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ClapClapthans.well done...wonderfull...ClapClap

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Hi Shana Hug, were do I start u keep ozzing such wonderful updates one after other that at times we are short of words. A brilliantly compiled chapterClap. I'm saying brillant coz here u are setting the base of Adya-Manva relationship which is of cute nok-jhok and innocence (Just wondering would Manva be a like a big brother to Adya, or just a mere friend).Plus in this chapter u r also showing the depth of want and happiness Adya is having towards her mom.

Comming to ur update:

Part 1: Adya and her encounter with her Mama: What a opening to the update shana Clap, outstanding. U used my so called trump card Adya at the very beginning. The way u have put up the scene, Manya sleeping and Adya touching and feeling her to make sure she is no dream and a reality as suraj told her was just amazing. Manya's reaction to Adya and Adya hugging her Mom, calling Manya her mom all was rightly put.Clap

Part 2: Suraj Suraj is meenakshi naam ke andhera ko dur karne wala  Suraj ROFL: I'm falling in love with this character. U better use this beautifully etched charachter to its full calliber in favor of Manya in ur future updates. I must give it to u for the whole  Lalpari concept . That was innocent, refreshing and so enduring to here from litle Adya. A beautiful  lie that she has been living, lie told to her by her elders to keep her mom alive for her sake.Just remarkable work here ShanaClap, And suraj hating MinakshiAngry was like icing on the cake Wink

Part 3:Manya and Adya connection: Manya holding Adya in her arms,adya losing herself and finding solace in her moms arms , manya feeling her own flesh, recognizing her to be her own part was again well constructed.

Part 4: OOt and Chuhiya ROFL: Both of them are so adorable.What cool nick names. I was having a stupid smile on my face while reading their bantering to and fro. Good work again Clap (here again u could use both of them to team up and bring Uday and Manya together against Minashi, it would a heck of a scene to read Wink)

Part 5:Manya and Manav:  Their brother sister bond is just like a sea for me, each time I dive I discover something new. Manav's Possessiveness, his fear of losing the only family he has in her, his anger over manya hugging adya, whereas so far she would hav just hugged him, his insecurity of losing his importance in manya's life to a small chuhiya was all very well built up.

Part6: facing the truth: Manya's reaction on finding her pictures in Uday's room was just magical for me. Her intial sock, then her slight happiness and losing herself in those pictures, recognizing the love shared by the two people in the pic, and then sudden realization that it cannot be her but her look-alike, was all very well complied, I could feel her every reaction. Clap

Part7: Manveer ManveerDay Dreaming: Again very well written Shana. Their hesitation towards each other, their want and attraction towards each other, they trying so hard to pull back and hold back is so amazingly described. Bechare they cant hold back for long Wink, coz they r Manveer. Manyata is a magnet to our Uday who has turned himself into iron. His effort of repelling from her on facts that would in future prove she is not mayata. but still the unexplained attraction towards her would be heck of a journey Big smile to be part of

A wonderful Update ShanaThumbs Up, update soon and thanks for the PM Hug




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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
lovely update
yaar why u always end the part..when it gets interesting... :P

luvd adya nd manya meeting...bechari manya..adya aur manav k beech mein phass gayii..
hope first stupid minakshi ko nhi pata chale manya ki real identity... kamini ne evil plans banane mein masters kiya hai.. :@
cont soon :)

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Beautiful dear! Absolutely beautiful!

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gal u r one amazing writer.u just manage to potray every expression,every feeling so well dat i cant stop maself frm rereading ur chap.i lovd it as usual.n plz upd8 soon thanx fr pmBig smile

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
hey shana
Speech less!!
Ahh still i wud do the insy minsy comment
Adya n manyat meet was so beautifully described
I felt happy n sad at the same moment
Happy coz they got to meet each other after a gap nd sad they had to be way frm each other sad for manyata she wasnt with her child wen she needed her the most..sad for adya..she didnt got the mothers love dat she deserves...
Aww manyat falling for her husband all over again ...she cud feel his genuine love for her/manyata...the love which tricks her to be sum1 else
Ahh my princey is bounded by the promise and duties...hope the reports are out soon ...no more jhamela no more dooriyan please

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

Hi Shana Hug, were do I start u keep ozzing such wonderful updates one after other that at times we are short of words. A brilliantly compiled chapterClap. I'm saying brillant coz here u are setting the base of Adya-Manva relationship which is of cute nok-jhok and innocence (Just wondering would Manva be a like a big brother to Adya, or just a mere friend).Plus in this chapter u r also showing the depth of want and happiness Adya is having towards her mom.

Comming to ur update:

Part 1: Adya and her encounter with her Mama: What a opening to the update shana Clap, outstanding. U used my so called trump card Adya at the very beginning. The way u have put up the scene, Manya sleeping and Adya touching and feeling her to make sure she is no dream and a reality as suraj told her was just amazing. Manya's reaction to Adya and Adya hugging her Mom, calling Manya her mom all was rightly put.Clap

Part 2: Suraj Suraj is meenakshi naam ke andhera ko dur karne wala  Suraj ROFL: I'm falling in love with this character. U better use this beautifully etched charachter to its full calliber in favor of Manya in ur future updates. I must give it to u for the whole  Lalpari concept . That was innocent, refreshing and so enduring to here from litle Adya. A beautiful  lie that she has been living, lie told to her by her elders to keep her mom alive for her sake.Just remarkable work here ShanaClap, And suraj hating MinakshiAngry was like icing on the cake Wink

Part 3:Manya and Adya connection: Manya holding Adya in her arms,adya losing herself and finding solace in her moms arms , manya feeling her own flesh, recognizing her to be her own part was again well constructed.

Part 4: OOt and Chuhiya ROFL: Both of them are so adorable.What cool nick names. I was having a stupid smile on my face while reading their bantering to and fro. Good work again Clap (here again u could use both of them to team up and bring Uday and Manya together against Minashi, it would a heck of a scene to read Wink)

Part 5:Manya and Manav:  Their brother sister bond is just like a sea for me, each time I dive I discover something new. Manav's Possessiveness, his fear of losing the only family he has in her, his anger over manya hugging adya, whereas so far she would hav just hugged him, his insecurity of losing his importance in manya's life to a small chuhiya was all very well built up.

Part6: facing the truth: Manya's reaction on finding her pictures in Uday's room was just magical for me. Her intial sock, then her slight happiness and losing herself in those pictures, recognizing the love shared by the two people in the pic, and then sudden realization that it cannot be her but her look-alike, was all very well complied, I could feel her every reaction. Clap

Part7: Manveer ManveerDay Dreaming: Again very well written Shana. Their hesitation towards each other, their want and attraction towards each other, they trying so hard to pull back and hold back is so amazingly described. Bechare they cant hold back for long Wink, coz they r Manveer. Manyata is a magnet to our Uday who has turned himself into iron. His effort of repelling from her on facts that would in future prove she is not mayata. but still the unexplained attraction towards her would be heck of a journey Big smile to be part of

A wonderful Update ShanaThumbs Up, update soon and thanks for the PM Hug






Hay Meri Man pasand Rajeev Masand (he is a film critic on NDTV India)

Chitra Behna  aap ne to apne dhansu comments se hume mar he dala frankly speaking now I try to write more carefully as I want to get better marks LOL

As for wondering whether Manav will be a big bro or just a mere friend to Adya then dear let me clear he will be none...

Actually he is going to be a child fantasy of our princess Adya while for Manav ,the so called OOnt Adya will be a mere irritating chuhiya .Just wait and watch the nok jhoke and funny child like ways our Adya tries to make friend with Oont and get rejected and try again and again.

As Adya is princess for her riyasat but for Manav she is justa  little chuhiya LOL while for little princess Adya Manav is gonna be heck of challenge to make friends with .

Manveer Manveer Manveer well dear u have understood very well their future relationship status in my FF a tensed love trying hard to ooze but wrapped tight enough  ,till when well now that u have to read Wink

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