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.maleficent. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 25 August 2012
Posts: 13656

Posted: 30 September 2012 at 11:26pm | IP Logged

hii shana finally u update Star

awesome worth waiting update Thumbs Up

i always love your writing style 

so manya finally realize that she is madly in love with udayveer  at last

but alas! its to late 

udayveer scold little adya  out of  fustration poor little child

adya is soo cute in this chapter

 evil cousin intro was fab (i guess akash part 2 )LOL

hate minakshi as hellAngry

love scene between driver rakesh and manya he make her realize her love for udayveer 

manya will join vikram's company so uv will be angry like hell 

and more misunderstanding among manveer which will bring them close (i think so)Wink

so you will update by this wenesday or next wenesday 

so plzz update soon 

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adorable_rana IF-Dazzler

Joined: 31 May 2012
Posts: 3489

Posted: 01 October 2012 at 12:36am | IP Logged

Awesome and superb update diThumbs Up

It was so emotional and touchy update na...I felt bad for both...UV is tired of running behind her and how can she accept the thing she is not sure herself but still want the love and warmth of the family of her look alike and don't even know the reason for it...I really felt bad...

Ok really looking forward to Vikram's entry but it will lead to more misunderstanding is not good...already poor girl is going through alot...

But I guess next update is gonna be more dynamite...but as usual fabulous update and the way you write makes it more interesting

but I have question has UV completely disowned her and will left her alone as she will be joining Vikram's office so he will not do anything anymore and give up on her?????????

Now update soon said you will within two days...then do update haan...want to read moreDay Dreaming


Shahi01 Goldie

Joined: 30 July 2012
Posts: 1720

Posted: 01 October 2012 at 12:57am | IP Logged
WinkThat was a beautiful update. Your writing style and skills are par excellence. Finally Manya realises her feelings, felt so bad for little adya but am glad udayveer has stood his ground, just thinking about minakshi and vikram is making me Confused As if manya and udayveer have enough problems on their own. This evil duo will create more drama. All in all ur story is brilliant. Plz pm when u update as receive one on this update. ... 
thejazzgal IF-Rockerz

Joined: 02 January 2008
Posts: 6339

Posted: 01 October 2012 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Awesoem Update again shana!!

aah nice intro of Vikram..
poor minakshi she cant EVEN marry him :P 

ooh.. a biggg thanks to Rakesh 
aww poor adya  
Manya its never too late ... u must hav rum to him n made him yours forever!! 

guess they'll meet often ... thanks to Manya job in UV's office/company!

i wass sooo waiting for Manyata's realization tht Uv is not bad but caring and loves Her soo much.. loves his Wifey Maharahi Manyata 

Against each other.. Amidst Love ??umm.. Shana waiting to see whats gonna happen nxt! waiting for ur update after 2 days

do cont soon

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hans1998 Senior Member

Joined: 17 May 2012
Posts: 222

Posted: 01 October 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
jiji mujhay pm krna bhul gai app ;( ;( ;( but anyways the update was superb finally manyata got to know the truth Clap  Waiting for next update

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Jarin04 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 26 October 2011
Posts: 13311

Posted: 01 October 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Di it was really emotional. Feeling bad for Manya. Now she left udayveer mansion nd even his company now how will they meet again? Pls give me some hints. Last but not the least thnx for the nice update.

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vampire12345678 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 April 2012
Posts: 5836

Posted: 01 October 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
k fianlly u updated shana Big smile
finally the 6643 please worked well Tongue
now as per your promise u have to update in two days so will be eagerly waitingTongue
k now coming back to the update
it was vey beautifully writtenClap
i loved the introduction of vikram 
do u have any specific face for him ? if no then i will imagine him as karan tacker so he can romance manyaEmbarrassed
i loved how this part was fast emotional meaningful great all at the same timeClap
i am glad that manya realised that uday did not force her but she was the one who used seduction powers LOL
the whole thing was very balanced and nicely Clap
shana each time u update u just get better and betterBig smile
i loved this update thanks for updating
but manveer romance was missing in this update
please next update should have manveer and jealous uday please 
i really want to see how u write jealous uday
at the end i would just say 
rocking update shana Clap
love u so so muchStarHug

Edited by vampire12345678 - 01 October 2012 at 6:47am

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_Grey_ IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 29 July 2012
Posts: 14616

Posted: 01 October 2012 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Atlast u updated i am so thankful to u
and next tym v want a long update
vikram's entry ws fab
ab uday ko jealous dekh k bda mazaa ayega Big smile
bt manyata ka dimaag itna slow kyu hai bdi jldi realize ho gya dat she loves him and now she is guilty (what the hell) Angry
Loved the update shana Clap
And luv u Hug Hug

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