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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

loved the updat shana... it was nice to see uday realising that she is manyata without any proof.. n how his hidden and long lost feelings cropped up.. n he knew this can only be his princess, his wife who cud make him feel like this.. n also manya's body responding to him even though she doesnt have memories.. SmileSmile
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and also his turmoil that she is his guruji's grand daughter... but in case uday is doubtful he can see the scar she had got during their sword fight as kids..?

urrghh meenakshi stays at his mahal?? Ouch

waiting for sunday's update.. pls make dat one also romantic Big smileEmbarrassed


It will be romantic dear chapter name he aisa hai hai ki kya karen  as for Manya she will feel connection with  evrything in deja vu form ,if u remember she was struck by the fountain when she entered UV mansion andnow UV is having strange effects on her plus Adya her own flesh and blood is still to comeSmile

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahi0809

Hmmm Uday already feels his Manyata inside Manya by her very smell ... WOW... now that is love!!

Liked to see the perfect royal Uday losing his emotions once in a while and succumbing to his desires. I liked his talk with Manyata's portrait too. I am happy to see that he kept her alive in some way in his life in these 5 years.


Thanks dear u liked it pleasure is all mineSmileSmile
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Plus, Shana I want a convo of Uday with M's portrait (like a flash back moment that occured within the past 5 years) that she knows that he only loves her even though he uses women for pleasure, he could share a bed with a woman but never in their bedroom... never their bed and no other woman could ever make a place in his heart... he is just trying to keep his body alive, its only a ritual for him now as a man and nothing more. I want to see that loyal side of his heart that does not like it but does it just to keep his body running.

Will sure keep in mind as UV can not be fully redeemed as he is really on the wrong side of ethics but then dear this is the worst and most ugly truth about men they do succum in weak moments ,though they are head over heals in love with their wives,   a women wont give up but men mostly do in those flipping moments Sigh ! ,their are exceptions but then it does not mean u just leave them but have them as leaving them may lead to even more disastrous results Ouch


 I know this scenario sounds kinda cheesy... but somehow I always envisioned a perfect lover to be loyal in nature too and would like to see the characteristic of 'loyalty' in Uday's personality. His charm, intellect, persona, attitude etc always comes out in one way for another... his loyalty should come out too... its just a suggestion!!

Their is no perfect love dear as its an ideal case that does not exist sorry i know i sound saddidt but then its the truth,but yes their is love and a very deep enthralling and romantic one,u r the luckist woman  if u get place in men's heart as body is so so physical
 (its only my view pls , u'r views are very beautiful and very much applicable in present world )



The story seems to be moving well. Can't wait to see how Adya will react and is Minakshi still in the house?... will she see Manya right away or will she escape from her eyes for a few days? Can't wait to see what measures Uday will take to uncover the truth. I wonder if Manav's gonna spill the truth about Manya's drowning nightmares or somehow she herself will blow her cover.


Manikshi is gonna see Manya in next part itself,but the truth wont come out so easily even after all spilling beans as solid proof will always be lacking all thanks to conniving Minakshi  though UV will always have a gut feeling for Manya being Manyata


Plus, I hope to see Uday put Manya in situations and keep on judging her reactions like how she reacts seeing her favorite food in front of her etc... since we all know Manyata is such a foodie...

here i have planned really strange things meet u soon on breakfast table on Sunday Wink


I love your FF...  it gives me endless possibilities to think/ imagine and I like this feeling.
Great update... can't wait for Sunday!!


Thanku Thanku ThankuBig smileBig smile

And one more thing... Will this Manya make some awesome nick names for Uday? Even though she respects him... we all know how witty Manyata was in the nicknaming department.

Well here i will try to plan something am not kinda sure as this manya has Shastriji effect on her ,a king of sophesticated and  respectful but then she is one heck of bold in expressing herself specially in front of UV ,I have planned some really good dialogues and confessions,they may not be funny as I really lack adding hindi dailogue skills in my FF but yes they will be bold Wink



Edited by shana0127 - 26 July 2012 at 11:59pm

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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
Fantastic update Shana!!

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

loved the update very well done!
Hey shana u said u will update on thrusday... hmmm i can not see... piz update

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saneha85

Originally posted by adventure_gurl

loved the update very well done!
Hey shana u said u will update on thrusday... hmmm i can not see... piz update


Sneha dear its already updated see page 26 it contains the first part of chapter 2 Smile
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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MsLuscious


C0ngratx shana ur FF is the best one of this forum! Coz ur dix ff hav got alot of likex i havnt seen so much likex on othr ffs now days every single writer of ths forum is fantastic bt urx ix g0ing 0n really nice track!
thr should b award system here 0n da forum too i bet u wud have w0n da best ff coz u really really deserve it:)


Thank u Sarah,, Smile

Didn't actually observed that much before  ,but yes u r right every FF writer is fantastic with his own fantasies and unique story line .Smile

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:27am | IP Logged
superb update dear..plz continue soon...n plz PM me next time..this time u didn't PMSmile

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Shana you are freaking brilliant :) i loved it to bits yaar but i have a request please make manyata remember everything soon and specially change manyata's dressing because i want her to feel like manyata Embarrassed and thank you big time for showing a more mitoure and sensible manyata !i love you please have a nice scene where manyata see's adya sleeping,goes into adya's room and talks to a sleeping adya  in a motherly way in such a situation that she starts getting flashbacks of her past Clap

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