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New OS: The Confession (Page 4)

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Farriii, this was sooo beaautifulll! Hug
I looovvveddd it!!! So you wrote something different this time, eh? Loved it seriously!Big smile
Loved how Khushi questioned him about his medicines! Heheheh funny! ROFL


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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Tht was really awesome! Tfs

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Awww that was amazing

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
perfect . love it

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Beautiful! Loved it!

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS <3

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:26am | IP Logged
"Oh! Did you take your medicines this afternoon?" Khushi asked thinking maybe losing his head was one of the conditions of not taking his pills on time.

"What? Of course, I did!" He said, before it dawned on him what Khushi might be thinking and he quickly added, "And no Khushi, missing a dose of diabetic tablets does not make a person sit in the closet if thats what you're thinking." He finished, smiling a crooked smile.


So beautifully written and so easily imaginable too. Just hope the CVs do a good enough job abt the scene at least something like u have written. this was so sweet and the above lines from ur OS were the best part. I just laughed after reading those. Good job!Clap Clap Clap Clap

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweet_Ashum

Originally posted by SmileyStar

Originally posted by Sweet_Ashum

Gahhh!
Did I ever tell you I hate you? No?
UgHHH!
I Hattte you!!!!!

I wasnt able to connect the net in the first place, I panicked thinking about evryone's reactions, then I started thinking about the computer repairwala, then I was thinking about his fees, the Allah ta'ala better knows why ur thought popped up in my mind, n I started thinking about the comments I wrote on ur OS n diary, n that u din reply n what ur reply would be n then I msged my sister asking her what do I do...she tried helping me between her lectures...poor she...she's doing her M.Tech n is in 2nd year

Allah ta'ala helped me n net got connected...I log in n what do I see?
Fari madam has written an OS n gotten 7 comments already
I quickly resd hoping to get a place on 1st page n BAM!!!!
I inaugrated the 2nd page

Grrr!!! I sooo hate you

Coming to the OS
It was so beautiful n touching!
Esp the way Arnav confessed
Hope he reads this n get tutorials rather than from "lowe" guru NKLOL
I've always marvelled at your ability to string in words together, Masha Allah n I say again I wished I too could do it. Coz when I sit to write no dialogues pop up in my head
I have to rack my brains to put a piece together
Brilliant OS sista!
Hate youROFL

P.S: BLOOPER!
I remembered that you never told you what
It suppose it should be you never told me what


First of all, your comment cracked me up big time ROFL Allah Ta'ala helped you alot in logging on to the forums, huh? ROFL

Awww it sucks you aren't on the first page but Allah Ta'ala ki marzi LOL Awww you like my dialogues? I think they're so fazol ROFL But yeah, dialogues come easily to me but the describing part doesn't. Tongue

And your P.S has me completely confused?! What is it? Huh? *scratching her head and thinking* Tell me quickly! Tell tell, bolo bolo! LOL

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Of course! Allah ta'ala is the only one who helps me

n the PS is a blooper from ur post
Check the 1st line n the line under it according to me should be the one
Mistakiya ho gaya Fari se


Ohhh Thank Youuu sooo much for pointing it out Wink Yes stupid fari se stupid se mistake ho gae LOL Ran off and corrected it Wink

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