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-JEHAN- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
r u kidding me that was not at all ghatiya...
that was beautiful...amazing piece of work..really ur every chapter is better than the last one..i really love adya..i don't know why but i love reading about her may be she is manveer child that's why but she is just too cute and this age she know how to deal with people i really liked it!!and the bond u r showing through words between UV and adya is just feels so gud to read about them and then manya in office that was awesome...and anya...lolll what she said about UV was true but really funny!!!and minakishi's reaction wohooo...loved it!!!
thanks for a long update..i really loved it...thanks alot for the PM too...

Inkpen4877 Goldie

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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Brilliant and lovely as always!! 

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sweet_gargi IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 March 2012
Posts: 4210

Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
as usual a great update shana...n thanks for the PM...I just love the characters in ur FF...I hope she does not start disliking UV and think him to be a womanizer...your choice of words is simply great and you have an excellent command over english I must saySmile...Loved Adya's intelligence and the ways she have already started learning as to how to show love even to your enemies!!...thats really great!..keep up the good work dear! you and your FF...its a masterpiece...
Sakura24 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6007

Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:38pm | IP Logged
Oh! NO WORDS to describe this one,
I hope with the core of my heart that she's Manyata even if she isn't she seems to have the same UV phobia LOL
Update soon dear, totally love this one :)
Archi02 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 09 June 2012
Posts: 5332

Posted: 06 August 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
I don't have anything to say you. It was too beautiful to describe. I love you and your writing. Please continue your story with book 3. I want to see even more deep bonding between adya and manveer. A perfect family. You've made us wait for a long. Please update the next part soon and thanks for the pm. I'm waiting...
..oishu.. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 13 March 2010
Posts: 12468

Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
loved it yaar!!!

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xxDaydreameRxx Goldie

Joined: 30 June 2010
Posts: 2121

Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:01pm | IP Logged updated!! Big smile Okay to be honest undoubtedly i missed the presence of ManVeer scenes in this update, but then so many other things were going on at the same time that i still consider this to be an AMAZING chappie. 

First of all, the way you're shaping up Adya is honestly really commendable. At the same time, I feel a bit worried for the little girl. Disapprove I couldn't help but wonder how much exactly does little Adya know about Meenakshi and not only her but the "other women" that spend time with UV and what kind of image of her father does that really give her. Ermm Also, the whole description of UV's strictness and attempt to groom her into a honourable Princess..I loved it but at the same time I honestly cant wait for Manyata to enter the picture adn for sweet little Adya to finally get a mother's tender love. Embarrassed To be honest, I never even meant to write all this worrying crap but it all just came to me as I was writing this comment..juts goes to show what brilliant job you've done with her caz i really adore the little girl. Embarrassed

Second, Shana hats off to you for making me both LOVE and QUESTION UV so much all in one chap.

'Well dear our Yuvraaj Udayveer has his own charm and if u stand more then a  minute by him ,u will end up falling in his arms'. smirked Anya as she saw Manya blush.

Trust me, Manyata was not the only one blushing at this line. LOL

And then the second half of the update..I think you already know that I to am not too comfortable with the idea of UV sleeping with other woman. Ouch So I completely understand how M felt caz UV's so easily lovable yet at the same time creates so many doubts and other questions to form in my mind. I guess at the end of the day, it's just another reason I love your FF because you're not outlining UV as the perfect angelic soul and its not only M but the reader as well who will have to find their hero with the golden heart through all those layers of arrogance, lust, and what-not. Can't actually wait to see how you're gonna do this! Smile
Overall, I think this was an awesome update, setting up for future tracks and did I mention I'm so sure Meenakshi is going to be stealing/switching up some DNA reports for sure. Ouch Seriously please can you at least at the end, make that girl suffer. A lot. I just can't pity her no matter what happens!
Already excited for next chap so please try to update soon. Big smile

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-RK_Ki_Biwi- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 25 June 2012
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Posted: 06 August 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Shana one thing I don't like in your update you know what, see this:
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Chahe kitna bhi ghatiya likha ho

How dare you call this update Ghatiya .Shocked  If your update is ghatiya than my Fanfic is a S**t. LOLIt's better for you never say this line in next updates warna ek comment aur like toh yahin kam ho jayega haan nahi toh.Wink Ab kya filmfare dena padega LOLkya ki update was superb, fantastic, brilliant, awesome, amazing, wonderful, lovely, marvalous etc. etc. etc.

I love this part in your update so much:- Wink

'Now rule number two' continued Anya 'Be on your heels when our annadata Yuvraaj Udayveer is around the office'.LOL

Manaya gave a confused expression to which Anya smiled secretively.

'Well dear our Yuvraaj Udayveer has his own charm and if u stand more then a  minute by him ,u will end up falling in his arms'. smirked Anya as she saw Manya blush.ROFL

'That's why I said be on your heels and run than to make fool out of yourself in front of that heartless man'.LOL

I love the office scene between Anya & Manya.Wink

Thanks for the fab. update &  PM.Smile

Chapter 3

The Rave Party

Coming Soon

After reading the name of your next update, I can't wait, & Please this time don't update like a lazy Indian.ROFL Please update fast yaar.I know next chapter will be one of the most dhaansu update.Thumbs Up

In this Rainy Season Rain Hugs.Hug Hug


Edited by sonam2801 - 07 August 2012 at 3:24am

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