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The Meeting - OS(Ansh + Bhago)

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged

Hey guys I just wrote a new OS on Ansh meeting with Bhago.I planned to write it almost very randomyly after last nite epi.So pls bear with the mistakes.

Backdrop of the scene
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Dadisa after returning from anandi's home informs her about her mother's illness. Anandi is left shocked to hear about her mother's state and expresses her will to meet her as soon as possible. Dadisa and Bhairon with the intention of making her ready for marriage, readily agree to take her to her home the very next day only. Anandi reaches her home and is left shaken to see Bhagwati in the miserable state.

Hope you all like my effort guys.

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"aisa kyun kia aapne ma?" anandi sighed as hot tears rolled down her cheeks.
 
"Kyun mujhe itna paraya kar diya ki apne dard mein bhi shamil karna zaroori na samjha?? Kya ab main aapki koi nahin lagti?Beti ko sasre bhej dia to us se saare rishte toot gaye aapke??"
 
"na lado!!ye kaisi baat kare hai tu?Kya ek ma kabhi apni beti ko paraya kar sake hai bhala?"
 
"to phir mujhe kyun nahin bataya ma? kyun nahin kaha ki lado mujhe teri zaroorat hai…mere paas wapas aa ja…kyun aise akele dard sehti rahi??"
 
"lado teri ma hoon main…tujhe kabhi dukh mein na dekh sakoon!…aur kya kismat ne tere liye kam dukh chodo the jo main ek aur dard teri kismat se baandh deti"
 
"ye tum kaisi baatein kar rahi ho ma?yaad hai jab bachpan mein main beemar padhti thi to tum kaise raat raat bhar jaag kar mera dhyaan rakhti thi!Agar mata pita apne bachon ki salamati ke liye…unki sehat ke liye saari saari raat jag sakte hain…to kya bachon ko itna bhi haq nahin ki woh unki peedha mein unke saath rahe!"
 
Bhago had no answers for Anandi's questions. Only she knew how she had spent all those years without her in constant worry of her daughter's future. Bhago's throat gets choked listening to anandi's words. She doesn't understand what to say and just hugs anandi with a fit of a weep.
 
"mane maaf karde lado..maaf karde apni ma ko..maaf karde tujhe apne aap se itna door rakhne ke liye"
 
As bhago hugs her, anandi feels an excruciating pain squash all her body parts into a million pieces. Something seemed like exploding within her.
 
"tumne to mujhse chupaya hi ma…par bapu? Unho ne bhi mujhe sach nai bataya!!Mujhe nai bataya ki tumhari tabeyiat itni kharab hai"
 
Anandi's mention about her father suddenly make bhago realize something and she breaks the hug.
 
"lado tere bapu thodi der ke liye gaon se bahar gaye the…unhone kaha tha ki 2 baje tak aa jayenge. Par ab to sham ke 5 baj gaye.ab tak aaye na woh"
Anandi is taken aback by bhago's words. She felt a sense of worry bugging her.
 
"arrey samdhan sa aapne pehle kyun na bataya. Bhairon pehle hi chala jata unhein dhoondhne"
Dadisa said to bhago in a worried tone.
 
"aap chinta mat keejiye…main abhi jaata hoon..bas aap mujhe bata deejiye ki khajan singh ji kaunse gaon gaye hain" bhairon spoke in a go.
 
"Govindgarh"
 
"Govindgarh..theek hai main abhi jata hoon..aap sab chinta mat keejiye" saying so bhairon moves out. As soon as he opens the door he sees khajan singh standing in front of him. Bhairon is shocked to see his state. Khajan singh had a bandage around his head and his clothes were all stained with blood. Bhago, anandi and dadisa too are left shocked to see him like this. Anandi runs to khajan singh and hugs him tightly.
 
"bapu aap theek to hain na!!" anandi wept a heave a sigh.
 
"lado tu kab aayi? pata hai tujhe dekhne ke liye mari aankhein taras gayi thi.Lagta tha jaise pata nahin jeevan mein apni lado ko dobara dekh bhi paunga ya nahin"
 
"aisa mat kahiye bapu…pls aisa mat kahiye" anandi said as a sob choked her throat.
 
Now Both Anandi and khajan singh kept on weeping for the next few seconds until bhairon's word's break the otherwise silent air in the room.
 
"par khajan singh ji ye sab hua kaise?"
 
"lambi kahani hai samdhi sa.Bas ye samajh leejiye agar aaj mata rani ne apne farishte ko na bheja hota to main aap sabke saamne zinda na hota"
 
Anandi is shocked to hear his words.
 
"kya?ye aap kya kah rahe hain bapu?aur kis farishte ki baat kar rahe hain?"
 
"unki-"Khajan singh said looking towards the door. Everyone look at the door and all are surprised to see the person standing there. Its Shiv!
 
"collector sahib!!" Anandi spoke as her jaw dropped.
 
Shiv too is equally surprised to see anandi and the singh family there.
 
"Inhone hi maari jaan bachai hai  ado. Main to govindgarh se laut raha tha par tabhi maine dekha ki ek mandir mein ek choti si ladki ka bal-vivah ho raha tha. Yeh dekh kar mujhse raha na gaya.Isliye main bheetar chala gaya us ladki ke ma bapu ko samjhane ki woh apni lado ke saath itna bada anyay na karen. Par un logon ne meri ek na suni aur ulta mujhe par hi waar karne lage. Tabhi pata nahin kahan se inhon ne aake mujhe un gundon se bacha liya. Mujhe aspatal lekar gaye aur ghar tak bhi choda"
 
As khajan singh said those words…Anandi felt all her anger and coldness towards Shiv melting away. Once again he justified that whatever dadisa and bapusa said about him was nothing wrong or exaggerated. It was all true. A drop of tear silently escaped anandi's eye as she moved closer to Shiv.
 
"main nahin janti collector sahib ki kitni baar main aapse ye kahungi…lekin ek baar phir bahut bahut shukriya karna chahti hoon aapka. Agar aaj aap na hote to pata nahin mere bapu ke saath kya ho jata! Thanyou collector sahib..thankuou so much" anandi spoke with folded hands in front of Shiv. She couldn't think of any other way to express her gratitude towards him.
 
Shiv moves his hands closer to hers to stop her from doing this…but controls himself as soon as he realizes that he is about to touch her.
 
"Plss anandi ji aapko ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.Maine kuch bhi nahin kiya.Maine to bas unka saath diya jo bina apni jaan ki parwah kiye kisi aur ko ek galat kaam karne se rokne ja rah the" Shiv's words filled dadisa's heart with pride as if she had proved to anandi's parents that her choice for anandi is the best.
 
"Bahut bahut shukriya aapka shiv jo aapne khajan singh ji ko itni badi museebat se bachaya" bhairon said to Shiv with gratefulness in his eyes.
 
"Pls bhairon singh ji mujhe aur sharminda mat keejiye…maine aisa kuch nahin kiya."
 
"Par samdhisa aap inhein jaante hain kya??"Khajan singh said in a trice to show off to anandi as if he didn't know Shiv. Though he had already recognized him as the same man in the photo but he showed off in front of anandi as if he didn't know him. Bhairon, dadisa and bhago too understood his intentions and acted as if they didn't know anything.
 
"haan khajan singh ji ye hamare jetsar ke collector hain…Shivraj Shekhar ji…aur Shiv ye anandi ke bapu hain khajan singh ji"as bhairon introduced them to each other Shiv moved closer to khajan singh and touched his feet. Khajan singh blessed Shiv with a mighty smile on his face.
 
Only then Shiv notices bhago who had been keeping unwell and looked very sick.
 
"Shiv ye anandi ki ma hain…bhagwati ji"bhairon did the introduction again.
 
As bhairon introduced her to Shiv, Shiv moved closer to her and touched her feet and greated her with a namastey.
 
"maaf kijiyega agar mujhe pata hota ki aapki tabeyiat theek nahin to main yahan aakar aap sabko kabhi pareshan naa karta"
 
"ye aap kaisi baat karo collector sahib…aapne to hum par itna bada ehsaan kiyo hai.Dadisa ne bataya ki kaise pehle bhi kai baar aapne mari lado ki jaan bachayi.Maafi to humko aapse mangani chahiye ki humari wajah se aapko itni baar taqleef hui"
 
Shiv felt embarrassed at bhagwati's words.
 
"Pls aap aisa mat kahiye…maine kuch bhi nahin kiya.Jahan tak jaan bachane ki baat hai to maine kisi ki jaan nahin bachai…maine to sahi aur sache logon ka saath diya.Aaj aapko aur khajan singh ji ko dekhkar mujhe samajh mein aa gaya ki anandi ji aisi kyun hain.Kaise woh itni nidar aur sahsi hain ki doosron ke liye bina apni jaan ki parwah kiye itna kuch kar jati hain.Kyunki shayad unhein aap jaise mata-pita ki parwarish mili hai…jo bina khud ke bare mein soche, galat ka virodh karte hain"
 
Hearing his sensible and kind words bhago felt really good about shiv said. Internally she had understood that only a humble, respectful and a good-hearted person can say like this. Bhago had already started seeing Shiv as her future son-in-law.
 
"par shiv aap govindgarh mein kaise…koi kaam tha kya?"bhairon asked Shiv.
 
"woh bhairon singh ji actually govindgarh mein humara ek purana ghar aur farmhouse hai…usi ke silsile mein kuch kaam tha"
 
"phir to aap thak gaye honge…kuch der yahin ruk jaiye collector sahib. Hamare saath khaana kha lijiye…hum sabko bahut achcha lagega" khajan singh requested shiv with a different kind of love in his tone. He had already started seeing him like family.
 
"nahin nahin…plss aap sab khaiye…mujhe ab nikalna chahiye.aap apna khayal rakhiyega"
 
"collector sahib ruk jaiye na…agar aap rukenge to humein achcha lagega…aur agar aap bina kuch khaye chale gaye to hameshan ke liye man mein ye baat rah jayegi ki humnein us insaan ka bhi dhyaan na rakha jisne itni baar hamari madat ki" now bhago too requested Shiv to stay for lunch.
 
"shiv beta ab anandi ke ma-bapu itna kah rahe hain to ruk ja na"
 
"dadiji main zaroor ruk jata par mujhe ghar par kuch kaam hai…mera jana bahut zaroori hai" Shiv lied as he didn't want to bother anandi by constantly being around her.He somewhere knew that Anandi didn't like him to be a part of his personal matters.
 
"collector sahib agar aap rukenge to sabko achcha lagega"anandi said looking down as she saw shiv turning towards the door.
 
This time Shiv couldn't refuse. He stopped at the doorway and turned around. He had to stay. Everyone felt relieved seeing that he changed his decision.
 
"anandi beta tu khana laga main khajan singh ji ko bheetar lekar chalta hoon" bhairon said to anandi and both of them left the room.
 
"aiye collector sahib" anandi welcomed Shiv towards the dining area.
 
Shiv nodded to anandi. Though he still felt quite awkward agreeing for having lunch at anandi's place but he couldn't refuse as well as everyone requested him so heartily.
 
As Shiv was about to move, his arm slightly hit against the wall and he suddenly felt a stabbing pain grip his entire arm and shoulder. Anandi turned around hearing his wince. He stood at his place holding his arm in pain trying to analyze what happened.
 
"kya hua chora?"dadisa turned to Shiv in a worried tone.
 
"kuch nahin dadiji shayad woh un gundon se ladte hue haath mein sprain aa gaya hai…par aap chinta mat keejiye main theek hoon"
 
Dadisa just wanted to scold shiv for being so careless about himself. He went to the hospital but didn't get his own injury treated! But she controlled her urge and tried to act indifferent.
 
"acho to theek hai…samdhan sa main haath mun dho leti hoon…anandi tu bhi aja chori, khana paros de sabko" dadisa spoke instantly and left the room in a jiffy. She wanted to leave no space for anandi for not attending to Shiv and asking someone else to do that.
 
Now only bhago and anandi were present in the room with Shiv. He felt really uncomfortable being there like that. In order to avoid anandi's gaze he looked down at his wound that had turned blackish-blue.
 
Anandi too noticed his injury. And bhago noticed Anandi. Bhago could easily see a sense of genuine concern flickering from anandi's eyes as anandi constantly kept on looking at Shiv checking his wound. A lil smile touched bhago's lips seeing her daughter like that. Finally anandi was moving on from jagiya…she was finally thinking about someone else.
 
"lado" bhago jerked anandi slightly "tu jaakar madat karde na…lage ki gehri chot lagi hai…bahut dard ho raha hoga"
 
Anandi couldn't understand what to do. She somewhere understood that her mom was right. Shiv must be in pain and she ought to help him for what all he has done for her and her family. And obviously her mom being unaware of the shaadi episode wasn't saying all this bcoz she too looked for an excuse to bring her closer to Shiv rather she really meant that Anandi should help him out.
 
Now even bhago acted as if she has gone fast asleep and wasn't seeing them get close.
 
So anandi takes out the first-air box from the cupboard and moves closer to Shiv. She felt really uncomfortable saying all this.
 
"collector sahib main madat kar deti hoon" anandi said trying to avoid eye-contact.
 
"its ok anandi ji main khud kar lunga"
 
"aap nahin kar payenge…left hand se kaise bandage baandhenge? Laiye main kar deti hoon"
 
Shiv didn't protest much. Atleast he was relieved that her mother was asleep now.
 
Anandi softly moves his arm towards her to get a better look of his wound trying to cause minimum pain to him. She sees that a spot on his arm had become all blackish. It seemed like a puncture wound that didn't cause any bleeding but had become blue-black. Anandi took the balm from the first aid box and massaged the spot gently. Shiv looked at her in sheer awe as if the pain didn't bother him any longer.
 
"abhi thoda sa jalega par baad mein bilkul theek hojayega" anandi ensured him but he hardly registered any words. He was all smitten seeing the care and concern in her eyes, feeling the warmth of her touch and the tenderness of her tone.
 
After applying the balm anandi carefully tied a clean crape bandage on his arm and gave him a pain-killer.
 
"thnks anandi ji" Shiv spoke with sigh.
 
Anandi felt blood rushing to her cheeks as the air felt really heated up. She was all alone with him except for her mother who was fast asleep. Anandi quickly nodded to him and walked out. Shiv too followed her only to be stopped by bhago who hadn't slept.
 
"collector sahib"
 
Shiv was taken aback.
 
"OMG anandi's mom hadn't slept! She saw all that! Did she see me when anandi ji was doing that massage. Oh gosh what would she think about me!!That I am such a flirt! U are such a stupid fellow shivraj shekhar" Shiv cursed himself within realizing the blunder he had made.
 
He slowly walked towards bhago thinking what next question she might bombard him with!
 
"aapse ek baat poochna chahti thi"bhago spoke in a shrill but firm tone.
 
Shiv's heart skipped a few beats and cold sweat ran below his neck.
 
"jee poochiye na"
 
"dekho beta humse koi baat chupi na hai.Majisa ne humein sab bata diyo ki kaise unhon ne aap se hamari lado ke rishte ki baat ki aur aap taiyar bhi ho gaye.Aur sachi kahoon to main aapki abhari hoon ki aapne mari chori ke liye itna socha.Par kya karun chori ki ma hoon na…itni asaani se dil ko tasalli na de sakun. To socha ki ek baar aapse baat kar loon"
 
As Shiv heard those words his fear eased a bit. He had understood what she wanted to ask. Shiv felt more confident and resolved towards his love for Anandi.
 
"aap jo bhi poochna chahein mujhse pooch sakte hain"
 
"to theek hai…zyaada samay na lungi aapka.Bas ye hi poochna chahun ki aap kahe byaah karna chaho mari chori se.Aapko to na jane kitni achi, padhi likhi aur woh bhi kunwari ladkiyan mil javengi.Mari lado se kahi zyaada achi.Phir aap usi se byaah kyun karna chaho?"
 
Shiv heard bhago in rapt attention absorbing each and every word and the emotions behind them. He introspected himself for all those questions and came up with the most genuine answers he got from his heart.
 
"main samajh sakta hoon ki ek ma hone ke naate aap anandi ji ki kitni chinta karti hain.Aur isiliye shayad aapko aisa lag raha hai ki main unse shaadi kyun karna chahunga jabki mujhe koi aur ladki bhi mil sakti hai.Par sach to ye hai ki shayad anandi ji se shaadi karna unki nahin meri khush kismati hogi.Kyunki anandi ji us har ladki se alag hain jo shayad mujhse shaadi karna chahe.Kyunki anandi ji who hain jinse main shaddi karna chahta hoon.Anandi ji woh hain jiska sapna maine hamesha se dekha tha.Jaisa jeevan saathi maine hamesha se chaha tha.Ek aisi ladki jise zindagi ne na jaane kitni thokarein di par uske ander jeene ka utsah kabhi kam nahin hua.Jaane –anjaane mein unke parivaar aur samaj ne unhein ek kuprata ka shikar hone par majboor kar diya par us parivar ke liye unka pyaar aur samman kabhi kam nahin hua.Unhone apne dil mein kisi ke liye bhi zara si bhi kadwahat nahin aane di.Agar koi bhi unki jagah hota to ab tak shayad bikhar jata.Par anandi ji nahin bikhri.Woh aage badhi…aur akele nahin balki sabko saath lekar badhi.Jise samaj ne itne dukh diye usne usi samaj ke liye aise aise kaam kiye ki woh samaj chah kar bhi uska ehsaan nahin chukka sakta. Sach kahoon to unke jaisi jeevan saathi paana mere liye garv ki baat hogi…kyunki anandi ji itni sahasi hain ki shayad hi unhein kisi ke sahare ki zaroorat ho par mujhe unhi ki jaisi saathi ki zaroorat hai…ek aisi saathi jo meri hark hush iaur taqleef mein mera saath de sake…jiska saath main har lamhe mein dena chahoon…jisko hamesha apne saath dekhna chahoon…apne aaj mein aur aane wale har kal mein"
 
A silent tear escaped bhago's eye as she heard those words. Though she knew that any guy could say things like these but Shiv had a stirring genuineness in his eyes which no one could deny. Bhago was finally convinced that anandi has found herself a true companion and this time for a lifetime. So she lifted her hand and softly caressed Shiv's face with blessings in her eyes.
 
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Brilliant.. just awesome yaar... 

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
bechara...bhago was not sleepingLOL...

its very nice mallika

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Thats simply superb mallika...wish it could happen in the show too...Smile
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:04am | IP Logged
Mallika - Bal vivah again?ROFLROFLROFL  Other than that - it was Great.

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
awesome!! 
I hope they show this in the show as wel!LLL!!


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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Mallika awesome OSClapClap 
Me too hope to see this in BVBig smile

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Good one Mallika !

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