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Avita FF You Are Mine Whn I SW U-XI,Pg-10 (Page 5)

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MuktaJaiswal




Heeelllooo!!! Hug Hiii Di Big smile

I was so very right!!!!!  Approve DancingJust as I thought bikul dil ko chulenewala update...Heart EmbarrassedVery touchy yaarHeartClap awww thankyou sooo much EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Poor Avi, Unhappyis with a war with himself. OuchPersonally I felt he shouldn't have taken that bet, Disapprovehowever he isn't himself.Unhappy Not thinking what's wrong or right.Ouch
Ya di you are right Avdhesh is not in himself and can't promise he vl b bck to himself soon or not evn ever hehehe LOLLOLLOL
Just thinking what will be Apri's reaction... Day DreamingEmbarrassed when he talks about Suraj with her Ermmwill they be friends...Party Dancingor will  fight again... Shocked''Wink...LOL
hehe...Di have a look first how will he talk to her about that matter Wink

Waiting for more such interesting Update ''''..Embarrassed
going to add the Preview of next UD hope you will find it worthy to wait Embarrassed


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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jes_jade

Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha dear !!!! HugHug

Tumne toh fod dia !!Thumbs Up
Thumbs UpThumbs Up

I mean the way u portrayed his inner turmoil...& his conversation with his heart/mind ( k..whateverErmm) was awesomely written !!Clap
ClapClap

I am just keeping my fingers crossed...as to what is going to happen...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Once again...well done...U r a rockstar !!!Star
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Btw..apka PC theek ho gya???Shocked


Jessie
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hahaha LOLLOLLOL me n FAAD diya hehe luv yaa for such big comment yaar Embarrassed
hunn next Wink hehe wait for next friday...hope you will like it as it will be ma writing after ages as these two updtes were previously written Confused
yap PC theek ho gaya...but saari pics chali gai  CryCryCry
m trying to make them again Embarrassed
Luv yaa EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I forgot to tell u...ur Avatar in profile pic...is totally awesome & cool...Day DreamingDay Dreaming reminded me of why we used to love & drool over Ashish in GKD forum...from unmarried to married women... !!!!! ROFLROFL

I miss those days !!! CryCry

awww...you liked it (may b bz its Avi's hehe LOL) i made it on ma PC mean off line softwrEmbarrassed
yaar those days Day Dreaming
Day Dreaming
wat to say...abhi to yaaden hi bachi hain CryCryCry
but who knows may be we ol Drooling ppl can meet some othr forum WinkWink
and agar nahi bhi so wat atleast we have those luvly memories of our crazy discussions hehehe LOLLOLLOL
awww me too miss it yaar ConfusedConfused

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prash_t

"Chahaa hai tujhe kuch yun ...ke

Ye mohabbat hi nahi Ibaadat hogi..

Jo chahaa kisi aur ko tune..

Khuda kasam , Kayamat se pehle kayamat hogi..."

Ayee HayyeeeDay Dreaming.. This one was chumeshwari linesWinkWinkTongue

awww...m blushing that you liked it EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

waah waah!! Description of his inner turmoilClapClapClap Fab!!!


Tu toh dhamekedaar writer haiWinkWinkWink  Awesome..

He he me and dhamakedaar writer LOLLOL and what about you hun Wink ma romance queen Heart

Bitwa ko pyaar hui gava haiWinkWink Maan le Avdheshwa. U are in looove...

Aree ji Avdheshwa hai  aise kaise maan jai Wink

Oh God.. Shikha nad Arpi are such cutie pies yaa... WinkWink Banging their plates ... hehehehehe..

He he yap bz She wanna live her childhood which she spend in missing them Smile

Bitwa ne toh "Kiss" ki bet bhi le liOuch Ab kya hoga.. Bitwa jeetega ya fir wo pagluDead

Paglu yaa Bitwa ei to waqt batai hehe LOLLOL

Plzzz let Bitwa win yaar,.. Plzz.. I want tht Kiss Day Dreaming

Hehehe...for you Mrs.Thakur thr will be alot of scenes heheheLOLLOL

Update soon... M waitingWinkWink

M adding Pre...abhi ehi se kaam chalawa...updatewa Friday ka karab
Luv yaa dearEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 1:32am | IP Logged
Hey everyone thankyou sooo much for liking previous Update and your comments Big smile
Big smilehere is the pre for next Update hope you will like it too Embarrassed

"You Are Mine..."
When I Met You part -VII

"If you have done with your I can n can't can we have dinner Bhaiya?"

Shikha sat by his side and placed the dinner on the table next to her, while Arpita  was just standing at the door leaning to it and staring him…

Shikha's voice made Avdhesh realizes that he was not alone in the room, and so of his tear filled eyes. He flipped and pressed his face into the pillow next to him to wipe his tears so they may not know about it and replied

"told you naa m not hungry…leave me alone Shikha…I don't want to spoil your mood."

"Yeah Shikha..tu jaa…he want to spoil my mood only, or I should leave too because some baby wanna cry alone now!"

Arpita popped in to taunt Avi…which worked this time and he sits back firmly as nothing was wrong…

Avi-"Uh really Arpita Ji…you wanna cry kya?"

Arpita gave him an angry look as he called her ARPITA JI but controlled herself some how-"NO. Certainly not …and why should I? I thought Mr  Avdhesh Singh Thakur wanna cry alone."

She stepped in toward Avdhesh …roaring this time.

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this is all for coming Update on this friday

hope you will like itEmbarrassed


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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 3:28am | IP Logged
I didn't get PM for this Precap update !!!ShockedShocked

Okk...sounds interesting..Sher & Sherni bas mauka dhoondte hain ladne k liye...LOLLOL

& Neha..u haven't lost ur touch in writing...if u have written this now !!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Will be waiting for the update !!SmileSmile

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by jes_jade

Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha dear !!!! HugHug

Tumne toh fod dia !!Thumbs Up
Thumbs UpThumbs Up

I mean the way u portrayed his inner turmoil...& his conversation with his heart/mind ( k..whateverErmm) was awesomely written !!Clap
ClapClap

I am just keeping my fingers crossed...as to what is going to happen...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Once again...well done...U r a rockstar !!!Star
StarStar


Btw..apka PC theek ho gya???Shocked


Jessie
Hug
Hug
hahaha LOLLOLLOL me n FAAD diya hehe luv yaa for such big comment yaar Embarrassed
hunn next Wink hehe wait for next friday...hope you will like it as it will be ma writing after ages as these two updtes were previously written Confused
yap PC theek ho gaya...but saari pics chali gai  CryCryCry
m trying to make them again Embarrassed
Luv yaa EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I forgot to tell u...ur Avatar in profile pic...is totally awesome & cool...Day DreamingDay Dreaming reminded me of why we used to love & drool over Ashish in GKD forum...from unmarried to married women... !!!!! ROFLROFL

I miss those days !!! CryCry

awww...you liked it (may b bz its Avi's hehe LOL) i made it on ma PC mean off line softwrEmbarrassed
yaar those days Day Dreaming
Day Dreaming
wat to say...abhi to yaaden hi bachi hain CryCryCry
but who knows may be we ol Drooling ppl can meet some othr forum WinkWink
and agar nahi bhi so wat atleast we have those luvly memories of our crazy discussions hehehe LOLLOLLOL
awww me too miss it yaar ConfusedConfused

Yeah..I just visit GKD forum..& open our topics..Gangster of the week wale posts...& al our crazy posts...& laugh...& then cry !!!CryCryCry

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Okk...I m trying to like ur updates & ur replies frm along time but I m being shown this message...AngryAngry




I will like ur posts later !!!





Edited by jes_jade - 03 September 2012 at 3:35am

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Mein bhi kya soch rahi thi, Ermm Avi-Arpi fnrds……Shocked naaa……..WinkLOLguess abhi toh aur tu-tu mai-mai hogi…..OuchPre-cap se toh yehi lagta hai……………EmbarrassedLOL
Yep m surely waiting fr the next big war ….Deadpata nahi en dono sulah kab hogi……Day Dreaming
Lagta hai writer ki khusamad karni padegi……EmbarrassedLOL
plzzz abhi romance nahi toh kamse kam frndship to karado…………Big smile

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