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Arnav's Open Letter to Khushi part4 (Page 3)

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vasiraju

Then you came again to me, yes to me!
you wanted to leave, I wanted you to stay
I longed to touch you once
I held your dupatta, 
to held you close
The moment freezed when u came closer 
Your fragrance
Your coyness
I was engulfed in a trance
I wanted to touch you once...I threw a challenge...but that was fake
It was just to touch you to feel you once sake
The smell of you made me kiss you,
I wanted you to stay
To kiss me back
But you ran away from me,
I don't know why
But it made me angry
as if you don't wanna play the bet
I wanted you to touch me once
with your beautiful lips

Sul Mind blowing ,supereb ,awesome ...i was totally in a dream world of Arhi by reading the above.
 
excellent Hug Hug Clap Clap..
 
i am very proud to have so many intellegent friends here at Forum ..really i am so happy to see your post sul ..i  have no words..keep it up ..and want more such attempts From you Tongue

Thnks a lot vasi!!

do read 1st 3 parts also..this is a continuation post actually

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bs_si

Awww...AP its so heart warming and touching Star

Absolutely loved it Clap

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RiyaDutta

WOW Sul beautiful Clap
 
 
Out standingStar loved itEmbarrassed

thnks riya!!Embarrassed
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 4:47am | IP Logged
I LOVE YOU SUL ... 


What a concept & what amazingly well written words ... i read all the 4 parts together .. & it just touched my heart .. 
you just recreated the magic of Arhi .. in the most simplest of words .. you just brought to life the whole saga called Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon ..

Everytime the words Hate was used by you here ... the reader could feel the depth of love ... the depth of passion . the depth of angst ...

Sul Stunning ... mesmerizing ... captivating ... & downright pleasure read.

You know i have always been a great FAN of Geet's the TVserial .. & that is what attracted me to IPK ... my fav scene in Geet ... in fact probably on all the TV i have watched is the scene where Maan writes Geet a letter .. & she reads it & imagines him ...

If that was my fav scene on TV ... this is now my FAV read ever on IPK ... Thank you for this ... 

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by redwine1

I LOVE YOU SUL ... 


What a concept & what amazingly well written words ... i read all the 4 parts together .. & it just touched my heart .. 
you just recreated the magic of Arhi .. in the most simplest of words .. you just brought to life the whole saga called Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon ..

Everytime the words Hate was used by you here ... the reader could feel the depth of love ... the depth of passion . the depth of angst ...

Sul Stunning ... mesmerizing ... captivating ... & downright pleasure read.

You know i have always been a great FAN of Geet's the TVserial .. & that is what attracted me to IPK ... my fav scene in Geet ... in fact probably on all the TV i have watched is the scene where Maan writes Geet a letter .. & she reads it & imagines him ...

If that was my fav scene on TV ... this is now my FAV read ever on IPK ... Thank you for this ... 

Thnks a ton ruby for ur appreciation post!!

It really made my day, that u find it best read!!!

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:06am | IP Logged
awsome poem..well written

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Sul that was just awesome ... Beautiful portrayal of emotions ... Just touched my heart and moved me... Loved it to bits:)))
keep writing!

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
That's so beautifully written ... have read the first three parts too ... Star

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