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Arhi OS:Choices we make Par2 pg16 updated on 7/21 (Page 14)

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 8:53am | IP Logged
really beautiful one... awesome..do continue soon...

can u plz add me to ur pm list..

take care

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Ohhh.. Shilpa!!!! I was so sad.. and still reading your last FF again and again.. thought i am going to miss your stories.. but NO, you have come up with a bang though it is with different pair and show (not my fav).. but your magic is there.. i won't surprise if i start watching this show just with you stories.. love you shilpa.. you don't know how happy I am..

Thank you :)))))))Hug

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
wonderful OS shilpa...i am following this show now and am loving it...and ur VM...once again pure genius...thank u...

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Wow luvd da os beautifully written
Awsum vm x

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Very well written.. Loved it..

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written, you made me cry!Cry

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged


Dear Friends thank you so much for liking and commenting on my first OS on Arhi.

Please let me apologize for not posting part two as soon as possible.

I did not get a chance to finish it last night but I will update later today.





Here is a little sneak peak to hold you guys until I post the whole update.


The moments that stood out the most were the ones from the days after her birthday and before she was asked to leave.

 

"I won't let you leave Khushi."

 

"You can't stop me Arnavji."

 

"Khushi you are still under contract and you can't break it."

 

Khushi tried to look away, to stop the flood of memories but her eyes refused to cooperate with her mind.

 

"Khushi what has happened that you can't even smile once?"

 

"You succeeded in buying the sari for me but couldn't buy the smile for me."

 

Arnav flinched inwardly when he recalled those words spoken by her when he tried to force her to accept the sari he had bought for her.

 

Arnav and Khushi's world narrowed down to just the two of them as more memories replayed between them.

 

The bittersweet moments, that could have changed their relationship, were left incomplete.

 

Arnav saw himself grabbing Khushi as she walked away form him. He pulled her close to him, so close that there was not even enough room for air to pass through their bodies. Their conversation echoed through his mind and as he looked into her eyes he knew that same thoughts were going through her mind.

 

"You forced me to marry you; I don't think of you as my husband."

 

"Fine, I will make you accept me as your husband."

 

So close yet not close enough; they had been interrupted before things could have gone out of control.

 

After talking with Nani she had walked away again saying she will not accept him as her husband. He had followed her then blocked her from walking away from him.

 

"You will accept me as your husband, I will make you."

 

"You are dreaming too much these days."

 

Again she had tried to escape him, but he had been relentless and caged her in between his arms, her back against the wall he had leaned close to her and challenged her.

 

"You will come running into my arms Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada."

 

His voice had taken on a seductive tone as he spoke to her. Khushi had not backed away and given him back as good as she got and told him she would never come running into his arms, not even in next life.

 

Arnav finally broke the connection when he recalled her words about her being used to him causing her pain. He moved aside to let her pass. He could not deny those words. He had given her nothing but pain, both physical and emotional.

 

Thank you again.

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Thanx S, waiting in anticipation..

The sneak peak looks very promising.. thank you Smile

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