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Arhi OS:Choices we make Par2 pg16 updated on 7/21 (Page 21)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Xarina

Shilpa.  The whole OS was absolutely stupendous.  From the start, to the middle, to the end.  A lovely read.  Well done.Smile


Thank you so much Xarina.Hug You are the best, thanks so much for reading this different OS from my other work.

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maddy1270

a very moving update... thank you for making anjali show maturity and for keeping khushi's self-respect intact rather than having her fall into his arms the moment he apologised... loved that she wanted all of him including that he share his emotions and not make decisions for her... the emotional scenes were very well written... felt a pang each and every time I came across those superlative scenes... a heartfelt thank you for coming up with such a beautiful os!



Thank you so much Maddy.

I think, Anjali is a very sensible woman, but she is still not ready to believe that the man she loves could cheat her, or she is in denial and is not ready to face the truth. It is easier to blame Khushi rather than face the fact that she has been cheated.

Khushi deserves so much better then the way she is being treated, ASR is by her side and he loves her but he does not yet understand her. He does not realize that she can't be happy if Anjali is unhappy. She is also feeling guilty, and feels she does not have right to be happy with ASR specially when Anjali is around.

Thank you again.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by udaymanyata07

ClapClapthnaks.awesome...lvoed it...wonderfull...ClapClap



Thank you so much.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
that was emotionally charged OS...loved how K made A own upto his emotional needs...he needed to invest more...

pls write soon...

-Sona

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
 
 
love your story...


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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
I always love reading your stories. I really hope it's not the end and you keep on writing and that there will be a chapter 3 and 4 and 5 etc...
 
awesome story...can't wait to read more

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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fffan123

Loved the part. Clap Clap Clap Hope you will continue to write such beautiful SS/OS/FF and share with us


Thank you so much. I will try my best to come back with more Arshi stories as time permits and something catches my interest.
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Posted: 24 July 2012 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joicej

Shilpa,

Wonderful OS.
Nice to see you here. Glad that you have decided to continue with your stories. Smile


Thank you so much Joicei. I will continue with more, if not a Arhi, then an independent one as something interests me. Thanks again for appreciating all my work.

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