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Sacred tie of hearts Part 3 Pg 17 Part 4 Thursday (Page 11)

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 1:17am | IP Logged
you got everything to make a good story,  map out a realy intreasting back story as this will need one. why khushi left, how she got pregnant, and what is happining in the present and what will happen in the furture, will she meet Arnav, will he come to know about the child. and how. around these simple questions you can weave a wonderful story.
 
i like it so far, bring on the next chapter

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 1:18am | IP Logged
The beginning of the story got me hooked.
Want to see where you take this and how Arnav finally gets to meet Khushi and their child...

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annab Goldie
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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 4:11am | IP Logged
nice concept..im already hooked.pls continue soon and pm me..thanx..

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Khushi dreams of Arnav, and vice versa?
An Amazing conceptClap

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Really liked the concept n yur writing.. Plz continue...

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Very intriguing. Want to know who called out to Khushi.
Arnav still dreams of Khushi is good to know.
Khushi being calm and quiet is making me curious as to know what happened between them. 
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for friday.

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
wow super start continue...Smile

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
What got me is the unconditional love she feels and accepts and yet walked away from.  That is a facet of Khushi that I would love to see.  

How did the happy, chirpy girl who lives for her family fall in love so hard that she is in her current condition.  why did she not stay and fight for her love?  What was holding her back?

this really has the makings of a fantastic story.  It could be explored in so many directions.

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