Originally posted by: shana0127
Well in Book I he never knew Manyata loves him ,he was all in all bachelor spree so the case was different .
Here in Book II he is a lover who lost his his beloved and is a father but then a man too He does loose his balance may go squandering around but then its not necessary that he will sleep everyday with a new one.He has a big business to take care of Minakshi does try succeeds as well but not often dear.
Minakshi is his business partner they may share something more sometime but then he has no commitments.Dont worry will logically take up this issue in next update
Yes UV will find culprit Minakshi as well as scar and Manya being Mnayata but poor UV his way to his wife wont be so easy.
He will have to woo her again all anew .
Originally posted by: shana0127
Its not blabber dear its just that u pointed out something that others didnt
Yes UV is all set to get his Mnayata but poor Manya is all caught in , a girl who has been taught to be Manya is finding Yuvrani Mnayata tag on herself a bit suffocating and thats why in coming chapter she willtry to run from UV and all such things which will try to take her loved identity her loved dadaji and Manav from him whom he thinks are her real identity.
Its only UV who will make her realize who she actully is in his own ways.
I think u know his ways dont u ๐
Originally posted by: chitra_rao
Hey Shana,
Lovely update๐, u r a very good writer indeed, whatever was written was so good that I could imagine everything๐, something clicked to me somethings dint๐.Analysis:Part1 : Uday and his blessed instincts: Loved this part๐. In this part u have reasoned out why he doesn't believe the reports. It is just not his plain want to not believe the reports but his logic and instincts. This really worked for me, here it shows why UV is UV and why there cannot be any other UV. He is just matchless.Part 2:Manya makes her place in office: The whole dress code thing was so well articulated, but felt so proud of UV when even he stared following the dress- code, not just for reducing the displeasure of his employees , but also as a token of his respect for Mrs Breganza's decision.Manya's office atmosphere was very well put shana ๐. You know Mrs Breganza is somewhat like my boss but my boss is also little more caring, so Mrs Breganza just clicks with me๐.Manya realizing that she has no right to judge UV, was very right and good, she decides to be strong here and I kind of believe that she would not judge him, but fails miserably in the following parts ๐.Part 3: UV testing his intinct and yipeee he wins ๐คช๐ฅณ. shana what a master piece this part is๐. The whole UV manya secne in his cabin was awesome, the board meeting scene just bowled me over. Everything was done with so finess. loved it๐. UV testing his own instinct and making sure his heart is not overtakingg his maind was again fab work ๐. I bow down to u for this work. I so wished to see something like this. Thanku shana ๐คPart 4: Anya ka maha gyan and Manya hui parehsan๐คฃ: Gosh the ishqzade song pareshan fits so well on Manya here ๐๐. Well again very well written ๐. The way Anya analyses things I really like it. And Manya very cutely thinking of adya the moment Anya suggests shopping was so natural and cute. It also shows how much adya has grown into her.Part 5:Aman-Manya, outcome jealous Uday, and I love it ๐ณ๐: The whole jealouse uday was a treat for the readers Shana ๐. Thank u so much ๐ค. Loved every thing here. And the staricase part was just wow. Loved it. What I loved the most was UV's confidence in Manya being his princess. He doesn't need any proofs, he knows it. He knows that she will be his someday, but just not yet, and that is what makes him control himself. He also back off to not make manya regret later which again so very UV-ish. I so loved the whole UV character sketch in this chapter. It is like u added a new layer, a new dimension to his character.๐But here Manya disappointed me big time๐. I would have also wanted her to stop UV. She flowing in her want of desire was fair enough, anybody would melt in the arms of UV, but she should have composed herself first or atleast before UV. I expected her to be much stronger than this.But I guess, all this was needed, to shape her character so that she avoids UV in the coming chapters.Manya again decided to be strong and carve a niche as Manya was again good. Realization as hit her hard this time. But would eagerly wait to see what happens next. I would definitely want to see her loose herself to Uday again๐ณ, or most possibly do ahem ahem ...with him also, but the situation should be that emotional and intense and should demand that.(Like some guy acting fresh with her and UV saving her and she seeing him in diffrent light and something happens in the heat of the moment is done๐๐ผ) For me this staircase scene was hot and I enjoyed it as a reader, but while analysis the charcters I found it week in respect of Manya.Things I missed: Unnati, Vijay, J, Jagat introduction. It is high time u show them now. I would atleast expect a phone call to adya from Komal or badimasa. Being her nani and dadi, they would talk to her atleast once a week right? Eagerly waiting to also see DS, the lady who made UV what he is. Uday-Manav bonding was also missing. Hope you show it in the comming chapters. And yes would love to see UV working hard to get Manya+ManyataLovelu update shana, thanks for the PM dear ๐ค. And sorry fro the late analysis
Originally posted by: shana0127
Well dear cant give everything in one chapter u know that very well.
As per character of Manya well the girl did put up a strong fight verbally and physically as well she did try to shove him off .But then deep within she is all UVs ,dont know of other girls but Mnaya already belongs to him her mind may play games with her but her heart and body are all honestly on UVs side.
Yes she is making herself strong as its mind that is strongest but what can we do to heart that is so frail and emotional...Dill par koi zor nahin behna fisla to fisla ,
samjho gaye kaam se
Aise he nahi Menka ne Vishwamitra ko pataya tha
aur aise he nahi Shivji ne gusse me Kaam Dev ko bhasm kiya tha ...
Shivji knew how smart Kamdev aka heart of human is thats why even bechre bhagwan decided to kill it off ......Dill fislne se pahle he dill ko he maar dala
Originally posted by: chitra_rao
no no I dont want any of this to happen here ๐,Though I'm a very strong Shiv bhakth, I want the dil also intact and the two dilwale (manveer) also intact๐คฃ. Well nice justification for Manya losing herself in Uday.๐ well what next, now I know of some really wierd things that happen in Rave party can we expect that masala also here ๐
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