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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
πŸ˜•PART-3

so here it goes...
virat changes into tracks and leaves his room on the other hand maanvi is making arrengments. she bought five girls with her so that she can introduce them to virat and so she was preparing like a small dinner.virat comes and is shocked to see the scene in front of him 
virat: manvi whats all this???
manvi: oh virat u came see first promise me u wont get angry u wont scold me nor b upset with me promis?
virat:manvi what is it?
manvi: virat first promise!
virat: ok ppromise tell
manvi: see virat actually for u i have selected five girls and i arrenged a small meeting with them for u so pls sit down over there and i ll keep sending girls u talk with them and tell me whom do u like ok?
virat: manvi whats all this nonsense r u taking that challenge so seriousley???πŸ˜•
manvi: yesss!!!! now stop talking talking and go sit
he goes and sits though he dint want to but he did it for his partner
while he sat there a girl came her name was khaira
khaira: kya mein yaha betoon??
virat: ji ha kyun nahi iseleye to aye hey!
khaira: jjjiji ji ji aaa aa aappp kkkyyaaa kkkhhhaaarrrttteee hhaaaii?? she stammers the hole sentence
virat: aapko koyi problem hai kya?
khaira: jjjiii mmmuuujjjeee sstttaaammmeerrring hhhaaaiii
virat: oh ok toh aap kaha tak padi hai?
khaira:jjjiii mmmaaaiiinnn nnneee fffuulll stoppp takkk paddd lee haaiii!!😊
virat: kya?πŸ˜•
khaira: haan manviii jjiii neee jjooo scripttt diyaaa usmeee fulll stoppp tak sub kuchhh padaaa haiii kiii kaiseee apkaeee sattthhh baaath kareee anddd alll!!!
virat: acha script dee hai usne aapko?
khaira: ji haan!!!
he talks with her and then she leaves the next three girls have different faces or difernt expressions on seeiin him and at last a very beautiful girl comes. she seems perfect in all ways and he feels very happy to see a good girl after 4 disasters her name was shamrin
virat: so whatr u hobbies?
shamrin: i like adventures,bike riding and spending time in beach!
virat: wow thats gr8 so whats ur opinion about me?
shamri: ur awesome!!!
virat: so shall we date?
shamrin: why not!!
virat thinks wow partner after all u have a good choice she is nice thnk u partner!!
shamrin: but i have a problem!
virat: oh what is it?
shamrin: actually i have to ask my kids about it i dont know wether they r ready to accept u as a father or not?
virat: FATHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shamrin: yeah i have 2 kids
virat: den how r u dating me????
shamrin: simple my husbands in us soi m thinking to marry someone here so that i cn have someone in india!!!πŸ˜‰
virats head was spinning he thinks what kind of a woman is she
virat: i m sorry u may leave😑
shamrin: hmmm😑
virat comes out and manvi comes to him and ask
manvi: kyan hua kisi ke saath baath paki hui ki nahi??
virat: nahi aur yeh sab kya hai manvi un ladikiyon ko chodo woh akhir me jo ayi thi voh do baccho kima thi????
manvi: kya par usne mujhe nehi bataya i m sorry virat!!!πŸ˜”
virat: its ok and maanvi u dont have to do this broker job for me find me a simple girl like u not like this but normally ok?
manvi:ok abh chalo raat hogayi hai aur mein sone ja rahi hoon gud nite bye!!!
virat: gud nite partner bye!!!

and they leave!!!

PRECAP:virat and maya's meeting!!!!

soo how was it guys i no it was borin but pls leave ur comments!!!
Edited by nikeshathana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
sweet, beautiful and awesome update...
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Just read all your updates and Its awesome loved it please pm me when you update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Lol da last girl cracked me... Do bachon ki maa... Nice nice:) continue soon:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
tat was great
and manvi tusse great ho
please cont soon and pm me wne u udpate
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
PART-4

next day morning it was 6 am and manvi woke up and she wore some tracks and went for jogging. she dint want to disturb virat because she knew that after yesterdays zor ka jhatka virat needs to take some rest. when she was jogging suddenly her mobile fell down and she dint notice and continued her jog but someone had observed it...
?- xcuse me i think this is ur mobile phone??
manvi- she turns and sees a beautiful girl oh yeah thats mine thanx!!
?- ur welcome!!
manvi- hi i am manvi and u?
?- i am maya!
manvi- nice name!!!
maya- thnk u!
manvi- so would u mind joging with me?
maya- no not at all c mon

and then started jogging to gether manvi asked her about her hobbies family job and everything because this time she dint want to make any mistake and she dint even want to break her partner's heart and soon they became good frnds...

manvi- so cn we meet today at the cafe there?
maya- yeah infact i wanted to ask u about it sure ill come!
manvi- ok see u later bye
maya- bye

then at 9 am manvi got ready and she went and woke up virat and she told him to get ready as she is going to make him meet her new frnd and so he got ready and they left for cafe!!!
they arrive at the cafe and manvi spots maya and they go sit there...

manvi-virat this is maya my new frnd and maya this is virat my bestest frnd!!
virat- (smiles wen manvi says bestest frnd) hello
maya- hello!!
manvi wanted to give them some privacy so..
manvi- i ll order some drinks and come maya u wont anything?
maya- no thnx manvi!!
manvi-ok
so after a bit of silence virat starts speaking
virat- so maya where are u from?
maya- im from mumbai i just came for a holiday u?
virat- mee too!!!

manvi comes and gives virat his juice
manvi- yeh lo virat tumhara juice
virat- tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe juice chaiyya tha???
manvi- aree akhir tumhari partner hoo main nahi janoogi toh aur koun janega!!
virat-πŸ˜ƒ
manvi- virat mujhe di ka call aye hai toh mujhe unse baat karne hai tum dono bate karo me bad mein avungi saying this she rann from there so that virat wouldnt stop her
virat- aree par.. she alredy left ek dum tufan express haiπŸ˜†
maya-😊

virat and maya keep chating and after a while dey leave MAYA asks virat and manvi to join her for dinner tonite and he says yes!!

PRECAP: virat manvi and maya were having dinner 
                 maya- so wen are u both gettin married?
                 virat and manvi together- what??????😲
                 and the start laughing πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Edited by nikeshathana - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
lovely update!!! <3 ur a very good writer!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
lovely update
Cont Soon dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
tat was really awesome update...luk lyk here maya isnt a vamp:)
continue soon:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok so u think she is not a vamp mhhh u ll see soon!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒ