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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Archi02

Amezing...just asweme dear. Very nice update. Manayta doesn't have any effect of her past? I'm comfused at a point. Why didn't the gurd recognise manayta? Please update soon. I'm waiting.


Well dear its five years ,guards are new and most of the servants are new as well accept few whom
 u will find in next update.Smile

My fav. servants are stil working at UV Mansion I have even transported few like doctor uncle LOL

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Great update!!... Uday's expression was bang on... hate Minakshi as he still lets her in his bed knowing how strongly she feels for him.

Can't wait for thursday now... love is in the air... HAWWWDay Dreaming

P.S: Can you also describe Manya's clothing and her style now that you envision in your mind. I can't wait to see how you create moments between the two of them. Wanna see them falling head over heels in love with each other. Also I wonder what Uday felt when he touched Manya... So dreamy!<3


Edited by mahi0809 - 23 July 2012 at 12:48am
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Once again... A job well done!Thumbs Up
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
wow hope she gets her memory back soon!

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mahi0809

Great update!!... Uday's expression was bang on... hate Minakshi as he still lets her in his bed knowing how strongly she feels for him.

Can't wait for thursday now... love is in the air... HAWWWDay Dreaming

P.S: Can you also describe Manya's clothing and her style now that you envision in your mind. I can't wait to see how you create moments between the two of them. Wanna see them falling head over heels in love with each other. Also I wonder what Uday felt when he touched Manya... So dreamy!<3


Will put u'r points in mind next time as for Uday's feeling when he touched Manya nice point how could i forget to elaborate that am gonna elaborate my last para by evening ... feelings are my fav subject yaar

Thanku u'r ideas are really great

Cloths-- edited the part where uv first sees Manya as now I have added her clothings .Actully I had it  in my original but somehow got cut in update thanks for reminding for them next time will have UV clothing i mind too as these descriptions  are real jaan  of a fictionSmile



Edited by shana0127 - 23 July 2012 at 8:14am
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 1:19am | IP Logged
Amazing Update. I really don't like this memory loss tracks in serial. But ur story is really great. I love it. I hate Minakshi. I m waiting 4 Minakshi's reaction when she will c M. But shana UV is sleeping with Minakshi. Won't it hurt M if she know her husband was sleeping with her killer.

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sorry for commenting late this part was super awesome and lovely loved there first meeting i wish they would have hugged but this was awesome also loved the way you portrayed udayveer and minaxi relationship please update soon i loved this writing i love your story it is my favouriteBig smile 

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shana0127

Originally posted by Sunshinegirll

nice concept... really loved ur first book married for riyasath... waiting for this one..
wud love to see uday realising she is manyata indeed but has lost her memory.. n also him working to make his princess remember the sweet times spent together...
n also adya remembering her mother from photos and running to manya...
minakshi wud be shocked to see manya... will she start her evil plans again to harm manyata?
she might probably... but this minakshi shud hav got that uday can never be his... i mean even after 5 yrs os his separation with manyata uday hasnt decided to move on.. he truly loves only manyataEmbarrassed
haye i cant wait to see uday and manya meeting EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Thanks dearSmile

U really know most of the story not what i have to do is to pen it down in an entertaining way ,hope i will be able to do itConfused




hey shana knowing the plot/story is nothing.. ur writing is too good that we actually imagine those things happening.. dat is why i keep waiting desperately for ur updates... d first chapter was nice... the way uday seems to lose control n then regains composure.. n also him saying 'u are mine' EmbarrassedWink i kno he meant responsibility but she is his princess after allSmile

d next chapter's heading is nice.. please add romantic scenes between them... i dunno how u hav thought of proceeding... but it wil be nice to see manya falling for uday before knowing who she actually is... and uday enjoying this knowing she is manyata...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed and also manya becoming close to adya like a best friend then later knowing that she is her mother... but however u proceed i am sure i will luv ur story... (experience frm d previous bookSmile)

poor adya dunno how she is going to handle this... manya denying that she is her mother.. Cry

pls make uday realise that she is indeed manyata soon... after all he is a prince.. he shud be able to gather info from haridwar regarding how manya came to shashtri's care before 5 years.. n also minakshi needs to be taught a lesson... this female has been trying so hard n has achieved nothing but she is till not ready to give up... hope someday uday throws her out of his life completely... i mean i dont want her to be even an aquaintance.
this girl needs hard lessonsAngryAngry also wud love to see minakshi getting shocked seeing manya... n getting hurt seeing uday close with manya... this girl truly deserves this.. for all that she has done..

waiting eagerly for thurs... pls make it a long one like the first chapterSmileSmile


Edited by Sunshinegirll - 23 July 2012 at 2:09am

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