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Arhi OS:Choices we make Par2 pg16 updated on 7/21 (Page 17)

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Great. I loved the ending

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
That was sooo beautiful <3

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Simply awesome loved it alot..

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Nice long update! :D 

I thought that was really good! The way you conveyed all the emotions , and everyone's pain. The character devleopment.
LOL One thing I found funny was that...now that Anjali was happy with her child she wanted Arnav to be happy as well...dont get me wrong I like her gesture and all but found that kind selfish.


But awesome conclusion! :)

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
u made me cry..out loud...luv the happy ending..and ur portrait of charcters is fantastic ,,,, true to their essence,,,,grt vocabulory...gd writing..luvd it ...so do one thing ...write more...!!!!

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Shilpa.  The whole OS was absolutely stupendous.  From the start, to the middle, to the end.  A lovely read.  Well done.Smile

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
a very moving update... thank you for making anjali show maturity and for keeping khushi's self-respect intact rather than having her fall into his arms the moment he apologised... loved that she wanted all of him including that he share his emotions and not make decisions for her... the emotional scenes were very well written... felt a pang each and every time I came across those superlative scenes... a heartfelt thank you for coming up with such a beautiful os!

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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 2:25pm | IP Logged
ClapClapthnaks.awesome...lvoed it...wonderfull...ClapClap

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