Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx
Shana..you updated!! 😃 Okay to be honest undoubtedly i missed the presence of ManVeer scenes in this update, but then so many other things were going on at the same time that i still consider this to be an AMAZING chappie.
I know I missed it too but then I had to move the story as well,anyways nexter chapter is full of it
First of all, the way you're shaping up Adya is honestly really commendable. At the same time, I feel a bit worried for the little girl. 😒 I couldn't help but wonder how much exactly does little Adya know about Meenakshi and not only her but the "other women" that spend time with UV and what kind of image of her father does that really give her. 🤔
Adya knows only one thing her papa loves mamma a lot and now her Mamma has come back so no more roaming around papa,be with my mamma
Also, the whole description of UV's strictness and attempt to groom her into a honourable Princess..I loved it but at the same time I honestly cant wait for Manyata to enter the picture adn for sweet little Adya to finally get a mother's tender love. 😳 To be honest, I never even meant to write all this worrying crap but it all just came to me as I was writing this comment..juts goes to show what brilliant job you've done with her caz i really adore the little girl. 😳
Thanku Ranjana btw she is my dream child too,hope i have a girl like her one day
Second, Shana hats off to you for making me both LOVE and QUESTION UV so much all in one chap.
UV has just one strenth on his side his never ending love for Manyata which is channalising slowly to Manya
'Well dear our Yuvraaj Udayveer has his own charm and if u stand more then a minute by him ,u will end up falling in his arms'. smirked Anya as she saw Manya blush.
Trust me, Manyata was not the only one blushing at this line. 😆
And then the second half of the update..I think you already know that I to am not too comfortable with the idea of UV sleeping with other woman.
Ab Manya ke aane se he wont be able to that even lol,why now he only wants her and nobody else strange man hai na..
So I completely understand how M felt caz UV's so easily lovable yet at the same time creates so many doubts and other questions to form in my mind. I guess at the end of the day, it's just another reason I love your FF because you're not outlining UV as the perfect angelic soul and its not only M but the reader as well who will have to find their hero with the golden heart through all those layers of arrogance, lust, and what-not. Can't actually wait to see how you're gonna do this! 😊
UV has to prove himself that he is worth her chaste love
Overall, I think this was an awesome update, setting up for future tracks and did I mention I'm so sure Meenakshi is going to be stealing/switching up some DNA reports for sure.
U guessed it right 👍🏼
Seriously please can you at least at the end, make that girl suffer. A lot. I just can't pity her no matter what happens!
UV will take care of her in coming chapters
Already excited for next chap so please try to update soon. 😃
Will Update ASAP😊
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