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Arhi OS:Choices we make Par2 pg16 updated on 7/21 (Page 20)

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
hey shilpa


loved the chapter to the core
well put in scenesHug

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by angelirebelli

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Awesome update S.. I am a sucker for happy endings and KKGSR needs hers.. I love the way you stayed true to the characters and their reactions, feelings, thoughts and expressions.. Brilliantly done Clap

All the scenes fit so well and make for a happily ever after..*superlikes* Star

As always, looking forward to more from you.. Smile

P.S.- Happy Birthday Mantle.. Wherez the party tonight Wink




Thank you so much Angeli.

You are too sweet, but glad you enjoyed the whole OS, and thanks for easing my fears about the OS not matching the characters.

I have to see if I can come back with more.

Thanks again.Hug

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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hot.Pink.Heels

Very cute!



Thank you.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Yuks-

Great. I loved the ending


Thanks Yuks.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaShGurTiLuverr

That was sooo beautiful <3


Thanks very much.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Xaffi

Simply awesome loved it alot..



Thanks so much, glad you liked the OS.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Crazy_1001

Nice long update! :D 

I thought that was really good! The way you conveyed all the emotions , and everyone's pain. The character devleopment.
LOL One thing I found funny was that...now that Anjali was happy with her child she wanted Arnav to be happy as well...dont get me wrong I like her gesture and all but found that kind selfish.


But awesome conclusion! :)



Thanks so much. This means a lot, I have never attempted to writ on Arhi, because I thought I would never be able to get their feelings and thoughts across like they are portrayed.

Yeah, I thought that it might look as Anjali was being selfish, but she started to realize when she found out the whole truth, and I think even now in the show she seems to be bit selfish, but once she really think about it she will realize what is right and what is wrong.

Thanks again.
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepterence

u made me cry..out loud...luv the happy ending..and ur portrait of charcters is fantastic ,,,, true to their essence,,,,grt vocabulory...gd writing..luvd it ...so do one thing ...write more...!!!!



Awe...Thank you so much.

I will see if I can come back with a another Arhi soon.


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