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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
during the hot manveer scene i was thinking...NOW uday will notice her scar..does your version of manyata have a scar given by uday? then looking at that our uday can come to know na tat she is his manyata! and the dna reports are false?that means does evil meenaxi know tat manyata is back!if yes then manyata's life is again in dangerStern Smile

and why didnt u pm?Unhappybecause of that i read it 1 day lateUnhappy

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
I just love your FFs! They are awesome! U r a very good writer! If you do PMs, can you pls PM me as well when you update next.
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by ilvuday

shana..ande aur tamatar ka nahin pata buh i will pakka throw jootha dat smells lyk rotten fish...ek toh itna acha ff likhti ho n u leave it @ cliffhanger n den tarpaane ke liye u upd8 l8...abhi ande tamatar mahenge ho gaye hain joothe se kaam chalati hoon
but coming to the ff i loved it ...i loved the way udayveer brought out the uday in himself and the way he thought manya a lesson...missed adya buh loved d manveerscenes...and  u r suj a wonderful writer ki i cant help but wanna hug u every tym i read d ff...it is so adorable and awesome
please update soon and minakshi tampered with the reports right....btw just a question when do you plan to bring the truth of manyata and let manya know she is not manyata?...buh i loveed it as i said just dont update late i hate waiting in cliff hangers when will you update next


Haila itni mehnat ke baad joota wo bhi gandi fish smell wala Shocked,...patidev bachao LOL

will update asap dear within this week but when i dont know yaar as am still ploting the twist in party

UV will know the truth by next chapter but Manyata has to go through a lot (no jootas now ok ab ladki ki kismat he aisi haiOuch)


mehnat ka toh thik hain kyunki ur mehnat brought out a awesome upd8...par joothey l8 upd8 karne ke liye phir se kiya toh joothe chod i will haunt u personally
hmm twist huhh acha twist ki ganda twist?...oh cool    no joothas buh haunting chalta hain na

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious

Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by MsLuscious



W0w w0w w0w! Shana da update was indeed vry hot r0mantic and dreamy :) i lovd da enc0unter of manyata n uv at stairx l0vd it so much suna tha sabar ka phal meetha h0ta hai but itna meetha h0ta hai ye nahi pata tha:p bt i didnt und y uday said to manyata dat he feelx n0thng for her just bec0x she lukx lyk manyata datx y hex atractd t0wardx her bt in real he feelx for manya th0ugh itx n0t pr0vd yet bt stil hs heart ix craving for her dn y he talkd so harshly to her p0or manya she ix faling for sum0ne whux finding hs wife in her:/
Thanks Sarah,Yes UV is being harsh to Manya,coz he does not want totake any risk at this point.He knows he is already falling weak in her case and if Manya also goes his way then both will end up doing blunder Soon he is gonna find that she is Manyata but poor UV has to restart again kyunki1.She has no memory2.Lets see this Bhoot on Manya UV se kaise papad belwata hai

lol BLUNDER:p yup ryt n0w i get it p0or uv wil hav to do al0tt bef0re starting married lyf again wid manyata;) and yup i didnt got 0ne thng m0re meenakshi ix stickd wid uv lyk a buble gum den y he said he havnt d0ne blunder :p wid any0ne since 1 year O.o

ab uv ki marzi yaar blunder karne ka man nahi hua hoga...

dont worry manya has come now he is in all mood to to do it Wink
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG!!

Hawww ..shud i be writing wat i really felt while reading?? If dats the case *dreamland* should be my answer ..i was smiling while reading if any1 had saw they must thought i m mad..thankfully no1 saw...aise update karti rahogi toh some fine day ppl will shift to mental asyllum for treatment :P

Back to update
reports negative ?? Zarur uss minakshi ka kiya dhara hai ..kamini :P UV took manyata along him to the meeting knew sumthing was cooking up his mind...
And and and ManVeer encountter hawww
Plzzz manyat ko thodi thodi yaadasht dedo i cant see my princey in pain .. :(

Hey i wanna see devgarh family reaction at manya ,bring themm pleejjj

For now "abhi abhi toh dil mile hai abhi abhi na karo zamane ki baat"

Cont soon :')

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 3:13pm | IP Logged

ab uv ki marzi yaar blunder karne ka man nahi hua hoga...

dont worry manya has come now he is in all mood to to do it Wink
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Edited by vampire12345678 - 14 August 2012 at 3:28pm
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by minizz

ShanaHugloved the update.Thank God UV doesn't believe in the DNA test results.His instincts are telling him that this girl is his wife Manyata and he is so right.So Meenakshi must be behind the whole golmaal right...hmmm anyways usko chod...let me talk about UV and Manya.I am loving the office interactions a lot.Manya is totally confused about UV na.One minute he is this smirking,flirting devil and the very next minute he boosts her confidence and provides her support.On top of the Aman and Anya are also confusing her with their own version but kuch bhi ho she is not able to ignore this guy...She has extreme reactions to him whether it is hate or love or plain attraction.loved a jealous UV.Manya's true fighting spirit is now coming.The bindaas girl who never feared anyone is finally starting to show and this is what  had attracted UV in the first place.As soon as she said those words about finiding a new boyfriend I knew that I would get an intense scene to read and I was not disappointed at allEmbarrassedloved the scene.You write these scenes in a tasteful manner Shana.It never crosses over to vulgarity and it is so easy to cross that line.So good jobClapAnother thing about this scene was the emotions that were in play.I could feel UV's frustration,his helplessness ,his immense love and respect for this girl.He wants her but he is willing to wait for her.I can understand Manya's dilemma too.She is torn apart by her need and attraction for this man and at the same time she fears that getting close to him might lead her to lose her identity.I loved the last part  a lot.uff I am blabbering now so let me stop.just want to end by saying that you are doing a wonderful job and I am looking forward to the Rave party where I am sure we will get to see some fireworks hai na.Please update soon and thank you for this beautiful chapterBig smile

Thanks Mini ...yes dear u r right u will sure see some great fireworks in raving rave party  Wink
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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetshab

OMG OMG OMG!!

Hawww ..shud i be writing wat i really felt while reading?? If dats the case *dreamland* should be my answer ..i was smiling while reading if any1 had saw they must thought i m mad..thankfully no1 saw...aise update karti rahogi toh some fine day ppl will shift to mental asyllum for treatment :P

Back to update
reports negative ?? Zarur uss minakshi ka kiya dhara hai ..kamini :P UV took manyata along him to the meeting knew sumthing was cooking up his mind...
And and and ManVeer encountter hawww
Plzzz manyat ko thodi thodi yaadasht dedo i cant see my princey in pain .. :(

Hey i wanna see devgarh family reaction at manya ,bring themm pleejjj

For now "abhi abhi toh dil mile hai abhi abhi na karo zamane ki baat"

Cont soon :')


agree with u loved this line actually it cracked me upROFL

For now "abhi abhi toh dil mile hai abhi abhi na karo zamane ki baat"
the line on top is so perfect and super funnyROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL

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