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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by rocker12

gr8 update dear as usual it was soo awesome and tremendously written
cant wait for the next part coz 
idefinately know u would have some gr8 words from manya to udayveer when she is drunk 
contsoon :) 


u really know my tricks so well dear LOL

thanks a lot will update asap

why wont i amongst some of the most frequent readers of ur ff :)  

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 2:46am | IP Logged
oh Shana finally u updated i waited for this update until 4:00am in the morning and then my eyes just closed K now coming back to the update it was completely worth the wait very nicely written with excellent choice of words the whole feel the emotion and the description of all the scenes was awesome and manveer were marvelous as usual i loved how manya has adapted her life in mumbai and walking with the culture like she adapted western so easily unlike the old manyata the only thing that i did not accept was the slap i mean uday slapped manya and she did noy say anything Shocked that just proves that he has a right on her and she accepts that fact and manya is drugged that means she is out of the world now she can not resist udayveer when she is in all her senses so how will she resist him when she is druggedWink

please please please update soon shana and dont take so much time this time please please and you wrote chapter 5 coming soon but thee is no chapter 4 i think u need to edit that part 
please update soon please and this was a lovely updateThumbs Up

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Awsomeee...mind blowing brilliant...speechless...omg uday slaped manyata...awww...adya is sooo...sweet and innocent...adya want to be manav's girlfrnd...love her...yuppiii...finally manyata is gaining her memory...love that shirt scene...now uday ko kamini minakshi pe shak ho gaya...hey...shana yaar where is J,vijaybhai,unnati,jagat?plzzz...update soon...fir se update karne k liye itni der mar karna.eagrly waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Clap awesome, amazing. Beautiful writing. loved the update.

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

oh Shana finally u updated i waited for this update until 4:00am in the morning and then my eyes just closed K now coming back to the update it was completely worth the wait very nicely written with excellent choice of words the whole feel the emotion and the description of all the scenes was awesome and manveer were marvelous as usual i loved how manya has adapted her life in mumbai and walking with the culture like she adapted western so easily unlike the old manyata the only thing that i did not accept was the slap i mean uday slapped manya and she did noy say anything Shocked that just proves that he has a right on her and she accepts that fact and manya is drugged that means she is out of the world now she can not resist udayveer when she is in all her senses so how will she resist him when she is druggedWink

please please please update soon shana and dont take so much time this time please please and you wrote chapter 5 coming soon but thee is no chapter 4 i think u need to edit that part 
please update soon please and this was a lovely updateThumbs Up



Sorry vampy I really kept u waiting dear  but kaya karen everytime time i tried to update i found some mistake.

I got so fed up with my ownself that at last just closed my eyes and clicked update LOL...ab jo bhi likha hai readerd jhele ...as I already had enough of my jhelo sessionOuch

Corrected it ...thanks for telling about chapter mistake  dekha na aankhe band karke update karne se kya hota hai ...LOL

Well as for Uday slapping Manya ...i know many wont like it but it was correct from his point of veiw as honour means lot to UV specially when it is of his wife...true rajwada u see...manaya has no right to call herself fallen names neither she can do something shameful to himself...well UV will never let her do it ...till he is  their to give her reality checks and sometimes BlushingBlushing
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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetsurati

Awsomeee...mind blowing brilliant...speechless...omg uday slaped manyata...awww...adya is sooo...sweet and innocent...adya want to be manav's girlfrnd...love her...yuppiii...finally manyata is gaining her memory...love that shirt scene...now uday ko kamini minakshi pe shak ho gaya...hey...shana yaar where is J,vijaybhai,unnati,jagat?plzzz...update soon...fir se update karne k liye itni der mar karna.eagrly waiting for the next part.


Thanks Dear

Yes finally is having her past in her subcounsciouss mind thugh it will take time to resurface.

Now t UV knows her truth but then poor guy cannot directly work out his memory wapas lao plan as it would be dangerous for Mnaya

 so now on he is all set to win his Amnesiac wife with the identity she thinks is her true one  i.e. Manaya

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 5:06am | IP Logged
awesome as always and worth waiting thts really unexpected uday slas mnaya...

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Posted: 21 August 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya77

awesome as always and worth waiting thts really unexpected uday slas mnaya...


thanks Piya



Well Manya was getting on his nerves she showed such a disregard to a serious issue of her being Mnaytaa plus spoke badly of her own relationship with UV which is too pure and sheer love for him with no space for fallen things
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UV respects Manya and wants her to respect herself equally

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