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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Arijit- ...please continue...very good build -up of suspense...

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Part 4
seeing this the writer screamed in fear,"bachaao, help me, save me from this freak of a woman!" that was the last straw for mata kali, she roared and quickly got close to him and screamed," HOW DARE YOU!" and moved her sword in a deadly ark to cut his neck, he dodged this fatal blow , only the headstand of the bed was damaged. He got up from the bed and tried to escape through the open door but veerbhadra caught him by the neck and slammed him on the table. The table got broken up by the force of the slam, the papers scattered up on the miraculasly the fragments of the broken pens he used did not harm him, because he mised them by the inches. He was still unharmed. Veerbhadra screamed and tried to kill him by stabing the sword towards his neck, he dodged it too and the sword got stuck in the floor, he stood up and got out of his bedroom which was turned into an apearent warzone. Maa kali and veerbhadra followed him outside towards the drawing room.
To be continiued

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Hope they get hold of him and ask for an explanation for what he is writing...

Do continue...

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Posted: 14 March 2013 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Hope Maa Kali takes.. Chun Chun ke Badla.. for whatever he has written so far...!! 

Very nice... Do continue...!!

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Posted: 15 March 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
Continue Arijit Kaali and veerbhadra after the poor writer talk about his own figment of imagination coming true right in front of him. LOL

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Part 5
the writer stumbled on a stool and fell again, this time it was kali who tried to strike him with her sword, she missed again. This time the writer got up and sat on his knee and put his hands togather and spoke with a trembling voice,"maa, forgive me for not recognising you earliear. Now i know who you are, you are kali, the slayer of chanda, munda, raktaveej, daruk and many more demons, the destuctive nature of jaganmata adishakti mahamaya." hearing this praise the anger of maa kali lessens a little bit, but it was still there in her voice,"if you truely know about me and other roops of shakti then why did you help the makers of your show dkdm to defame parvati by potraying her as a typical nagging wife who has to be constantly reminded by her husband about her divinity? And more importantly, to talk about my portreyal, why mahadev had to coax parvati to tranceform into me when the criation was in danger? But when ashoksundari was in danger, parvati needed no ones directions? And why did your makers cutted short mahishasur's track in 3 episodes? Tell me, answer me.NOW!"        to be continued

Edited by Tarakari - 15 March 2013 at 7:28am

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Posted: 15 March 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
arijit, last one sould be part 5 na??
but superb yes me too along with a hundred thousand others
WHY WHY WHY/
Super arijit.. do continue. loving it Hug

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Edited and rectified.

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