manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 - Page 6

Awesome dear...loved it to the core.Edited by Swini01 - 11 years ago

Lovely update. Loving the fight n the dance.

Thx for pm

seriously its awsum...uday manyata ko haati kehay samjh aati hai lakin J kahan se haati hogai...hahahahha...but superb...pls contiune soon...luv it...

Manveer ss...
Two HEART:that BEAT as One...:-)
Part-6th
Manyata,jay nd vijay ghr aate
h,dekhte h pdos me sb ro rhe h...
Manyata'hy,rabba pta lg gya inhe
ki simran bhaag gai...
Jay'tu kyn dar ri h,
Vijay'agr yha kisi ko ye pta chl gya
hoga hmne bhaagya h to...
Manyata'ni,ni pagal ho kya chalo
yha se..
To wo simran ki maa unhe dekh
leti h wo bhaagi-2 aati h'manyata
tune meri beti ko bhgaaya h.tu
uski sbse aachi dost thi.
Br:manyata ye such h?
Jay'arey dost thi,to ye aisa kyn
kregi.
V:had krte ho papag,manyata aisa
kbi ni kregi.
Manyata'ghabrahat me'arey wo
munda jo use dekhne aaya
tha,usne use mota kh diya tha
to..to
Simran mom'to kya bolna?
Vijay'to wo bar-2 kh ri thi main
bhaag jaungi,main bhaag jaungi..
S.m'haye rabba mujhe phle ni bta
skte the tumlog.
M:royo mt aunty,ptali hoke
aajayegi.
Br'o chalo ander,ye mjak ka waqt
ni h.chalo.
Wo 3no chale jaate h.
Idhr uday drive krke gaari laata g.
Jagat'bhai,car ghr k piche khada
krde,mirror tuita h,papa
daatenge...
Un'bhana kya bnaoge?
Uday'o jagat tu car piche khadi
kr,tb tk kal k bchne ka upaaye
krta hu...
To jagat car hmesha ghr k aage
park hoti thi lekin is baari jagat ne
thodi si gap me car park krdi h..
Or jha car part hoti thi wha uday
ne ek pather uthake rkh diya..
Jagat'bhai ho gya.
Uday'suno tum dono agar papag
pucge car udhr kyn khadi ki h bol
dena ye pather pda tha,or hmein
ise htane me aalas ho rha
tha,isliye wha khadi kr di thik h.
Unanti nd jagat'ha thik h,bhai
tussi grt ho..'
3 hste h or chup chap jake so
jate h...
Br:manyata tere ko kal munde
wale dekhne aarhe h shagun
leke,taiyar rhiyo.
Manyata'kya?
Br:or is tym tu kuch serve ni
kregi nauker krege..
Mujhe kuch ni sunna..chl ja.
Manyata pair ptak k chali jati h.
Vijay'papa g aap such me 2much.
Jay'hmesha di ko naraj kr ditta
ho..ha ni to
Wo dono bi chale jate h...
Komal 2 manyata'beta aap apni
zid chod do,hoga whi jo tere papa
chahte h.
Jay'kya?hoga whi,manyata di
hmesha kuch na kuch krke rishta
tudwa deti h.
K:or hota kya h kuch ni,phr agle
din iska nya rishta aajata h...
Vijay'pr maa is baari to ldka bi
gun..
K:vijay bs,manyata papa k liye na
shi apni maa k liye hi shi..
Manyata roti h lekin wo dil pe
pather rkhkr bol deti h'thik h..
Komal khush'ye aapke hath me
chot keise lgi?
Manyata yad krti h
'wo ek poll se chot lg gai,main thik
hu..
Papag se bol dena main taiyar
rhungi..
Komal:thanku beta..wo chali jati h.,
Jay'di aap
Manyata'jay rhne de,ab ek bar
papag ki baatoin ka maan rkh
lu..wo preshan h mere liye,main
thak gai hu...papa k ld ld ke thak
gai hu..bhoot ho gya.
Wo khke chali jati h..
Vijay preshan h'ni jay bhai,hm ye
shadi ni hone denge,wo ldka gunda
h..hmne dekha h wo keise ldkiyo k
7th ched khani kr rha
tha...ni..manyata k pas ja rha hu
main.
Jay'ni vijay bhai,wo di abi preshan
hm kal smjhayenge unhe...abi ni...
In mrng
Gr bahr aata h,wo abi just soke
uthe h,or unka dhayan ni uper
dekh k chal rha h or wo jo rat ko
uday ne pather rkha tha,use
thoker lgti h unhe..
To unke pair me chot lgti h'ye kis
bttmeez ne pather rkha h or
guse se pather utha ke,piche
faikte h bhoot tej.
To car ka mirror phle hi tuita h,or
jb gr ne pather faika to wo bi car
k mirror pe lgti h wo or tuit jati h..
Jb mirror tuitne ki awaaj aati h tb
gr piche mudke dekhta h,nd
suddn uday apni shrts ki sleeves
uper krta aata h,'oye kya hua,ye
keisi awaaz thi,or wo jb dekhta
h'o teri,car ka miror tuit
gya,papag ye kya kitta?
Phr piche bhaaga-2 jagat aata h'o
teri hawww..car tod di.papag ye
kya kr diya?
Gr:oye chup kro,phle ye btao car
idhr kyn khadi h.
Uday'wo to car se pucho,phr uday
btata h ki pather htane ka man ni
kiya isliye ni htaya'
Gr:aalsi ki pudiya ho dono..
Jagat'o kamal h ab khud car ka
miror tod diya h,to bi hmpe chila
rhe ho.
Uday naugtynes se'ha ni to,glt bat
h ye,papag...hm hmesha apni glti
mante h,aap bi maano..
Gr:o mujhe jrur kam k liye jana
tha..ab keise?
Jagat:chalo dusri gaddi late h.
Uday'ha wo bdi blck wali car lenge..
Gr:oye chup kro,mujhe sham ko
jaana h,tb tk mirror lgwa k lao..
Uday jagat khush ki phr unhe
ghumne ka mauqa mil jayega...
Gr wha se chale jate h...
Uday or jagat ki hsi ka thikana ni
tha.
Akash cum'apne papa ko preshan
krne me sharm ni aati tumhein.
Uday'o,aaja,ab papag ne pather
faika h,to mirror tuit gya,or
weise bi papag k 7th sharat krne
me mja aata h.
Jagat'phr se ghumne
jayene,mirror bdlwane..chalega.
Akash'ni,main kam se aaya
hu,tum logo jeisa mst maula ni hu
main.
Uday'oye zindgi ko jeena sikh,hr
ek pal khushi se je,mja aata h.chl
bye hm chalte h...
Manyata taiyar ho ri h,uska phone
aata h,'hello,kaun?
Hello,manyata tu keisi h?main
simran
M:oye simran tu thik h...?
S:ha main thik hu,maa keisi h?
Jay vijay bi aate h.
M:teri maa ro ro ke pagal ho gai
h,or tere baap ne gunde chad diye
h..
S:haye,rabba,oye manyata mujhe
tujhse milna h..
M:ni ni aaj to
S:o plz mujhe paiso ki jrurt h,or
aaj main apne pati nal punjab
chad k ja ri hu...
M:lekin main,thik h kha milna h?
S:o wo lakhmindr gargage h
na,wha,ab jaldi aja.main phone
rkhti hu bye..
Cal cut..
Manyata jay nd vijay ko saari bat
btati h...
Vijay'tumhe jana hoga
M:ha pr keise?
Vijay manyata ki bangles box
uthata h or gira deta h.
Jay'ye kya kiya?
Vijay'bngles kharidne ke bhane
ja...or paise simran ko dediyo,or
ye le or paise bngles kharid
liyo.taki kisiko shaq na ho..
Manyata little cryng nd jay also or
wo hug krti h vijay ko'thank u
veerg'
Vijay'chalo papag se permission
lete h..
Wo jate h br k pas use btate h
problem
Br:ldke wale k saamne bina chuddi
k jana kya sochenge,wo tu thik se
ni
K:of oh yhi tym mila h kya daatne
ko,vijay ko rs.dedo,wo le ayega.
M:bangl manu phne h ya vijay ko..
Jay'ha hm leayenge.tym pe
aajayege..chinta mt kro.
Br:thik h,ye lo paise,or mehenge
(costly}or mjbut chudiya lena.
Manyata jaldi-2 'g papag chl jay'
Wo chali jati h...
Gr:oye,car kha lejaoge thik krane?
Uday'soch rhe h kisi garage me le
jaye.
Gr:hr tym mjak.main btata hu..
Jagat:jb khud btana h to btao
na,muhrt nikaloge kya?
Uday jagat nd unanti laghng...
Gr:maya g,ye aapke bache jokro
se km ni h.
M:jb aap se shadi hui thi tb pta
tha bache joker hi honge.
Again all laughng.
Gr:mtlb.
Uday'mtlb ye ki aap joker ni h ni
ho na,isliye hm h.ab garage ka
nam btao..
Gr:lakmindr garage.
Jagat'ha pta h ni btate to whi
jate..
Udhr se uday jagat bi gaddi leke
usi gragage me jaa rhe h,or
manyata jay bi simran se milne
whi jaa ri h.
Precap:3rd meeting uday
manyata..
Pari

🤣 🤣 🤣 I love it, I love it, I love it yaar.😆

Haila Pari, I just realized that I havent commented on this ss at all,🤔. So sorry girl,not for not commenting, but for  reading those updates and laughing like hell on Manveers nok-jok and still not commenting and saying  a thankyou for giving us such good update. U can really Spank me for that and being a real lazzy ass, but loved the chapter.Thankyou for such a wonderfull update👏

again nyc one...but no manveer not done sweets...plzzz yeh masti on rakhte hoay maneer ka romance bhi daloo...

pari dear sorry i cant comment

@jazz
mere dimag ki chod khali dimag shaitan ka hota h,isliye ideas lane pdhte h.

Bt 9 aisa mt bol ki ye tera last cmnt h,apne cel se kiya kr na..cmnt.
Aache log pc use ni krte jeise main.lo.
Plz

pari

Manveer ss...
Two HEART:that BEAT as One...:-)
Part-7th

Manyata jay phuchte h garage...wha simran bi khadi h...apne pati k 7th...

Simran manyata or jay se gle milti h.
S:maa,thik to h.mujhe unki bhoot yad aa ri h.
Manyata'to chl ghr.
S:arey pagal h kya?papag jan se mardenge.
Manyata guse me'bhaag kyn ri h,shadi to tune krli,ab chup chap apne pati k 7th ghr jake maafi maang le..'

S:ni,manyata abki to mujhe bandh k rum me bnd krdenge..
Jay'to ja na bhaag.hmein kyn bulaya h?
Simran husbnd'hmein aapki hlp chahiye'
Manyata'arey whi krne to aai hu,bol jaldi,ghr jaldi jana h mujhe...
S:mujhe kuch paise chahiye or idhr se hmein bahr station tk phucha de...
Manyata'dekh paise chahiye wo main leke aai hu,bhaagau keise?
Jay'spiderman to h ni hm.
Manyata'oye jay spiderman to kbi bn bi ni skte..
S:of oh,ye spider khelna bnd kro,plz meri hlp kro..
S.h:khin hmare bhaagne se phle iske papag ne pkd liya to aafat ho jayegi...
Manyata'oye koi aafat ni hogi,main phr se bhaga dungi..
Jay nd manyata litle laughng
S:is ldki ko koi tnsn ni h,kbi koi zindgi me ayengena tb pta chlega...
Manyata'chl chup kr main apni shadi todti hu to uska mtlb ye ni main bhaag jau,ruk kuch sochti hu..,

Then tb uday jagat apni car leke aate h..
Uday drive krta h,or jagat ekdum se bahr dekhta h to manyata-jay ko dekhta h.
Jagat'o teri bhai baahr dekh mausum bda pyar wala h.
Uday'baahr kya?chup wo phr khta h'mausum pyar ni rangbirnga ho gya h...
Jagat'o ha shi bola,red pink mausum ho rha h..
Jagat'lekin ye green rang wali kaun h.?
Uday'ye To simran lg ri h.
Dono 7th bolte h,o teri simran..
Jagat'chl phr se mauqa lg gya.chl.
Uday drive kr rha h,or wo car turn krta h,or manyata ko ni uske hatho ko dekh rha,to hatho pe patti bndhi h...

Or wo manyata ka troble face dekhta h'wo simran se baatein kr ri h'
Uday'oye jagat rhne de,bhoot preshan krdiya..ab ni.
Jagat'chl bhai tu kuch soch k hi bol rha h'.chal gaddi thik kra..

Lekin uday manyata ko dekhta h,wo jyada preshaan lg ri thi..
Uday'jagat chl mirchi mam se na shi simran se milte h.chal...
Jagat cnfusd'bhai,ye kya sikke ki trh bdal rha h..chl..main to taiyar hu...

Uday style se car ko rokta h,nd wo dono utrte h.
Uday car ko hit krta h oye lakhmindr car ka mirror lga jaldi..wo janbhujh k tej bolta h.
Jagat use bi tej bolta h'o jaldi lga diyo..
Tb jay ekdum se dekhti h'o teri di wo gunde phr se mil gye..
Manyata'kaun?hi,rabba..ye jb dekho khin bi phuch jate h..
Jagat'oye simran g,tusi yha hmse milne aaye ho..
Simran'o g uday g keise h aap?thanku g aapne shadi ni ki..wrna.
To uday-jagat aate h
Uday'o koi ni,or weise bi shadi maine kha todi h,tudwane wali to ye h.
Or jagat jay ko preshan krta h'or shoniye,ki hal h?kitna mis kiya mujhe.
Jay'jyada na hero mt bna kr,sakal dekhi h apni,ullu ki trh lgte ho...
Jagat'tbi main soch rha hu baba g ne tumse kyn milaya mujhe..

Manyata'tujhe koi or kam ni h,muh utha k hmare piche aajate ho...
Uday'kya pta bhagwan g ko hmari tunning dekhne me mja aata ho...
Manyata'ye hmesha hste kyn rhte h,pagal ho kya?
Uday'tum bi km pagal ni ho,isliye ulti sidhi hrqate krti ho.

Simran'idhr tum ldne aaye ho ya meri problem solve krne...

Uday'oye simran g aap yha,or bhai kudi tere liye ghr se bhaagi h...
S.h:main bi to bhaaga hu..

Manyata'oye simran dekh tu ye paise pkad mujhe ghr tym pe phuchna h.
Jagat'weise bhai mera nam ullu,or iska nam ulli(jay)thik h na.or bhai tune nam rkha ya ni.
Uday laghng-pagla pagli..

Manyata'hr tym mjak,apna kam kro jo krne aye ho.
Uday'hm to simran se milne aye h.
S:o,manyata ye to km paise h.
Manyata ko jo vijay bhai ne paise diye the bangles k liye,wo bi simran ko dedeti h'ye le ye rkh le.
Jay'di pr ye paise to bngl..
Suddn manyata jay ka hath pkad leti h,or ishaara krti h'kuch mt bol..
Jay chup.
Or uday ne ye dekh liya tha ki manyata jay ko chup kra ri h.
Simran manyata ko hug krleti h,o thanku manyata tu kuch bi kr skti h.'thanku


Uday-jagat manyata ko dekhte h..
Jagat emotinaly'bdi hlpful h yar...
Uday'such me.'simran bst of luck...
Manyata'chl simran main chalti hu,mujhe tym pe phuchna h..chl jay...
Manyata chali jati h.
Jay jati h to simran jay ko pkad k hug krleti h'jay thanku tune bh bhoot hlp ki,manyata ka khayal rkhiyo aaj se phle manyata ko preshan hote huye ni dekha...
Jay'preshan to hogi na wo,
Aaj use ldke wale dekhne aane wale h..
Ek dum se phr uday thoda sad ho jata h,or manyata ki trf dekhta h wo preshan khadi h...

Phr jay saari bat btati h'ab pta ni bngles,of oh simran tu ja.khush rh..

Jay bhaag k manyata k pas jati h'di saare paise kyn.
Manyata'use jrurt h jay,chal hm koi bahana krde'

Simran'o g,manyata ko main paise deke aati hu,main usko dukh ni de skti.
Uday'ni simran tum rhne do use bngles mil jayegi..ye tum or paise lo.or jaldi jao yha se.
Simran uday ko bh hug krleti h'o thank u g,manyata ki hlp jrur krdena.'bye shy.
Jagat'bye..bhai kya krne ki soch rha h.
Uday'chl car nikal,market chl jaldi...
Jagat jaldi se car nikala h
Lakmindr:oye,abi gaddi to bni ni h.
Uday'o paag bs 10min.me aate h'jagat tu indono ko rok k rkh,main tbtk aata hu..
Jagat'in dono ko,bhai pink wali to sambhal jayegi,ye red wali ko to main sambhal ni pauga.
Uday'oye mere liye aaj sambhal le..
Jagat'tere liye kuch bi,chl ja lekin jaldi aajaiyo.
Uday chla jata h...

Jagat jata h,unke pas..
Jay'dekh ab to tera bhai bi ni h,preshan kiya na to pkad k tod dungi.
Manyata'or koi kam ni h tujhe,chup chap chla ja wrna aisa huliya bigaadu gi ki sb shocked...
Jagat'main taiyar hu,phle tu mujhe tod k dikha or phr tum mujhe bigaad k dikha...

Br:ldke wale phuchne wale h,or manyata ka koi ata pta ni h.
K:o aajaiyegi.
Br:agr is baari isne koi game khela h to bs iski kheir ni h..
Wo bhut gusse me hote h...

Manyata'chl yha se jay,ye pagal h pura khaandan pagal h.
Jagat'ni khaandan me main mera bhai or choti,maa hm 4 thik h,,or pura khaandan pagl h..
Jay'tu na..chl di.ye jagat'ni,bhai se milke jana..wrna wo mujhe pitege..
Manyata guse se'rasta chod mera,wrna us pagal se to bad me pietga main phle pit dungi'
Tbi ek dum se uday aajata h.
Jagat'o g bhai aagya..
To uday apne hath me ek box leke aata h,polythin me h...

Simran bi phr bhaagi-2 aati h..
'o g hmein station tk chodo,wrna gunde mar dalenge.
M:tu abi tk gai ni.
S:keise jaye,hr jagah gunde h.
Uday'jake hmari gaddi me beitho,hm chod denge.
Jagat'oye,bhai lekin
Uday manyata ko dekhata h'jagat jo kha h wo kr.
J:g,chliye...
Jay bi simran ko car k pas chodne jati h.
Manyata bi jati h,tbi uday wo polythin manyata k aage lata h'ye tumhara h..
M:ye mera ni h,ye
Uday uske hath me wo box rkhta h'ye tumhara hi h,maine kha na'..
Wo bolke chala jata h...
Or simran ko leke chale jate h...

Or idhr manyata wo box khol k dekhti h usme bngles h..
Manyata'use keise jay'wo main simran ko bta ri thi,to usne bi..
Di chlna,apni shadi ka gft smjh le...chl jaldi Jagat'kya bat h lal mirchi ne nal chudiya lene gye si,mujhe bi btate pink wali k liye manga leta.'
Uday'use problem thi,ha pink wali ko bura lga hoga..chl koi ni nxt tym de denge.'
Jagat'bnane de muh,hmesha dhamki deti h tod dungi.
Uday'hm wait krte h ki ab uthayegi..uthate hi ni h...
Both laghng...

Manyata k ghr ldke wale aa gye h,
Ldke ki maa'o kudi nu bulao.g.
K:g wo abi taiyar ho ri h..
Sb dre h preshan h...
Vijay'manyata kha ho tum,main ni chahta ki tum aao,pr pagag ki izzat ka sawal h..

Or udhr jay or manyata window k thru thru rum me aa gai h...
Vijay rum me hi h.

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