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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Hi Shana, sorry for the delay in replying, I need'nt say this again and again, but still after reading every chapter I'm compelled to say that u r one heck of a writerClap. The best part of ur writing is that it is king of concealed writing. I mean u can keep re- reading your chapter and every time I re-read I feel find something new in it, I tend to go more deeper into it than the last time I read the chappy.


Very few writers can write that way. so Hats off to u Clap. Thanks for the PM doll Hug

Now chane ke jhad se neehe utarLOL. Ok about ur chappy:

First part: well written, wonderfully explains how Manya was found, and her relationship with her bro and Dadaji. 
Part two: Again good explanation of How Uday has turned out to be a machine, but still has some human side left to him when it comes to his daughter.

Part three: the Uday and Manya's meeting seems to be rushed, dint quite explain what all went through Uday when he first saw Manya after five years.I know u cannot put it all in one chapter. I had expected atizhbazi when they first meet.
Atizhbazi as in, no hugging or touching, but plain intense staring which would burn the whole world around. That is the intesity of Manveer, they dont need to be touchy touchy for their romance, just their passion in their eyes in enough.The feeling of seeing his only love's look alike after 5 long years was very thanda.(Now that just my opinion.)I know u would explain Udays inner turmoil well in the next coming chapters, but the initial reaction of Uday on seeing a look alike of his princesses dint work for me.

Nevertheless enjoyed the chapter, and yes continue soon and do PM me dollBig smile


Edited by chitra_rao - 24 July 2012 at 8:37am

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chitra_rao

Hi Shana, sorry for the delay in replying, I need'nt say this again and again, but still after reading every chapter I'm compelled to say that u r one heck of a writerClap. The best part of ur writing is that it is king of concealed writing. I mean u can keep re- reading your chapter and every time I re-read I feel find something new in it, I tend to go more deeper into it than the last time I read the chappy.


Very few writers can write that way. so Hats off to u Clap. Thanks for the PM doll Hug

Now chane ke jhad se neehe utarLOL. Ok about ur chappy:

First part: well written, wonderfully explains how Manya was found, and her relationship with her bro and Dadaji. 
Part two: Again good explanation of How Uday has turned out to be a machine, but still has some human side left to him when it comes to his daughter.

Part three: the Uday and Manya's meeting seems to be rushed, dint quite explain what all went through Uday when he first saw Manya after five years.I know u cannot put it all in one chapter. I had expected atizhbazi when they first meet.
Atizhbazi as in, no hugging or touching, but plain intense staring which would burn the whole world around. That is the intesity of Manveer, they dont need to be touchy touchy for their romance, just their passion in their eyes in enough.The feeling of seeing his only love's look alike after 5 long years was very thanda.(Now that just my opinion.)I know u would explain Udays inner turmoil well in the next coming chapters, but the initial reaction of Uday on seeing a look alike of his princesses dint work for me.

Nevertheless enjoyed the chapter, and yes continue soon and do PM me dollBig smile


Thanks Chitra

Good to see u back in comment mode as  u had really gone in like mode since long .Smile

I fell down really hard from channe ki jhadLOL, thanks a lot for the Masand types critical analysis, so i thing i got 3 out of 5 , which means super hit good I will try 5 out of 5 which means oscars Big smile

As for UV reaction well dear the rainy night is not over yet,read next update  i promise u wont regret it Smile



Edited by shana0127 - 24 July 2012 at 2:39pm

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Hi Shana 
read your both FFS in once
have to say ,,,you are an awseme writer
waiting for next part

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rainurubal

Hi Shana 
read your both FFS in once
have to say ,,,you are an awseme writer
waiting for next part


Thanks Rainu

I hope u like my next updates as well

Smile

Shana



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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 7:34am | IP Logged
Hey Shana will you update tomorrow?... for sure?
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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahi0809

Hey Shana will you update tomorrow?... for sure?


Yes dear will try my best if could not complete whole will update its part...dont worry that too will try to make worth reading Wink,love topic hai to love to rahega phir bechare UV ne abhi Manya ko thik se ..well read  it tomorrow ,Smile

one think sure u wont regret reading it again to make sure what i actually wrote LOL

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
luvd it...

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Posted: 25 July 2012 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
Hey Shana :)

It might sound a bit stalkerish but I love your FF...I have never posted a comment as I started following it just a few days ago and I finished in it one go...love the concept and how you bring about the twist and turns...wish the show followed your FF...one of the major reasons why I don't follow FFs is that once I start following a FF the writer stops updating it LOL...hope you will continue writing even after the show gets over...would love to continue imagining ManVeer through your FF :D

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