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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by chitra_rao

Originally posted by shana0127



Well dear cant give everything in one chapter u know that very well.

As per character of Manya well the girl did put up a strong fight verbally and physically as well she did try to shove him off .But then deep within she is all UVs ,dont know of other girls but Mnaya already belongs to him her mind may play games with her but her heart and body are all honestly on UVs side.

Yes she is making herself strong as its mind that is strongest but what can we do to heart that is so frail and emotional...

 Dill par koi zor nahin behna  fisla to fisla  ,
 samjho gaye kaam se



Aise he nahi Menka ne Vishwamitra ko pataya tha

aur aise he nahi Shivji ne gusse me Kaam Dev ko bhasm kiya tha ...

Shivji knew how smart Kamdev aka heart of human  is thats why even bechre bhagwan decided to kill it off
......Dill fislne se pahle he dill ko he maar dala Ouch

no no I dont want any of this to happen here LOL,Though I'm a very strong Shiv bhakth, I want the dil also intact and the two dilwale (manveer) also intactROFL. Well nice justification for Manya losing herself in Uday.Tongue well what next, now I know of some really wierd things that happen in Rave party can we expect that masala also here Wink


Chal acha hai dono shiv bhaktan saath milin hain ek mai aur ak tu dono mile ...aage ka gaana hum dono ke liye bilkul nahi hai LOL

Yes will put some that masala where Minakshi will play reverse cupid for first time Wink


OMG OMG OMG ShockedHugDancing Minakshi the reverse cupid, gosh My reaction turned from shock to shouting and dancing. Least expected tha yeh. But good anything from u is welcome.Update whenever u have time, and thanks for replying back on comments

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
GREAT JOB 
LOVED IT 
UPDATE SOON 
CAN'T WAIT/

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
update soon pleaseBig smile

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
yar seriously u are a superb writerThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up
waiting for ur update and previous update was awesomeClapClap

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shals9

Wow! Shana! That was one superb brilliant and amazing update! Loved it!! Really loving the new manya who is strong, assertive and wants to make her own identity. The scene at stairs was awesome.. I deliberately used the word 'scene' because I was actually visualizing it. Loved the intensity, the pull and the dilemma they both face. Uday knows in his heart that she is manyata but he has no proof and he is jealous and want to save her.. And he is her guardian too!!! Manya had idoilized yuvraaj udayveer singh and is attracted towards him but she is facing the dilemma that she is not yuvrani, yet everyone else believes it. I sooo wish that DEK had gone this way.. UV & manyata had got married and then due to jai/akaash/etc, they would hv got seperated and then come together after yr or so. Really wish that DEK cvs had been superb writer as you are. Here I go again... Me and my dek rants. Never ending... Phew


Eagerly waiting for the next update! Hmmm Rave Party! Seems like manya is going to get in trouble and uday our prince charming to rescue! Really waiting for it!

Pls update when u can! I know that with house/kid, its impossible to take out time.. So will wait patiently.



Thanks Shals

U really commented after long time but yes I do see ur likes on update..Well I am writing this FF just coz the DEK people did not give us what we actully wanted from them .

I too wanted all this to happen in DEK episodes but koi baat nahi its happening in my FF.Waise bhi DEK was also a tv fiction and my FF an IF fiction kya fark padta hai Smile...tamana to puri ho rahi hai na ...ab yaar itne se he kaam chalan padega
...kaash ki I were SA then would have come up with DEK II with this story line

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by thejazzgal

Wow!! Shana

love the update..

oho!! Manya getting strong / bold day my day.. !! 
hai Manya ne UV chup kara diya..

Love the stair scene.. it was just awesomeee <3 haiii.. me drooling over tht scne.. cant stop imagining more :P :P :P 

Shana i wnat more such scenes plzzz 

hm.. Waiing for the Rave Party..
is it Manyaa to get drunk in the rave party ????

areyy.. minakshiii ne DNA reports cahneg karwadiya..
shaana aur kitna tarpaogi UV ko aur humey ?? 

Manya attracted towards UV... hmm..


Shana... i wnat UV to know the trust soooner plz..
i know tum un dono ko itni jaldi milaogi toh nahi..
but still UV ko tadapte nahi dekh sakti..

M ko paane k liey UV ko phir se pehle jaise tadapna hoga.. 
plzz do ocnt soon
muuuahhh <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

CONT SOOON!! m waitinggg 



Thanks Jazzy ...umm dont worry rave party me dono acche se milne wale hain...baat alag hai next day kisko kitna yaad rahega bhagwan he jaane LOL
...its gonna be full too hangover I tell u

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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hans1998

yar seriously u are a superb writerThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up
waiting for ur update and previous update was awesomeClapClap


Thanks dear hope u like the next update as well Smile
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Posted: 17 August 2012 at 2:30am | IP Logged

Gosh my heart was pacing up n down as I progressed…Day Dreaming amazing guess what I wanna be a producer just for the production of your script!Hug

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