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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:03am | IP Logged
I want to read how will manya react when she see adya. Great one continue sooon thanks for the pm

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by sweetshab

beautiful update!!

I loved the very word in the update ..the way manyat behaving after her face off with UV ..they way UV is restless after seeing his long lost wife...he knws its her, he believes she is manyata...the way he shows his pain img m dead ...he saw a ray of hope after emptiness filled his life he saw ray of happiness.. loved his convo with the jungli billi's frame..awww dat was soo cute nd lovely ...he just wants his answers..the way manyata reacted seeing his pain was mesmerizing...magical

his soul recognised her..dat is wat love is u get to the person hidden in hundred veils...her the case is her memory veiled in the span of five long painful years

Cont soon :)


Haay Shabs ,what a comment seems u have added few extra lines in the FF update itself ,the bold once in u'r comment make me remember the song from Katti Patang

<div align="center"><font color="#FF0000">Rahe koi sau parton me chhipe sharam se
Nazar koi lakh chipaye apne sanam se
Aa he jata hai jis par dil aana hota hai

Pyar Deewana hota hai parwana hota hai ...

</font></div>


I m soo glued to ur FF shana i imagine everything it so beautiful the way u write it shows another way of love which most of the ppl ignore or unaware of ...charm of love nd relations after the existance of distance between them..i believe love grows with distance(i know a v filmy line) and love has no limit ?..
pyaar karo toh bepanah ...warna haddo main toh sirf shartey nibhayii jaati hai:)

And pyaar deewana song is one of my favv ;D

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ARDMG

I want to read how will manya react when she see adya. Great one continue sooon thanks for the pm


Adya is so much in demand on this FF

I am really so happy to know that my readers are not just mad behind manveer  romance but they love children so much ,really that shows we are really going to be very good mothers in future
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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:56am | IP Logged


Shani shani da chapter was beautifulll seriously n0w i dnt knw how to explain it in w0rdx how much i love da way u write! U explain everythng s0o beautifuly and m glad uday didnt jumpd on manyata he showd his maturity by handling the situati0n so perfectly bt he can easily find whethr shex manyata or n0t by the SCAR :p bt i really like da way he said he w0nt let her leave hm again i want manyata to fall again for uday! The st0ry ix superb plx do update on suday u kn0w how much desperate i m to read m0re. . . .
N yea i wana c how adya wil react i guess she wil rec0gnize her m0m n manyata t0o wil feel a bond wid hr i so wana read m0re sunday u shud cum ASAP:O

Edited by MsLuscious - 28 July 2012 at 3:57am

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious



Shani shani da chapter was beautifulll seriously n0w i dnt knw how to explain it in w0rdx how much i love da way u write! U explain everythng s0o beautifuly and m glad uday didnt jumpd on manyata he showd his maturity by handling the situati0n so perfectly bt he can easily find whethr shex manyata or n0t by the SCAR :p bt i really like da way he said he w0nt let her leave hm again i want manyata to fall again for uday! The st0ry ix superb plx do update on suday u kn0w how much desperate i m to read m0re. . . .
N yea i wana c how adya wil react i guess she wil rec0gnize her m0m n manyata t0o wil feel a bond wid hr i so wana read m0re sunday u shud cum ASAP:O


Scar Scar Scar well that all will come later and very romantically indeed abhi to he UV is gonna try all sort of detective and scientific stuffs l

Well dear just read lot is to come Smile

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
SUPERB FANTABULOUS...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by MsLuscious




Shani shani da chapter was beautifulll seriously n0w i dnt knw how to explain it in w0rdx how much i love da way u write! U explain everythng s0o beautifuly and m glad uday didnt jumpd on manyata he showd his maturity by handling the situati0n so perfectly bt he can easily find whethr shex manyata or n0t by the SCAR :p bt i really like da way he said he w0nt let her leave hm again i want manyata to fall again for uday! The st0ry ix superb plx do update on suday u kn0w how much desperate i m to read m0re. . . .

N yea i wana c how adya wil react i guess she wil rec0gnize her m0m n manyata t0o wil feel a bond wid hr i so wana read m0re sunday u shud cum ASAP:O
Scar Scar Scar well that all will come later and very romantically indeed abhi to he UV is gonna try all sort of detective and scientific stuffs lWell dear just read lot is to come

wud luv to read m0re :D

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Posted: 28 July 2012 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Day DreamingPartyHey Shana Hug, Sorry for the delay in commenting. And thankyou for a wonderful updateClap, loved it to the core (has to explain why I read the update for like 4 time alreadyLOL)Love is indeed in the air, and I  love the fragrance of this eternal love Clap

Comming to the update:

Part 1: Manyata and Manav: Alluring description of a bro-sis bond, especially the fighting and hugging while losing scene, that is exactly what my bro would do when we were kids, loved it!Clap I just re-read this para for like 3 times, and kept smiling to myself thinking of my bro.Tongue

Part2: Manya's hesitation and Fear. Fear of losing herself to her obsession to yuvraj Udayveer was amazingly put. It also depicts the Depth in which she worships him as a person who dint visit Haridwar just because it took away his wife from him.

Wanna know how she would react when she knows that her this flawless hero has been sleeping around with MinakshiAngry .Being from haridwar and from Shastriji's teaching, she might not digust this fact that easy, but then again she is Manyata who never fails to suprise our prince and us Wink

Part 3:Udayveers Restlessness . Again very well composed. Kind of covered up for his Thanda reaction while they first met.Hesitation of going near Gurujis grand-daughter plus her incapability of recognizing him has created an inner turmoil inside him, which u hav very well explained. Udayveer being sleepless, his way too formal interaction with Suraj all adds up good. Liked itThumbs Up

Part 4: Manveer meeting Day Dreaming This was how it was!Embarrassed Just intense!Again loved your work here. His eagerness to just touch and feel her, her unexplained attraction  and desire towards him, her embarrassment , her anger, her melting just by the mere sight of pain in his eyes everything was just perfect girlClap. Their passionate hug, but still a hesitation and doubt in her eyes, and Uday realizing and understand even slightest of her expression, and releasing her was just magical. In normal case I would want the hug to last, but here, breaking the hug was what that did the magic.They r just so perfect.Embarrassed They just make u sit back and say, gosh destiny had to bring them together no matter what, coz even destiny wants to explore and feel their unconditinal love and rare connection that they share . 


Future prediction : I guess Minakshi is gonna do everything possible to make sure she is not proved Manyata, like changing the blood samples for DNA etc. Wanna see how they cross all the hurdles, waiting for the Devgad Royal family's reaction on Manya, and also Unnati, miss her yaar. Even if no one does, but Uday and Unnati and Vijay bhia are three people who would recognize Manyata no matter what! And yes We have the trump card "Princess Adya", no mother can resist the warmth of her own blood!


Off done with my analysis cum comment, hope I dont bother u with these comments, If so then I can PM u my thoughts on next update instead of commenting it on ur ff.Let me know Hug


Edited by chitra_rao - 28 July 2012 at 9:46pm

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