosh unki marriage Nahiii πŸ˜­(hindi film style), please koi chakar chala and mila de mere hero ko uske mirchi se πŸ˜³

Nice UpdateπŸ‘, looking forward to see what the pagala-pagali do to break this marriage, And thanks for the PM meri JaanπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohteri yeh tha kya yaar awesome update. hawww gunda Jeet kuch time keh bad tu toh haar jayega... ☒️ N precap waz amn horrible man.abhi hanso ya roun(cry)ya manveer ka jaap karo ha.I m confused yaar.humaisha aisey hi thora update karna jarrori hai kya.but koi gal nahi kuriyan sadhey terey nal jada shikayat nahi hai keunki tu to daily daily update karti hai gee.but abhi main kya karo...3 options 1 day without ur update.hmmm nahi terey update ka hi wait karleti ho..cont soon πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— Edited by princessnia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
marriage...kudiye...shaadishuda log ko bahagane ka irada hainπŸ˜‰...nahin naa...i hope nt...lovd evrything of itπŸ‘.plz unki shaadi mat karwaoo yuk...n thanks fr pmπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
@sonam
@chitra
@ilvuday
dearies,trust me.
Main apne manveer ko alg ni kra skti.ni ho skta aisa.lo
bt bt precap horible bt nxt part interesting.
Waitng.
Love u al.
Muuhh.
Pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
pari plz plz plz
next part aaj abhi update karde yaar
nahi toh mein mar hi jaaongi
raat tak ka wait nahi ho sakta yaar
plz plz plz
it was so interesting but precap dekh ke wait nahi hota
plz pari dear sweetheart jaldi update kar yaar
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Posted: 11 years ago
haayee.
@jazz darlng abi ready ni h part..
Jaldi koshish krugi udate dene ki.wait swtheart.plz
pari
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-9th

Manyata's home
Manyata ki shadi ki 2days bad h.
Br:taiyari kro,shadi ki,2din bad shadi h mere putr ki..
Vijay'manyata bhai,kuch kro na,is gunde se aacha to,wo tha jise puspa se pyar ho gya tha...
Jay'di chup mt beitho,main use jiju ni bula skti...maa to saari shoping bi krne chali gai h..
Manyata'lekin main kya kru?ab to ghr se bahr niklna bi bnd h...ha ni o
Vijay'arey ha ni to bolna chodo,kuch socho,main apni bhn ko gunde k hath me ni soaupiga..
Manyata'agar main kuch bi kru,us jeet ko chanta to jrur lgaugi ha ni to..
'of oh tum dono preshan hona bnd kro,hmara dimag kuch soch hi lega...

Or uday ki shadi ki date 2din bad niklti h..
Maya'haaye,mera uday dulha bnega.
Uday maya ko hug krta h'maa,mjhe shadi ni krni,wo ldkh bhoo moti h'
Jagat'main bhabhi ni bulauga use,hm joker kya km the ghr me jo ek or leke aa rhey ho'
Maya'jagat tujhe to,tujhe hmesha uday ki shadi se dikkat rhti h.
Jagat sad ho jata h.
Uday'ruk kha ja rha h'maa,mere liye papag or tere se hr kisi phle mera bhai mera dost jagat aata h,shadi krlunga main,lekin ye ulte sidhe ilzaam mt lga ispe'patni aajay ya bache ho jaye,jagat hmesha mere liye sbse uper rhega...ha ni to..
Wo jagat leke chala jata h..
Un:such kh ri hu maa,mere veer g se aisi ghatiya baatein mt kiya kro.
Maya'o main to mjak kr ri thi.
Un:apna ye bhaynak mjak apne nal rkha kr..ha ni to.
Wo bolke chali jati h...
Uday'oye tu kb se senti hone lga.
Jagat uday ko hug krleta h'bhai,main tujhe us dolly k 7th jodi buri lgegi,
mt kr ye shadi wo to tere jitni sunder bi ni h'
Uday'o sun mujhe pta h,to tujhe kya lgta h main chup chap shadi krlunga us kamre se'
Jagat again naugty'o teri kuch plan bna rhe ho.
Uday'o,soch rha hu,plan akele kha bnta h,tere 7th k bina hmesha adhura hu main.
Jagat'yar ye kudiye akele keise plan bna leti h'
Uday'din bhar whi sochti rhti h..
Jagat iritate hoke'bhai tu kuch kr mujhe dolly ni chahiye'...
Uday'2din h na hm kuch soch hi lenge..

After 2days
Mariage day..
Manyata,jay nd vijay rum bnd krke beithe h..preshan h.
Tara cum'drwaaz khol na manyata.
Vijay pir door kholta h
Tara'o manyata haye,kudi teri shadi h aaj,bdi udas lg ri h kya hua?
Vijay'iski shadi jo khush wo iske pas mt aao.
T:kya?ye kya mtlb h..shadi to khush.
Manyata'o lecture mt de,kuch plan bta ye shadi na hone ka..
Tara cnfused'abi thodi deir me teri baarat ayegi,ye kya bol ri h.
Jay 'sun,wo phr use puri bat btate h'

Or idhr uday,jagat nd unani gum me dhube h..
Maya cum'arey jaldi taiyar ho jao,baarat tujhe leke jaani h'
Jagat'maiyat ki baarat h.
Wo 3no tightly hste h.
Maya'shaitan,ye apshagun bhari baatein aaj ni krte.
Uday'aap to kbi ni krne deti.
Maya'baatein bnane me tej ho tum log,taiyar hojao.
Gr cum'oye jaldi taiyar ho jao.
Jagat'ha jao to shi,tumhare saamne taiyar hoye'


Idhr uday groom bnke beith, jagat akash nd unanti ghri soch me dube h..
Or udhr manyata brdal lehenga phn k beithi h,jay,vijay nd tara.ghri soch me dube h...

Akash:hmm,usne shi kiya tha kya?

In other side
Vijay:ab lg rha h jo usne kiya wo shi tha..

Unanti'akash,phli bar hm 3no se soch mil ri h..

Jay'bilkul shi,vijay bhai,jb pariwar hmari khushi ki fikr ni krta h,to hmein hmari khushi dhundni pdhti h...

Jagat'bhai hlp pta h kyn ki thi,shayed tujhe bi whi krna tha.'

Tara'manyata vijay nd jay thik kh rhe h,jb kuch glt kro or usse bhoot logo ki zindgi bch jayegi to bura krdena chahiye...

Uday'shayed,tum log shi kh rhe ho...lekin papa maa..

Manyata'ab koi rasta ni h,whi krna pdega..lekin papag or maa..

Jagat'arey bhaad me gye sb idhr sb sambhalenge hm,tu taiyar h ye bta..

Vijay'o chad inko,itni bar kha wo ldka gunda h
Lekin mujhe gunda saabit krdiya..o tum bol krlegi..

Uday'arey ha yar aaj bhaag jata hu,aaj bhaag gya to zindgi bch jayegi,chl main bhagta hu..

Manyata jaldi se khadi hoti h'o chal,simran teri raah pe chl ri hu,babag jruri h 7th dena...
Chlo hlp kro meri.

Uday ek letter likhta h'papa g nd maa aapki bhoot izat krta hu,lekin dolly mujhe pasnd ni,or mujhe shadi itni jaldi ni krni.ye doly ki ring wapis krdena,or mere jaane k bad kisi ko kuch khne ki jrurt ni h specialy jagat ko ya unanti saara gusa akash pe utardena usne jyada hlp ki h'...
Apna brilient beta
Uday..
Or wo leter jagat k hath me dedeta h.

Manyata'papa g maine kbi ni socha tha ki main simran ki trh bhaagugi,lekin aap meri shadi ek gunde k 7th krwa rhe ho,main ni kr skti..i m sry,main wapis aajaugi,jb sb kuch thik hojayega tb...sry maa,ye saari jwelery yhi h.
Or bhaagne k bad mere bhai,bhn dost ko kuch mt khna...by shy'
U r naughty daughter manyata...

Jagat unanti cryng alot..
Jagat'bhai mujhe ni pta tga,ek din itna rona pdega..
Un'bhai plz jaldi aana,hm khabr dete rhege,phone rkhna apne pas...
Uday'oye tum rona bnd kro,main bhaag ni pauga..akash ko dekho kitna khush h.uski aankho me aakal pda h..
All lagughng.
Akash:hy apna khayal rkhna..
Wosbko hug krta h,nd wo window k thru utr k bhaag jata h...

Manyata''ay tum logo ko mere dur jane ka dukh ni h,ro ni rhe ho na.
Jay'o hmein pta h hm royenge to tera jana mushkil ho jayega...
Lekin wo sb ro dete h..
Nd manyata sb hug krti h nd ek blck blanket apne pure body pe dal leti h or bahr niklti h
Vijay usse thodi duri pe hota h'manyata bhai care fuly.
Komal sudn aati h'aap kaun?
Vijay'wo tum yha kya kr ri ho,bahr jao,jhadu bahr lgani h..
Manyata apni maa ko dekhti h nd she start cryd,bt vijay use lejata h.
Vijay hug krta h manyata ko jao manyata khayal rkhna apna or agar kbi tym lge to phone krna..
M:g bhai,lekin mujhe jeet ko thapad marna tha.
V:of oh..yhi tym mila h mjak krne ko...jao.
M:bye.
Wo bi bhaag jati h.

Jagat wo lettr pdhta h,or hske chup chap whi rkh deta h..

Manyata k ghr baarat aati h
Sb normal behave kr rhey h.
Komal jay tara manyata ko lene jati h.
K:manyata tum kha ho?tb komal wo leter dekhti h'haaye rabba,manyata ye kya kiya tune.?wo bhaag k br k pas jati h,wha ofcourse sbko pta chl jata h..
Jeet bhoot guse me h'oye tusi chinta na kro,kruga to main manyata se hi shadi,oye gunde chd do charo trf,wo khudi mainu chahiye..
Jeet jay k pas jata h ,oye bta teri bhn kha bha bhaai h.
V:oye iska hath chad,manyata bhaag gai h,ab tu jitna dhundna h dhund le,ldki hath ni ayegi,or ye letter tere liye h wo deke gai h pdhle.
Wo letter pdhta h'nam jeet hone se koi jeetta ni h,tune mujhe chalenge kiya tha,or maine wo chalenge pura kiya,ab tu mujhe dhund k shadi krke dikha..gadhe ki aulad...haatt

Komal'meri beti mujhe chahiye,leke aao use..
Jeet to guse me mar rha h.

Or udhr gr uday ka letter pdhte h.or chilate h.
'akash..tune mere putr ko bhagwaya h..
Jagat apne muh pe hath rkh k hsta h.
Akash ghabra jata h'mai mai ne
Jagat'haww akash mere bhai ko
Unanti bi hsti h.
Maya cryng'ye akash ka kam ni in dono ka kam h..mere bche ko wapis lao...

Precap:uday manyata meeting in dusri dur khin kisi ki mariage hall me.,..

Pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG shadi ki din bhag gaye.wah wah wah loved it yaar...rofl 🀣 N yeah exactly naam jeet rakhney seh koi jeet nahi jata..n Uv ka letter 🀣 🀣 Awww poor Akash haha.it waz damn funny yaar.seriously yeh ss hum pagalo keh liye hi hai. πŸ€— N wow yaar kya precap tha man.Uv n M meeting yeppi Edited by princessnia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Awesome update. Loved it pari