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IPKKND: It's Not Right - Thread 4: Ch 34-41 (Page 22)

LilaUK Senior Member
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:40pm | IP Logged
Khushi is so nervous!! Love the in control Arnav!!

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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
Nice update! Can't wait to see what'll happen next!
Continue soon :)
LyssaPie IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
Ooo interesting update! Now can't waot for their talk
WiseGirl Senior Member
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
It's so cute how Khushi doesn't pick up the phone or call back when Arnav wants to talk about them, but she does when it comes to her jiji and Akash. LOL Hopefully Khushi talks to Arnav about what's bugging her though. And soon.

Please continue soon!
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
Haha arnav desperate to get khushi speak to him so he found a way which was payal and akash and being the clever guy managed to put her in a spot so they could talk face to face and aww poor khushi is wondering what those other deep emotions are which concerns arnav and also the future of their relationship. Love Abhi his such a great friend but yeah anywho great update and cant wait to read more Smile
sman2195 Senior Member
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
Hi.
Last week I found ur index of stories & spent reading it's not right. I gotta say, really wonderful story yaar. From beginning, I really liked all the character. Really loved how u sketched lavanya to help out Khushi and introduced Abhi. Really loved, how Khushi's and Arnavs relationship transformed, over evening meetings after work. Those were too cute. Loved how u'be wrote about
Little events in great detail. & finally Arnav opening about Dhruv.

Coming back to the recent chapter... Small yet very powerful. Now Khushi is getting brothers to come together. Again cute of her. Hope Dhruv isn't going to make it difficult for Arnav.

You know what, pls don't mind..but kind of don't like the Mami Akash Payel marriage convincing track. I hv read other writers & everyone seems to be using the same concept. Wish for once done one would write something different and don't make Mami look like a monster all the time and make Payel nd Akash the weak character all the time.

Hoping u won't take it otherwise for me being critical and hoping I will get my regular pm. Thank u in advance. Keep up the good work
fhussain237 Senior Member
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread
Arnav and dhruvs relationship seems to be going well LOL
I loved how arnav knew khushi wud want to talk about payal n akashs marriage
Im super excited to see how arnav n khushi conversation goes
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
ayshaomar IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 19 July 2012 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
great update
asr is too smart he knows khushi well lol

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