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Avita FF You Are Mine Whn I SW U-XI,Pg-10 (Page 4)

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolpavni

Diii...awwwsomeee...ab avi ko realize hona hi hey k he loves arpi...waiting for dt...update soon...luv ya :)

Hi Pavni Smile
Your first post and its comment on my FF hehe thanks dear Big smile
and about Avi's realization LOLLOLLOLLOL
wait for next friday Wink
luv yaa too dear Embarrassed

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Neha dear !!!! HugHug

Tumne toh fod dia !!Thumbs Up
Thumbs UpThumbs Up

I mean the way u portrayed his inner turmoil...& his conversation with his heart/mind ( k..whateverErmm) was awesomely written !!Clap
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I am just keeping my fingers crossed...as to what is going to happen...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Once again...well done...U r a rockstar !!!Star
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Btw..apka PC theek ho gya???Shocked

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha dear !!!! HugHug

Tumne toh fod dia !!Thumbs Up
Thumbs UpThumbs Up

I mean the way u portrayed his inner turmoil...& his conversation with his heart/mind ( k..whateverErmm) was awesomely written !!Clap
ClapClap

I am just keeping my fingers crossed...as to what is going to happen...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Once again...well done...U r a rockstar !!!Star
StarStar


Btw..apka PC theek ho gya???Shocked


Jessie
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hahaha LOLLOLLOL me n FAAD diya hehe luv yaa for such big comment yaar Embarrassed
hunn next Wink hehe wait for next friday...hope you will like it as it will be ma writing after ages as these two updtes were previously written Confused
yap PC theek ho gaya...but saari pics chali gai  CryCryCry
m trying to make them again Embarrassed
Luv yaa EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 31 August 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Nice part jo,
loved avi's anger dis time more,
his pain is really cant be described
to anyone or to himself b'coz he himself dont know how much he loves arpi.
But i am little bit worried for arpi.
Hope everythings goes well.
Will wait dear for d next one.

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 4:29am | IP Logged



Heeelllooo!!! Hug

I was so very right!!!!!  Approve DancingJust as I thought bikul dil ko chulenewala update...Heart EmbarrassedVery touchy yaarHeartClap
Poor Avi, Unhappyis with a war with himself. OuchPersonally I felt he shouldn't have taken that bet, Disapprovehowever he isn't himself.Unhappy Not thinking what's wrong or right.Ouch
Just thinking what will be Apri's reaction... Day DreamingEmbarrassed when he talks about Suraj with her Ermmwill they be friends...Party Dancingor will  fight again... Shocked……Wink...LOL

Waiting for more such interesting Update …………..Embarrassed


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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha dear !!!! HugHug

Tumne toh fod dia !!Thumbs Up
Thumbs UpThumbs Up

I mean the way u portrayed his inner turmoil...& his conversation with his heart/mind ( k..whateverErmm) was awesomely written !!Clap
ClapClap

I am just keeping my fingers crossed...as to what is going to happen...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Once again...well done...U r a rockstar !!!Star
StarStar


Btw..apka PC theek ho gya???Shocked


Jessie
Hug
Hug
hahaha LOLLOLLOL me n FAAD diya hehe luv yaa for such big comment yaar Embarrassed
hunn next Wink hehe wait for next friday...hope you will like it as it will be ma writing after ages as these two updtes were previously written Confused
yap PC theek ho gaya...but saari pics chali gai  CryCryCry
m trying to make them again Embarrassed
Luv yaa EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I forgot to tell u...ur Avatar in profile pic...is totally awesome & cool...Day DreamingDay Dreaming reminded me of why we used to love & drool over Ashish in GKD forum...from unmarried to married women... !!!!! ROFLROFL

I miss those days !!! CryCry

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Posted: 02 September 2012 at 11:31pm | IP Logged

"Chahaa hai tujhe kuch yun ...ke

Ye mohabbat hi nahi Ibaadat hogi..

Jo chahaa kisi aur ko tune..

Khuda kasam , Kayamat se pehle kayamat hogi..."

Ayee HayyeeeDay Dreaming.. This one was chumeshwari linesWinkWinkTongue


waah waah!! Description of his inner turmoilClapClapClap Fab!!!


Tu toh dhamekedaar writer haiWinkWinkWink  Awesome..

Bitwa ko pyaar hui gava haiWinkWink Maan le Avdheshwa. U are in looove...

Oh God.. Shikha nad Arpi are such cutie pies yaa... WinkWink Banging their plates ... hehehehehe..

Bitwa ne toh "Kiss" ki bet bhi le liOuch Ab kya hoga.. Bitwa jeetega ya fir wo pagluDead


Plzzz let Bitwa win yaar,.. Plzz.. I want tht Kiss Day Dreaming

Update soon... M waitingWinkWink

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Posted: 03 September 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

Nice part jo,
loved avi's anger dis time more,
his pain is really cant be described
to anyone or to himself b'coz he himself don't know how much he loves arpi.
But i am little bit worried for arpi.
Hope everythings goes well.
Will wait dear for d next one.

Hey Rups Smile
thanks yaar...Embarrassed
about Avdhesh's feelings hehe
can't say he luvs her of just worried as a Friend Wink
going to Update the promo for next updte let me know hwz it Embarrassed

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