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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pyaar_ka_panchi

heyy shanaHug
Its been long shana i had wrote anything about ur FF..i will be honest i lost the feel with ending of part 1 ...i was not much entho for part 2 but well once start reading something than u need to read till its end...so i was reading but not at same level of entho as it should be like...
that why i even was slow in reading...

Just read part 3
that made me again excited to read this FF again ...its so so damn good written part..with love desire the passion the emotions u put in through the closeness of Manveer in that part..where Uday want Manyata yet wait to prove her own wife...to even stop her from getting into the wrong which she regrets later..simply wowww part to read...
Amazinglyyy wrote it just glued me again to this ff again !!!!
i'm looking forward how ur going to reveal M's identity here...
i havn't read another 2 parts...but if u havn't revealed it would be so good if u put something like where when manya starts feel his touch sense thinks like she had already sense his touch ..u know remembering the past ...
it would be interesting to read!!!


Tanvi her identity is revealed dear read the Chapter III> A Fresh Start and Chapter IV> The Rave Party  u  will know how...and it is in very much same way as u said...

hope u like it dear...next chapter   >>  Princess u r Mine will be updated by saturday night

Just go to first page and u will get all info...hope u like it and i am able to keep Manveer passion Alive...soon will bring whlo raj parivaar back tooSmile

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shals9

Superb update Shana! Really sorry for delay in posting my comment.  Really love reading uday-manyata interaction and UV's dialogs. Very intelligent use of 'wheel of fortune' in his words. You are a brilliant writer. 

Adore the story and cant wait for the next part.  Just a request.. wont hound you.. but pls try and update when u can. Hug


Thanks Shals...u replied that much is enough for me dear.Smile

Will try to update ASAP  and yes am doing my best to make it full on Manveer Wink

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 3:28pm | IP Logged
Shana,I am very sorry about commenting on this chapter so late.I loved the update.It was really intense.I did not expect Uday to slap Manyata but I guess he cannot stand anyone insulting Manyata even if it is she herself doing the honoursLOL.That moment set the tone of this chapter.I loved Uday's fierce belief that she is indeed Manyata,his wife.He needs her so badly yet he  is trying so hard to respect her wishes and give her space.Manya's feeling of suffocation is also understandable.She is getting flashes of her past and this just adds to her confusions.I am really feeling for her now...bechaari.The rave party...yay...I loved it and the title of the next chapter is already making me blushEmbarrassedwaiting eagerly to read what happens...will we get to see a moment from the past being repeated or is it too soon for thatEmbarrassedjaldi se update karna Shana.Take careSmile

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Hi Shana
this is my first post
i luv Wheels of Fortune n i used to follow ur Married for Riyasat tooBig smile
u r a wonderful authorClap
i read all the FFs here bt did nt hv the guts to post anything
this story is so gripping
n coming to this chapter i think Uday is rite
thode nazdiik pal uske saath guzarengi toh saari yaadash wapas ayengiEmbarrassed
so jaldi se unki ding dong karvavo sEmbarrassed
he he sry aajkal mera mind gutter se udtha hi nahi...

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
shana finally read it all damnnn u know what i was so trying to avoid Manveer like i won't be missing them..its a serial it will be over from my mind trying to avoid missing Manveer/uday/dek
when i read ur last part...i was missing them so so muchhh :( how much they r intense characters the couple the chemistry i was simply imagining all these scenes over them...it would so so awesumlyyy wrote...
i was picturizing them...they were beautiful couple i get to c on tv the characters & all...
ur ff just made me miss them more...i really loved the way Uday told Manyata to respect urself it was like really Uday used to tell her importance in her own eyes...
waiting to read how u will unfold Meenakshi karmaney & M coming closer to her real identity where she always belonged.

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pyaar_ka_panchi

shana finally read it all damnnn u know what i was so trying to avoid Manveer like i won't be missing them..its a serial it will be over from my mind trying to avoid missing Manveer/uday/dek
when i read ur last part...i was missing them so so muchhh :( how much they r intense characters the couple the chemistry i was simply imagining all these scenes over them...it would so so awesumlyyy wrote...
i was picturizing them...they were beautiful couple i get to c on tv the characters & all...
ur ff just made me miss them more...i really loved the way Uday told Manyata to respect urself it was like really Uday used to tell her importance in her own eyes...
waiting to read how u will unfold Meenakshi karmaney & M coming closer to her real identity where she always belonged.


Thanks Tanvi...u know what even I was so depressed after DEK ending that I started loosing passion to write and even now my updates are less then before coz while writing I miss them so much...that I sometimes just stop  my writing ...but then sit again and write for my readers who await the update for what next.

Even I too am thinking to stop writing full on Mnaveer after this FF as I miss them at every update ...I feel that I should try to grow up then to stuck  at one place

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Posted: 24 August 2012 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by afreshbegin

Hi Shana
this is my first post
i luv Wheels of Fortune n i used to follow ur Married for Riyasat tooBig smile
u r a wonderful authorClap
i read all the FFs here bt did nt hv the guts to post anything
this story is so gripping
n coming to this chapter i think Uday is rite
thode nazdiik pal uske saath guzarengi toh saari yaadash wapas ayengiEmbarrassed
so jaldi se unki ding dong karvavo sEmbarrassed
he he sry aajkal mera mind gutter se udtha hi nahi...



Thanks dear that u rejistered urself...and how lucky i am that ur first post is on my FF

Read next chapter u will find ur dreams fulfilled till some extentWink

Hope U like it as well
Smile

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Posted: 25 August 2012 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by minizz

Shana,I am very sorry about commenting on this chapter so late.I loved the update.It was really intense.I did not expect Uday to slap Manyata but I guess he cannot stand anyone insulting Manyata even if it is she herself doing the honoursLOL.That moment set the tone of this chapter.I loved Uday's fierce belief that she is indeed Manyata,his wife.He needs her so badly yet he  is trying so hard to respect her wishes and give her space.Manya's feeling of suffocation is also understandable.She is getting flashes of her past and this just adds to her confusions.I am really feeling for her now...bechaari.The rave party...yay...I loved it and the title of the next chapter is already making me blushEmbarrassedwaiting eagerly to read what happens...will we get to see a moment from the past being repeated or is it too soon for thatEmbarrassedjaldi se update karna Shana.Take careSmile


Thanks Mini...next chapter title has actually inc.everybody expectations...now its me who is nervous to write itLOL

Hope u will like that too

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