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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
omg that was so intersting...loved it shana..u r working really hard..ClapClapClap
love the prologue..so our manya likes yuvraj udayveer singh that's perfect..
 Manya has only one dream, a dream to see and touch  Yuvraaj Udaveer in person . 
ahem...BlushingWink
and the character sketch of uv is amazing..thank god he didn't get married like all other heroes they claim alot that they love their wives but then after their death they get married happily...Ouchand that's not just in stories that real i have seen this situation of a very very close relative...so i hate those kinda man...but our uv is the best...so thank u for that!!Embarrassed
and looking forward to read about adya..story is sooo interesting...i love it..one of my fav..
update soon...
eagerly waiting...

jenny



Edited by -JEHAN- - 18 July 2012 at 5:57pm

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -JEHAN-

omg that was so intersting...loved it shana..u r working really hard..ClapClapClap
love the prologue..so our manya likes yuvraj udayveer singh that's perfect..
 Manya has only one dream, a dream to see and touch  Yuvraaj Udaveer in person . 
ahem...BlushingWink
and the character sketch of uv is amazing..thank god he didn't get married like all other heroes they claim alot that they love their wives but then after their death they get married happily...Ouchand that's not just in stories that real i have seen this situation of a very very close relative...so i hate those kinda man...but our uv is the best...so thank u for that!!Embarrassed
and looking forward to read about adya..story is sooo interesting...i love it..one of my fav..
update soon...
eagerly waiting...

jenny



Thanks Jenny,

Ab bechari Manya kare bhi to kya kare she is a girl like us Dadaji ne apne fav. student ki story soona soona ke Manya ka dilodimaag Udayveer Udayveer kar diya hai.LOL

As for Udayveers marriage he can give his loved wife's place to nobody, not even Manya the seem to be look alike of  Manyata .Poor Manya has to really work hard for himWink



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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:31pm | IP Logged
Again a fabulous work
u need a standing ovation for ur amazing writings
now i hav become ur fan too after reading such good work
plz con. soon & thank u 4 the pm

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
It was asweme. Very beautiful. Is manayta dead? Please don't kill her. Don't make manayta s her look alike. Adda needs mother. No woman can take mother's place in a child's life no matter what. I don't know if you are agree with me or not but it is reality. You can turn the story like that: manayta s is manayta. Mr. S found her in the riverbank 5 years ago. Manayta has lost her memory. Or, maybe she is mana s. Real manayta is somewhere eles. Mana s is her look alike. Manayta will come back at the right time. It's just my suggssion. But please don't kill manayta. That's my request. Update soon and thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
SHANA! I am absolutely dying- like there are no words for how much i am actually dying right now!!! 
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Archi02

It was asweme. Very beautiful. Is manayta dead? Please don't kill her. Don't make manayta s her look alike. Adda needs mother. No woman can take mother's place in a child's life no matter what. I don't know if you are agree with me or not but it is reality. You can turn the story like that: manayta s is manayta. Mr. S found her in the riverbank 5 years ago. Manayta has lost her memory. Or, maybe she is mana s. Real manayta is somewhere eles. Mana s is her look alike. Manayta will come back at the right time. It's just my suggssion. But please don't kill manayta. That's my request. Update soon and thanks for the pm.
AGREE WITH U ITS MY REQ TOO DONT KILL MANYTA :(I THINK MANYA IS MANYTA RIGHT????
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
OMG...superb...mazing i have no words...and yaar sana me too agree with @archi02 plzzz...dnt kill manyata its a humble request... she is a of soul our uday...no one can take her place...plzzz...update soon...i m dieing to read next chp. Thanx for PM.

Edited by swetsurati - 18 July 2012 at 8:00pm
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by -JEHAN-

omg that was so intersting...loved it shana..u r working really hard..ClapClapClap
love the prologue..so our manya likes yuvraj udayveer singh that's perfect..
 Manya has only one dream, a dream to see and touch  Yuvraaj Udaveer in person . 
ahem...BlushingWink
and the character sketch of uv is amazing..thank god he didn't get married like all other heroes they claim alot that they love their wives but then after their death they get married happily...Ouchand that's not just in stories that real i have seen this situation of a very very close relative...so i hate those kinda man...but our uv is the best...so thank u for that!!Embarrassed
and looking forward to read about adya..story is sooo interesting...i love it..one of my fav..
update soon...
eagerly waiting...

jenny



Thanks Jenny,

Ab bechari Manya kare bhi to kya kare she is a girl like us Dadaji ne apne fav. student ki story soona soona ke Manya ka dilodimaag Udayveer Udayveer kar diya hai.LOL

As for Udayveers marriage he can give his loved wife's place to nobody, not even Manya the seem to be look alike of  Manyata .Poor Manya has to really work hard for himWink





Yaar even if she does... make it somehow that Udayveer retains the Manyata alive in him always.. make him fall in love with Manya's Manyata like antics, but never give up M's place to anyone...  he only belongs to Manyata no matter what her look alike does although she makes her place in his heart.


Edited by mahi0809 - 18 July 2012 at 8:55pm

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