Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG SS Mr.Mars & Ms.Venus THREAD 2

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You guys absolutely rock!!!Big smile
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Next Update coming soon!!!!
----Res for Part 7--------
Okay Guys Mel here I have got permission from Ananya to use her account to post the updates.

Part 7
Maan was extremely angry after his confrontation with Raj.
'That little b**** could not be trusted anymore. He can come up with any cheap little tricks to serve his own greed and hurt my Geet as well as destroy the planet'
"I wont let this happen ! NEVER EVER!!!" He was shivering with rage.
He immediately made a mind connection with Sordo.
"Make arrangements on Mars for my trip!" He ordered.
"I am coming with Ms.Venus!" He spoke stressing each word of it.
Sordo heard his enrageous voice ...while remembering one of the beautiful moments of their past which he had witnessed only.
"You have been troubling me in my dreams and now my practice sessions

He spoke blushing to himself.
"Your ice cold kisses making me feel alive" he spoke as he painted her

lips red.
"And today I will meet you!" He spoke as he completed the portrait of

her , Of his Dreams, Of Ms.Venus.

"Yes Master!"
"Bring the D L Bridge! I will see her today itself!"
"But Master! This isnt fair!"
"Everything is fair in Love!"

"Everything is fair in Love!" Maan spoke smirking as Sordo ran to bring D L Bridge.
"I have never seen Master PMM being so mischievious specially using DL Bridge. This girl is surely special for Master!" Sordo thought as he brought the instrument.
"Thank you Sordo ! You may leave now!" Maan spoke with a mischievious glance as he wrapped the instrument around his right hand wrist.
'Up and Dream Baby!' He whispered.
He walked towards a room.
It was all lighted and like a princess there she slept there she slept like a baby all curled up but with a giant smile on her face.
"She is dreaming!" He smiled.
"About.Someone." His face contorted.
He went and slept beside her putting his hands around her waist. Almost touching each other from head to toe with her back to his chest.
His hot breath fanned her neck as her breathing quickened. She could sense someone behind her.
"Though I am going to use the DL Bridge I dont know how will I be able to face him." Geet thought with a sly giggle.
Yes she Yes she was using the DL Bridge to meet her Prince Charming , her "Mars".
"DL Bridge not only allows you to watch one's dreams but also become a part of it with its ladder!" She remembered her father, KV's words as He gifted her the 13th Birthday Present - DL Bridge.
But what she didnt know was that he too was using it.
As she slept off using the instrument.
She saw herself sleeping in a lighted room.
She closed her eyes as she could feel his presence.
"Mars!" She whispered with a smile slowly curling up on her face.
That's when she felt someone's presence behind her.
He squeezed her waist bringing her close yet burning with an unknown jealousy.
The previous night was one of her most beautiful nights she has ever had.
She had met her Mr.Dreamy and she felt like flying on the top of the world.
"Mr.Mars! My Dreamy Mars!" Geet spoke shying.
"Geet! Dont you think its bit too early. What if he doesnt exist?"

Meera spoke smirking a little.
The things in the room started shaking as if earthquake was occurring.
Geet was infuriated. Her eyes simply spoke fire.
"HE DOES!!!!! DO YOU GET IT!! He is there and He loves only me!!!!"
"Geet!" He called her out.
Maan had made all their arrangements for their trip to Mars.
According to Sordo the palace he went before for his practice session was a secret hideout not known to anyone except his sister Annie.
He immediately paused in his advancing footsteps as he saw Geet attempting something.
"Concentrate Geet!" She spoke to herself.
She again closed her eyes. Immediately an invisible circular thick sphere was created around her. As much she concentrated so bigger did the sphere get.It wasnt any ordinary sphere but actually a force field she was creating. The things around her started vibrating and alligning to prevent any possible attacker.
"THUD!" Maan heard a sound behind him.
He turned and saw the sight and smirked evilly.
There was Raj all wet with jelly and he was on the floor.
'Serves you good, Dr.R!' Maan thought.
He turned back to Geet. She was straining herself with the vigorous attempt she ws making at her first go.
"Geet!" He called out with all his love reflecting on his face. Geet immediately stopped her attempt hearing his endearing voice.
The force field vanished as everything fell back to their own places.
"Maan!" She called out and ran into his arms.
"I tried Maan I tried!!" She spoke with happy tears on her face.
"Yes Geet! You did it so well!!" Maan encouraged her.
He moved near her ear.
"We are moving to Mars. Its too risky here now"
Geet freezed on the spot.
Every single thing has an undoing. It always comes in pairs. So did the superiority of Marsians and Venusians.
It served the Galactus and destroyed lives of many.
People may get attracted to its external appearance and have it.
But along with it comes great vices which kills you within.
Only few people resist it while the many rest succumb to its appearances.
A minute's happiness destroys their entire life.
And thats what happened to the happy go lucky Dev. Now known as D the Destroyer the Unnamed.
Okay guys I am trying to show Maan and Geet having equal dominance here.Not the typical Geet being chui mui and Maan the Saviour always. Am i succeeding in doing so?

Dont worry another part coming up this evening.
A very happy belated birthday to My Intelligent Analyser Sara.


AND HAPPY BIRTHDAY DQ FAIZA!!! Many many happy returns of the day dear.
Wish Faiza Here:
Yes Yes I know I am bit late and as promised your 2nd update will be up today only! Happy na?

P.S: Aaj phir se Baarish hui and I danced againTongueTongue
AnanyaEmbarrassed( Ms.MarsWink)

Edited by Miss.Mars - 14 September 2012 at 2:45am

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Thread 1

Part 7[above]
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10

Thread 3

Edited by Miss.Mars - 26 August 2012 at 2:40pm

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congratz for new thread princess!!!!Smile

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Anu, meine pichle thread mey comment kiya hai. Do check. Reason, mein previous thread mey 'last person to post comment' ban na chahati thi.
Waiting for the reply. Waise, mujhe pata tha ke new thread open hone wali hai. Yeh bhi koi batane ki baat thi?

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
ha Marsi Devil
new thread aur bataya b nai

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
congrats for new thread

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PariNain

ha Marsi Devil
new thread aur bataya b nai

Haawww!! Kal toh bataya tha!! Aur aap kitna complain kar rahi thi:P
He he Th... I know it:D
Haila Devil? My Pleasure:D!!!

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