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#8 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Skta Hai(AR)prt-228,9:64,5 (Page 64)

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Part-228

 

Shashank falls on door seeing armaan and joined his hands with tears in eyes, padma holds him with tears , nani, anjali-atul, rahul-muskaan too had tears seeing his condition, then they too joined their hands apologetically, riddhima from armaan's arms twisted back as to see where he's looking and why he's so shocked…. As soon as she turned, she detangled herself from armaan out of shock, her smile was completely vanished.. everyone stopped dancing…

 

Armaan looked at riddhima who remained in still position, armaan placed his arm around riddhima, riddhima came in present and looked at armaan, armaan tried to read her eyes but for the second time he's unable to read her, a quick moment travelled in his mind when on diwali he made riddhima drink alcohol, that time too riddhima gave this look which made armaan think that still there is something that he doesn't know about riddhima and now he's sure that deep down riddhima has something in heart which she didn't share with him and he cursed himself thinking "agar riddhima mujhse kuch bol nahi payi thi to maine bhi to jaan ne ki koshish nahi ki ki uss se usne dil mai kya chuppa rakha hai.."

 

He again looked at riddhima who has turned her back towards door and was on the verge of moving when heard "riddhima…" in a very broken voice…

 

R: (without turning) armaan inhe kaho ki ye log yaha se challe jaayein..

 

A: riddhima.(before he could complete, dr. shashank interrupted)

 

Sh: apne papa ko maaf nahi kar sakti…

 

R: (she turned towards armaan) mere koi papa nahi hai armaan… ye tum bhi jaante ho, to phir abhi tak unse jaane ke liye kyu nahi kaha??? (armaan kept on glaring her) kya hua?? Aise kyu dekh rahe ho?? Kahi aisa to nahi ki tumhe unki baato par yakeen hai meri baton se bhi jayda…

 

A: riddhima kya bol rahi ho jaan?? (he tried to hold her but riddhima jerked his hands) riddhima…

 

R: armaan agar mujhse pyaar karte ho to inhe abhi yaha se jaane ke liye kaho…. Abhi… (armaan looked towards door where dr. shashank was sitting crying bitterly with his head almost touching floor, padma was trying to handle him but he kept on jerking her..)

 

Sh: (looking towards riddhima) mujhe maaf kar dena bitiya, haath jod kar maafi maang raha hun, manta hun bahut galtiyan ki hai, par tera dil to bachpan se bahut bada raha hai, maaf kar de apne iss baap ko… ( padma holds him)

 

Pa: shashank, ye aap kya kar rahe hai, please chup ho jaiye, aapki tabiyat aur bigad jaayegi, please shaant ho jaiye..

 

 Sh: kaise shaant ho jaun padma, maine apne hi haatho apni sab khushiyan ujjad di, apni sabse samajhdaar sabse pyaari beti ko khud apne aap se dur kar diya, kyu mai andha ho gaya itna ki armaan ki achaiyon ko bhi nahi dekh paya, unka pyaar oos ki pehli boond ki tarah nirmal tha aur mai apni jidd ke kaaran uss nirmal boond ko gandgi se bharne ki koshish karta raha,

 

jaanti ho padma mere dil ko to unki shaadi ke kuch waqt hi pata chal gaya tha ki armaan se behtar riddhima ke liye koi nahi ho sakta par dimaag haar maan ne ke liye taiyar nahi tha, dimaag wait karta ki kabhi to aisa hoga jab riddhima aayegi aur bolegi ki aap sahi the papa (he laughed sarcastically on his own thoughts) shayad wo meri insecurity thi,

 

mai shayad dil or dimaag mai yahi sochkar baitha hua tha ki meri beti ko mujhse jayda koi pyaar nahi kar sakta aur meri beti bhi apne papa se jayda kissi se pyaar nahi kar sakti, par jab riddhima ne mera haath chodkar armaan ka haath thaama to mai bardash nahi kar paya,

 

uski jindagi mai uske papa se jayda important koi aur ho gaya tha aur insecurity isliye thi ki dil kahi na kahi jaanta tha ki armaan riddhima ko mujhse bhi jayda pyaar karega kyunki maine armaan ki aankho mai wo junoon dekha tha jo riddhima se hamesha pyaar karne ka waada karte the chahe kaisa bhi waqt ho,

 

wo nidarta( fearlessness)dekhi thi jo riddhima ko hamesha secured rakhne ka waada karti thi, mai darta tha ki wo meri beti ko mujhse dur kar dega aur dekho na mera darr kitna sahi nikla, kabhi jo riddhima apne papa se 1 din mile bina nahi reh sakti thi wo 11 saal tak apne papa se baat kiye bina reh li,

samajh nahi aata tha padma ki apni beti ke liye khush hoyun ki usne paagalo ki tarah khud se pyaar karne waala saathi chuna hai

 

ya dukh manaun ki koi aur riddhima ko mujhse bhi jayda pyaar kar sakta hai, bas issi kashamkash mai riddhima ko dukh deta challa gaya; itna dukh diya ki aaj maafi ke liye haath bhi nahi uthaye jaa rahe, armaan ne sahi kaha tha ki ek din aisa hoga jab mujhe pata challega ki apne jhutte abhimaan ke kaaran maine konsa heera kho diya,

 

 aur uss din mere paas pachtaane ke alava kuch nahi hoga…. (he looked at armaan who's clearing his eyes corner) armaan tum har jagah sahi the, mujhe tumhari koi baat nahi samajh aayi, sab kuch aankho ke saamne hote hue bhi aankhein band karta raha kyunki irshya(jealousy), gusse ne aankhein band kar di thi, mere abhimaan ne dimaag ko baandh(block)rakha tha,

 

pata nahi kab uski samajhdaari aur achaiyon ko as granted lena shuru kar diya, sahen hi nahi ho paa raha tha ki wo apne papa ko chodna chahti hai tumhara liye, issliye apni bachi ka dil dukhata gaya, socha usse shayad ehsaas ho jaye ki mera dil kitna dukh raha hai, par wo har roj khush najar aati, usspar tumhara rang kam hone ki jagah aur chadta jaa raha tha,

 

wo tumhare saath bhukhe rh kar bhi khush rehti, jameen par sokar bhi aise behave karti jaise phoolon ke bed se uthkar aayi ho, uski jindagi tum bante jaa rahe the aur yehi baat mujhe pareshan karti rahi, parents apne bache ke liye sukoon bhari jindagi maangte hai aur mai sochta raha ki kaise uska sukoon uss se cheen jaaye, bahut bura baap hun mai ye jaanta hun,

 

par tum logo ka to hamesha se bada dil raha hai, ho sake to mujhe maaf kar do (he again joined his hands, and looked at riddhima who's looking unaffected, shashank dropped tears and turned towards padma) padma tumne to riddhima ko janam diya hai, wo tumhari baat jarur maanegi, usse kaho na wo apne papa ko maaf kar de, galti ki hai maine jo chahe saja de, par ek baar papa bula de, kaho na padma…(padma cleared her tears and looked at riddhima)

 

Pa: riddhu.. (riddhima immediately turned her back towards them, padma was shocked to see her daughter behaving like this)

 

Sh: armaan tum to apne papa ki baat maanoge na, apni riddhima se kaho na ki wo mujhe maaf kar de.. (armaan was not able to see his condition)

 

A: riddhima.. (cutting him instantly)

 

R: armaan please tum mera imtehan mat lena aaj.. aaj agar tumne mujhe unhe maaf karne ke liye kaha to lagega jaise tumne bhi mujhe akela chod diya, please tum mujhe todne ki koshish mat karna, sabne mujhe todne ki koshish ki hai armaan par aaj tak simti rahi kyunki tum saath the, tumne tod diya to aise bikhrungi ki simatne mai saari jindagi lag jaayegi.. mujhse kuch aisa mat expect karna jaisa ki ab tumhari aankho mai dikhayi de raha hai..

 

A: par riddhima..(cutting him yet again)

 

R: armaan mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai, bache bhi thak gaye honge, mai room mai jaati hun..(she moved forward when heard scream)

 

Shashankk…. (riddhima stopped and turned,saw shashank lying on his stomach with his head on their door's boundary and eyes dropping tears, hands joined, riddhima cutched her saree, her heart thumped, she's on the verge of taking step forward when aarish and angel hugged her legs out of scariness, riddhima immediately stopped and turned her back yet again picking angel in arms and holding aarish's hand)

 

Sh: riddhima jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi karogi tab tak mai yaha se nahi jaunga.. (saying so his head moved down as if their's no life in it and straightway bumped into the edge of flooring and soon blood started oozing out from his head armaan quickly rushed to him and holds him, padma too falls on floor and crying bitterly)

 

Pa: kabhi to meri baat maan liya kijiye shashank, kyu aap abhi hamare baare mai nahi sochte, kyu aap hamesha jidd karte hai?? Kabhi socha aapne aapko iss haalat mai dekhkar humpar kya beet ti hogi,aapki jidd ki wajah se hume apni beti se dur hona pada aur aaj aapki jidd aapko humse dur kar rahi hai, dono hi cases mai haar to hum gharwaalo ki hi ho rahi hai, aap dono ke jhagde mai hum logo ko kyu itna imtehaan dena pad raha hai, 10 saal pehle aap jhukne ke liye taiyar nahi the aur aaj riddhima aage bhadne ke liye taiyar nahi hai, hum log kaha jaayein..

 

 jara sa bhi khayal hai ki agar aapko kuch ho gaya to hamara kya hoga?? (shashank kept on crying while looking at riddhima, where as armaan took out his hanky and tied it around his head, shashank looked him with fatherly love in eyes, his eyes dropped more tears as his behavior towards armaan in past revolved in his mind, he started looking down as soon as armaan looked him, his heart was trying to muster enough courage to look armaan, armaan made him stand..)

 

A: aap theek hain??

 

Shashank nodded while looking down guiltily, then looked at riddhima who's caressing her children, shashank again became lifeless and his eyes again started flowing seeing the hatred in her daughter's eyes, armaan turned to look as to whom shashank was looking and goes to riddhima)

 

A: riddhima.. (but she ignored him and took a step forward holding kids hand, armaan holds her hand)

 

R: armaan chodo mujhe..

 

A: riddhima look at me.. (she didn't turn, he again pulled her) riddhima… (she turned)

 

R: tumhe ye sab naatak dekhne ke liye rukna hai to ruko shownk se, par mujhse kuch expect mat karna, let me go armaan, please…

 

A: (surprised after hearing riddhima's words) riddhima kya ho gaya hai tumhe?? Tum itna weirdly kyu behave kar rahi ho, tum meri riddhima jaise kyu nahi baat kar rahi, kyu tumhare har word se kadwahat jhalak rahi hai, jo riddhima pyaar ke alava koi aur language jaanti hi nahi wo ab itna rudely kaise baat kar rahi, kissi ka dil dukhane ki himmat nahi hai jisme wo dil ko cheerne waale teer kaise chala rahi hai, kyu apne papa ki baat nahi sun rahi ho, maana unse galti hui hai par unhe realize ho gaya hai..

 

R: (in low tone) wo mere papa nahi hai… (armaan holds her and took her towards dr. shashank, riddhima looked at armaan, tried to detangle her hand but his grip was tight, she looked him questionably)

 

A: ab inki aankho mai dekhkar kaho ki kya sach mai ye tumhare papa nahi hai, kya sach mai tumhe inki aankho mai apne liye pyaar najar nahi aa raha, kya sach mai unke aansuon mai unka pashchyataap najar nahi aa raha, apni maa ki aankho mai bebasi aur naani ki aankho mai tumhe pyaar karne ki besabri nahi najar aa rahi??? Bolo riddhima?? (riddhima looked at each one then looked down) riddhima jitna marji bol lo par ye fact kabhi nahi badlega na ki yehi tumhare papa hai,

 

 jitna marji uppar se gussa dikha lo par (placing finger on her heart) yaha se to tum hamesha apne papa se pyaar rahogi, unhe har mod par miss karti thi, maana tumhara bahut dil dukha par apno ko hi to hak hota hai khuleaam dil ko dukh pahunchane ka, parayon ki itni himmat kaha hoti hai?? (riddhima looked him with blank eyes, tear rolled down from her eyes) riddhima kuch bolo… (riddhima just freed her wrist from his grip and with heave steps moved back, armaan sighed helplessly..)

 

Sh: (again settled on floor, on the verge of holding riddhima's feet but riddhima moved back quickly) mujhe maaf kar de beta, itni berukhi na dikha, mar jaayenge tere papa teri aankho mai ye nafrat dekhkar, maaf kar de beta…

 

R: (clearing her tears and in strict tone) dr. shashank gupta.. aapko kya lagta hai ki itna sab ho jaane ke baad aap ek din kahenge ki I apologize to kya sab theek ho jayega, itne saalo tak bina kissi wajah ke aapki wajah se hume itna kuch sehna pada aur aap chahte hai ki wo sab bhulkar hum phir se normal bankar jiyen… kya samajhte hai aap apne aap ko??? Bhagwan hai aap?? Dharti ko khareed rakha hai ya logo ko khareed rakha hai aapne?? Kyun jaisa aap chahte hai waisa hi ho hamesha?? Nahi dekhna chahti aapko, ek din aapne mujhe paraya kiya tha aaj mai aapko apna banane se inkaar karti hun, ek din aapne jaise chaha waisa hua, aaj jaisa mai chahungi waisa hoga..

 

Padma: riddhima ye kya tareeka hai apne papa se baat karne ka..

 

R: (cutting her) mere koi papa nahi hai, unhe to 10 saal pehle hi kho diya tha..

 

Pa: (screaming) riddhima.. jubaan sambhalkar bolo.. kya ho gaya hai tumhe, hosh mai to ho.. kaha gayi tumhari masumiyat, samajhdaari.. tum wo riddhima nahi ho, apne papa se jo ladki unche awaaj mai baat nahi kar sakti thi usse aaj bolne ki tameej bhi sikhani padegi ye nahi pata tha, kiss cheez ka ghamand hai tumhe jo tum iss lahaje(way) mai baat kar rahi ho..

 

 apne gurur mai itna bhi yaad nahi raha ki aaj tum jinda hi sirf tumhare papa ki wajah se ho, jiss insaan par tum itni daer se kadwe shabdo ke teer chala rahi ho agar wo na hote to tum iss duniya mai aayi hi na hoti, agar unhone paala na hota to jiss armaan ke basis par inka apmaan kar rahi ho, uss armaan se kabhi mili na hoti, maana galti hui hai inse, jinki wo maafi dil se maang rahe hai, par tum to pathar si ban gayi ho..

 

R: mrs. Padma gupta (padma looked at her shockingly when riddhima addressed her with her name) kiss masumiyat aur samajhdaari ki baat kar rahi hai aap?? Wohi jiska aapke pati ne badi hi nirdayta se katal kar diya tha, kaash aapke pati ne mujhe godd na liya hota, kaash mai iss duniya mai hi na aayi hoti.. (armaan shockingly said "riddhimaaa….") kaash… inke ehsaano ka bhoj jo mere dil par hai wo to na hota (while looking at dr. shashank, padma looked at shashank who's trying to hide himself in earth, then at riddhima angrily and soon a loud noise echoed in room, everyone was shocked and looked at riddhima who received a hard slap from padma a moment before, ritu was angry and on the verge of saying something but chirag holds her arm and shaked his head in no  )  

 

Ri: par dekha nahi padma aunty kitna rudely behave kar rahi hai riddhima se, armaan kuch nahi bol raha, hum to bol sakte hai na..

 

Ch: nahi ritu, hum abhi kuch nahi bol sakte, tumhe kya lagta hai armaan ko farak nahi pad raha hoga, agar wo chup hai to hum kaise abhi kuch bol sakte hai, armaan-riddhima ko ye situation khud handle karni hogi ritu, at the end ye sach koi nahi badal sakta ki padma aunty-shashank uncle hi riddhima ke parents hai… (aarish and angel hugged ritu out of scarieness when saw her mother being slapped, ritu hides them in her shoulder and took them to their room, chirag looked at riddhima who's still standing in front of padma totally unaffected, neither her eyes were wet nor she's having any emotion in her eyes, she didn't react, everyone's surprised along with padma as to why she's acting like a stone, padma looked at armaan..)

 

Pa: kya ho gaya hai riddhima ko armaan, itni pathar dil aur kadwi to riddhima kabhi thi hi nahi, kya kar diya hai tumne, kya sikha diya hai tumne isse aisa ki jo kabhi phoolon si komal baatein kiya karti thi wo aaj kaantein barsa rahi hai… (though each word of padma was piercing armaans heart but he was able to understand her pain too, armaan too was surprised seeing the numbness in riddhima than he could understand well what must be gupta's family feeling)

 

bolo armaan, kuch to samjhao isse, tumhari baat to wo nahi taal sakti, mai tumhare aage haath jodti hun, isse hosh mai lekar aao, batao isse ye kya galti kar rahi hai, batao isse ye kisse thokar maar rahi hai, jiss pal ka kabhi besabri se intejar kar rahi thi aaj jab wo pal aaya to usko iss tarah thukra rahi hai, kahi aisa na ho ki saari jindagi pachtawe mai nikalni pade.. (armaan placed his hand on riddhima's shoulder, riddhima turned, armaan didn't find words, he just caressed her cheeks on which padma's fingers were imprinted and clutched his hand tightly, riddhima looked him and placed her head on his shoulder, armaan pained)

 

A: riddhima…

 

R: armaan tumhe kuch kehne ki jarurat nahi hai, mujhe tumhari aankho mai najar aata hai jo tum kehna chah rahe ho, mujhe pata hai tum chahte ho mai sab kuch bhul kar aage challun..

 

A: (cutting her) maine aisa nahi kaha riddhima..

 

R: par mana bhi to kaha kiya hai armaan, tumhari khamoshi ne hi tumhara jawab de diya tha ki tum kya chahte ho, pata nahi kyu armaan par bura lag raha hai, pata nahi kyu lag raha hai ki aaj achanak se tumhe mujhse kissi ne cheen liya hai.. (armaan shaked his head) pata nahi kyu inn sabke bolne ka aur uss thappad ka dard nahi hua jitna tumhari inn confused ankhon aur tumhari khamoshi se hua..

 

A: (holding her from her shoulders tightly) riddhima mujhe tumse kaise koi cheen sakta hai, hum to ek hi hai na.. (riddhima removed his hands from her shoulders) riddhima….. (she moved lil back with coldness, armaan unable to see her coldness quietly screamed) haan.. haan mai chahta hun riddhima tum sab bhulkar aage challo, mai chahta hun tum apni family ko maaf kar do, beshak tumhare dard ka ehsaas hai mujhe par phir bhi chahta hun ki tum sab bhul jao kyunki mai tumhe khush dekhna chahta hun, tumhe pura karna chahta hun, kyunki mai jaanta hun ki  tum apni family ko kitna miss karti ho, kyunki tumhara dard tum chupakar bhi mujhse nahi chupa sakti riddhima..

 

R: armaan pehli baat meri family sirf mera armaan aur mere bache hai, tumse kisne kaha ki mai khush nahi hun?? Mai bahut khush hun, aur jaanbujh kar apni khushiyo ke saath khelne ka mai kabhi kissi ko mauka nahi dungi, kin logo ko maaf karne ki baat kar rahe ho?? Inko?? Kissliye?? Taaki fir sabko license mil jaaye hamare saath dard aur dukh dene ki aankh michoni khelne ka?? Mera dard tumse chuppa nahi hai par phir bhi tum anjaan ho mere dard se, nahi samajh sakte tum mere iss dard ko..

 

A: (pained with her words) riddhima… kya tumhe sach mai lagta hai ki tumhara aur mera dard alag hai??

 

R: nahi armaan, par iss pal beshak tumhara aur mera dard alag hai, kyunki tum jinn logo ko maaf karne ke liye keh rahe ho wo kabhi meri family hua karti thi..

 

A: (cutting her) par maine to hamare beech mai meri- tumhari family ka difference rakha hi nahi tha, unhe utna hi apna manta tha jitna tum apna maanti thi, phir hamara dard kyu alag hai..

 

R: kyunki apna hone aur maan ne mai farak hota hai, mujhe tumhare unke liye pyaar aur respect par doubt nahi hai par fir bhi armaan mera dard tumse jayda rahega kyunki wo meri family thi, mere parents the jinki wajah se hamari life….. tumhare liye inn sabko maaf karna aasan hai armaan kyunki tum inhe family maante the meri wajah se, hamare pyaar ki wajah se, par maine jab se aankhein kholi thi, pyaar ka, family ka, maa ka, baap ka, bahen ka,

 

naani ka inn sabka matlab hi inn logo se jaana tha, inke saath itne pal bitane ke baad dil kabhi bardash nahi kar paayega ki yehi wo log hai jinhone hamari jindagi ko kharab karne mai kasar nahi choddi thi.. (everyone looked at riddhima with shocked eyes) kaise khud apni marji se apna bacha banakar ek pal mai kehna ki humne to tujhpar abhi tak ehsaan kiya tha, phir use waapis phenk dia tha, aur phir ek din waapis aakar kehna ki sab bhul jao, aasaan hai armaan??

 

A: riddhima tum bhi jaanti ho gusse mai kahi hui baatein kabhi sach nahi hoti, gusse mai insaan saamne waale ko dard feel karwane ke liye kuch aise shabd bolna chahta hai taaki saamne waala tut jaaye but jab gussa uttarta hai to wo insaan apne gusse se kahi gunna jayda pachtata bhi hai, aise mai samne waale ka farz banta hai ki wo uss insaan ko maaf kar de..

 

R: kaha tha na tum mera dard nahi samajh sakte..

 

A: riddhima tum samajh kyu nahi rahi??

 

R: (cutting him) armaan tum kyu nahi samajh rahe?? Armaan aaj agar mai kahungi ki  tum apne parents ko maaf kar do, kar paaoge unhe maaf?? Ek baar haan keh do, mai vaada karti hun ki bina koi sawaal puche mai dr. shashank ko maaf kar dungi… (armaan looked at her shockingly then lowered his gaze) tumne apna answer khud hi de diya armaan…

 

jiss reason se tum apne parents ko maaf nahi kar sakte ussi reason se mai inn logo ko maaf nahi kar sakti… agar maine inhe maaf kiya to ek aur guilt judd jaayega mere saath ki mai ek achi maa aur ek achi patni nahi hun, pehle hi tum logo ki jaan ko bahut khatro mai dalwa chukki hun, ab aur kuch tum logo ke saath hua wo mai bardash nahi kar paungi..

 

Pa: (screamed) bas riddhima bahut kuch bol liya tumne..

 

R: (screamed) chillaiye mat mrs. Shashank gupta, mujhe anjaan logo ka bewajah unchi aawaj mai baat sun na nahi pasand hai, to aawaj niche karke baat kariye.. (padma again raised her hand but this time armaan holds her hand, padma looked him, but he politely and guiltily shaked his head)

 

Pa: bacho ko agar maa-baap pyaar de sakte hai to unke galat hone par unhe theek raah par laane ke liye maar bhi sakte hai, aur maa-baap-bache ke beech mai bolne ka hak kissi ko nahi hai… (armaan stepped back, riddhima looked at padma angrily and then at armaan)

 

R: par itna to clear kar dijiye mrs. Gupta yaha kon maa-baap aur kon kiska bacha hai aur kiss hak se aapne mere husband ke ghar mai khade hokar unhi ko anjaan banane ki koshish ki?? (tear rolled out from padma eyes) aapko jawaab chahiye na meri kadwahat ke kaaran ka, to saamne dekhiye mrs.gupta aapko jawaab mil jaayega.. (she pointed in one direction, old gang and gupta family looked there and found one mirror, in which their reflection's reflecting, padma looked at riddhima with eyes asking "hum??") mil gaya aapko jawab??

 

Pa: riddhima kyu itni nafrat ho gayi.. (riddhima cuts her)

 

R: aap galat insaan se swaal kar rahi hai mrs. Gupta, mujhse behtar jawaab aapke pati aapko de sakte hai, puchiye inse kon hote hai ye mere aur armaan ke pyaar ki pariksha lene waale, kon hote hai ye mere bache ki jaan ko khatre mai daalne waale.. (immediately shashank cuts her)

 

Sh : maine kabhi bhi aisa nahi kiya riddhima, mai kyu apne naatin ki jaan khatre mai daalunga, maana mai bura hun par aisi giri hui harkat mai kabhi nahi kar sakta itna to vishwas  abhi bhi kar sakti ho mujhpar??

 

R: (got emotional a bit as memory of past events crossed her mind) vishwas hi to kiya tha, thoda nahi bahut saara, itna vishwas kiya tha ki jab wo tuta aankhon se ek aansoon bhi na gir paaya, aapne raaste par pada pathar to dekha hi hoga mr. gupta, usse koi farak nahi padta hajaaro thokre khaane ke baad bhi; ek beti ke vishwas ki keemat aapne iss tarah li thi, maasum sa dil tha uska, jo vishwas aur intejar se bhara tha ki uske papa ek din aayenge aur usse gale se laga lenge, par gale se lagana to bahut dur ki baat thi; aapne to insaaniyat bhi na dikhayi uss ladki ke liye jisse bachpan se paala laado se, usse uske pati aur bache se hi dur karne ki koshish karte rahe hamesha…

 

Pa: aisa kuch nahi hai riddhima, shashank aisa kabhi nahi kar sakte, tujhe jarur koi galat fehmi hui hai..

 

Sh: riddhima sach mai maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya..

 

R: aap jaante the ki sanjana ki wajah se shikha ke bache ki maut hui hai and ussi ki wajah se shikha coma mai gayi thi, jaante the ya nahi?? (everyone tried to remind shikha then looked at shashank with quiet shocked eyes, where as dr. shashank reminded the moment where he had seen sanjana coming out of shikha's room with some medicines in hands, then looked at riddhima) aap ye bhi jaante the ki sanjana ne armaan ke account se 25 lakhs ki transaction ki  thi, jaante the ya nahi??? (shashank started looking down) aur aap kehte hai ki aapne kuch nahi kiya…

 

Agar insaaniyat thi to kaise dekh liya armaan jaise kaabil doctor par itne iljaam lagte hue, kaise aapke dil ne allow kar diya bina kissi kasoor ke ek family ko khaane ke liye bhi tarasne ke liye, kya laga tha aapko ki 2 din khaana nahi khaungi, sone ke liye bed nahi milega,ghumne ke liye car afford nahi kar payenge to apne pati ko chodkar aapke paas aa jaungi, tab lagta tha ki sach mai aap to kabhi uss ladki ko samajh hi nahi paaye jisse aapne 22 saalo tak paala,  Agar itna hi kacha rishta hota armaan ke saath to mai kabhi aapki dehleej paar karke hi na aati..

 

Aapko acha nahi laga hoga na armaan aur mera rishta uss waqt mai bhi itna gehra hote hue dekhkar issliye aapne Mr. sighania ko bulaya, ek 5 months pregnant ladki se jisse galti se kabhi apni sabse pyaari beti kaha karte tha aap usse ye kehna ki bache ka janam hote hi usse anaathaalya mai phenk dena kyunki abortion to ho nahi sakta aur apne pati ko divorce de dena… (from her eyes tears fell as she reminded that incident, armaan immediately turned her and kept on looking at her with shocked eyes, riddhima crossed her hands on her tummy as she for a moment felt that aarish is still breathing inside her and kept on caressing it..)

 

To be continued…

 

Next update : tomorrow..

 

Ankita

 

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Part-229

 

Aapko acha nahi laga hoga na armaan aur mera rishta uss waqt mai bhi itna gehra hote hue dekhkar issliye aapne Mr. sighania ko bulaya, ek 5 months pregnant ladki se jisse galti se kabhi apni sabse pyaari beti kaha karte tha aap usse ye kehna ki bache ka janam hote hi usse anaathaalya mai phenk dena kyunki abortion to ho nahi sakta aur apne pati ko divorce de dena… (from her eyes tears fell as she reminded that incident, armaan immediately turned her and kept on looking at her with shocked eyes, riddhima crossed her hands on her tummy as she for a moment felt that aarish is still breathing inside her and kept on caressing it..)

 

A: riddhima..???

 

Sh: tumhe galat fehmi hui hai riddhima, maine rakesh ko nahi bulaya tha, wo khud hi aaya tha aur ye baatein bhi usne hi ki  thi..

 

R: mr. shashank gupta shayad aap bhul rahe hai par mr. rakesh singhania sirf apne dost ki khaatir hi yaha aaye the, unse apne dost ki buri haalat bardash nahi hui thi, apne dost ke khoon ke aansoon bardash nahi ho rahe the.. kyu kuch aisa hi kehte rahe the na aap unse har roj phone par??? (shashank looked down as he understood what she's talking about but all looked confusingly at riddhima)

 

dr. singhania bure nahi the, par aapki jidd ne unhe bura ban ne par majbur kar diya, aapki ek jhutti shaan ne, aapke jhutti jidd ne sabki jindagiya khatam kar di dr. gupta, kaash aap mr. singhania ko har roj phone kar karke ye na jatate ki aap apni jindagi se itne pareshan hai ki suicide karna chahte hai, aapme jeene ki icha khatam ho gayi hai, aap apni beti yani ki riddhima ki jindagi kharab hote hue nahi dekh sakte aur na jaane kya kya, kya sochkar ye sab kehte the aap unse?? Taaki meri shaadi tudwakar aap phir se unke bte ke saath meri shaadi karwa paaye??

 

Aapke so-called dukh ke kaaran mr. singhania aapko kabhi ye bata na paaye ki unke bte ki shaadi ho gayi hai, aap kuch kar na le issliye wo india aaye, aapki haalat dekhkar aur meri-armaan ki aadhi adhuri baat sunkar unhone mann bana lia tha ki wo apne bte ke divorce karwakar mujhse shaadi karwa denge jaise har kissi ki jindagi khel ho, bas aap dono ko rights mile hue ho hum sabki jindagi ke faisle karne ke..

 

Aapki ek jidd ke kaaran mr. singhania ko bura ban ne par majboor kar diya, kaise dosti nibhayi aapne dr. gupta?? Ek dost aapke liye kuch bhi kar sakta tha, apne bte ki jindagi ke saath bhi khel sakta tha aur aap apne ussi dost ko burai ke daldal mai girane ki koi kasar nahi choddi thi…

 

Sh: (cutting her) ye jhoot hai riddhima, maine kabhi bhi rakesh ka bura nahi chaha, mai to khud hi hairan tha ki usne aisa kaise kar diya, usne khud apne bte ki jindagi tabaah kaise kar di..

 

R: waah dr. gupta, kitne double standards hai aapke, apne liye kuch or aur agar aapka dost kuch waisa hi kare to aapko hairani hui.. khud ek ladki ki jisse kabhi aap apni sabse pyaar beti kaha karte the uski jindagi tabaah karne mai koi kasar nahi chodi aur mr. singhania ki harkat par hairani hui, unhone apne bte ki jindagi kharab ki kyunki maine unki insult ki,

 

unke bte ko reject kiya aur unse wo bardash nahi hua ki ek anjaan ladki unki insult kaise kar sakti hai jaise aapse bardash nahi hua meri aur armaan ki shaadi, jab aap apne hokar itne niche jaa sakte ho to wo kyu nahi??? Aakhir the to dost hi na, to dono ki soch alag kaise ho sakti thi, pyaar se uppar aap logo ki shaan thi, kuch bhi kar sakte the na mujhe tadapta hua dekhne ke liye..

 

Par gussa ye nahi hai ki aap logo ne mujhe takleef dene ki koshish ki, gussa iss baat ka hai ki aap logo ne meri wajah se 2 masoom jindagiyon ke saath khilwaad kiya, chahe aap mujhe apni beti mane ya na mane par chahte hue bhi mai unn 22 saalon ko nahi bhul sakti jisme aapne mujhe itne laad pyaar se paala, unn 22 saalo ke liye meri jaan dekar bhi aapka kabhi karz nahi uttar paungi, gussa to dur ki baat hai, par aapki beti ke dayre(limits) se nikalne ke baad mai ek patni hun, ek maa hun..

 

Aur ek patni, ek maa kabhi aapko maaf nahi kar sakti, aapki wajah se mere pati ko bina kissi kasoor ke ek handicapped life jeeni padi, aapke wajah se mere chotte se 11 mahine ke bache ne 2 operations ka dard saha, 5 baar maarne ki koshish ki gayi, uski cheekhon ke liye, uske aansuon ke liye mai kabhi aapko maaf nahi karungi, aapki wajah se uska masoom sa bachpan cheen gaya, mere pati ne jo meri jindagi hai usne mere hi saamne najaane kitni baar apni maut ki dua maangi aur mai chup chap khadi dekhti reh gayi, uski bebasi ko uss se dur na kar paayi..

 

Bolo aapke maafi maangne se ye 5 saal waapis mil jaayenge mujhe?? Kya apne armaan ke dil mai phir se wo jindadili laa paungi, kya usne jo apne bte ke liye chotte chotte khwaab dekhe the wo usse waapis mil jaayenge?? Kya hamare bte ko uska bachpan waapis mil jaayega?? Kya kabhi aap mere dil se ye guilt nikal paayenge ki mere bte aur mere pati ke saath jo bhi hua uska sabse bada kaaran mai thi, pyaar maine kiya tha aur saja mere armaan ko mili, kya kasoor tha inka, kyu inhone itna dard saha, kaash mera bura saaya kabhi armaan par na padta, aj wo jindadili se khushiyo se apni jindagi jee raha hota..

 

 (armaan shockingly turned riddhima, she with tears caressed his face) Dukh hota hai ki mai tumhari jindagi mai aai armaan, jab se aayi hun tumhari jindagi mai har dukh ka reason mai bani hun, koi aur mujh se jayda unlucky kya hoga ki jiss insaan se mai sabse jayda pyaar karti hun, jiske chehre par 24 ghante bas muskurahat dekhna chahti hun ussi ki jindagi mai mere kaaran sabse jayda dukh hai, I wish ki kabhi kissi ko aisi situation na face karni pade… (armaan shaked his head with tears, wanted to say many things but  riddhima turned towards shashank)

 

 Kiss muh se maafi maangne aaye the aap?? Kya aapko lagta hai ki aap sach mai maafi ke hakdaar hai?? Ek patni ne agar aapko maaf kiya to ye uske pati ke saath bahut badi bewafai hogi aur ek maa ne maaf kiya to uski mamta ke saath bewafai hogi aur mai ye paap kabhi nahi kar sakti… kabhi nahi… (shashank looked down with tears rolling down) aapki jidd ki wajah aaj meri sabse achi dost coma mai hai, apne bache se dur, apne pati se dur, aapne ek jindagi ke saath nahi 7 jindagiyo ke saath khildwaad kiya hai aur phir bhi aap maafi ki umeed rakhte hai??? (shashank took his steps back, riddhima cried bitterly and turned her back, padma came forward and tried to place hand on riddhima's shoulder but before that riddhima moved)

 

R: maine kaha tha na ajnabee hokar apne ban ne ki koshish mat kijiye, challe jaiye mere ghar se..

 

Pa: mai tumhari maa hun riddhu??

 

R: (turned like a storm) maa???? Maa shabd ka matlab bhi jaanti ho aap mrs. Padma Shashank Gupta?? Pehle jaakar maa shabd ka meaning samajhkar aayiye..

 

Pa: (hurtfull) riddhima??

 

R: mai bhi ek maa hun 5 saal aur 3.5 saal ke bacho ki, unke jism par ek bhi kharonch aati hai mera dil baith jaata hai aur aap jise kabhi beti kehte the uske itne paas rehkar bhi itni problems mai dekhkar bhi kabhi mann nahi kiya milne ka, kya kya nahi hua inn 10 saalon mai hamare saath par kabhi pyaar se sir par haath rakhna to dur kabhi ek phone tak nahi kiya aapne, taajub hota hai mrs. Gupta ki aap aaj bhi umeed rakhti hai ki mai aapse gale millungi,

 

aap mere darwaje par khade honge aur mai aapka haskar welcome karungi, rishta maine nahi aapne toda tha mrs. Gupta, paraya aapne banaya tha, mai to har dukh mai, har khushi mai intejaar karti thi ki kab meri maa aayegi aur mujhe gale se lagayegi, kabhi meri khushiyo mai jhoom uthegi to mere gam mai sir par haath rakhkar kahegi ki ghabra mat teri maa tere saath hai par mere intejar ka lamha kabhi khatam hi na ho paaya,

 

mere character par ungli uthi, mere armaan ka accident hua, mere bache ke accidents hue,kabhi aapko jarurat nahi lagi na aakar sir par haath rakhne ki aur aap chahti hai mai aapse normally baat karu?? Kiss rishte se?? kaunsa rishta nibhaya hai aapne?? Aap to insaaniyat ka rishta tak na nibha paayi humse aur phir bhi chahti hai ki hum react na karein??

 

Aapko lagta hai ki mai ghamandi hun, to haan mrs. Gupta mai hun ghamandi, ghamand hai mujhe ki mere paas armaan hai, mere aarish aur angel hai, armaan jisne har dukh mai maa bankar mujhe apne andar chuppa liya aur khud dukh ke saamne khada ho gaya shield bankar, jisne mujhe baap sa samaj ki har burai se dur rakhne ki koshish ki, bhai si har jagah protection di,

 

 bahen bankar bahut baar masti ki aur support bhi diya, dost bankar mujhe samjha, premi bankar mujhe paagalpan ki hadd se bhadkar pyaar kiya aur humsafar bankar har situation mai mera saath diya, mujhe har khushi di, mera har sapna pura kiya,mujhe completeness ki uss limit tak pahuncha diya ki ab aur kuch paane ki icha nahi hai, ghamand hai mujhe apne armaan par aur hamesha rahega, nahi jarurat hai mujhe kissi bhi jhutte rishte ki jo waqt ke saath saath badalte hai, mere paas har rishta hai armaan ke roop mai, nahi chahiye aap log mujhe, anjaan log nahi chahiye mujhe.. (she cried)

 

Haan mai pathar dil ho gayi par armaan ki wajah se nahi aapke so called pyaar ki wajah se, maa hai jiske paas 10 saalon mai kabhi beti ka haalchal puchne ka waqt nahi mila, baap hai jinhone har mumkin koshish ki apni beti ka ghar todne ki, itna jayda pyaar bhagwan kissi ko na de, insaan kabhi karz nahi uttar paayega, aansu bhi sukh jaayenge par aise pyaar ka dard kabhi khatam nahi hoga… (padma cried, so as nani, anjali, muskaan, rahul and atul, they moved back, riddhima kept on looking at them, then turned and hid herself in armaan, but armaan remained shocked with the turn of events, he was not getting anything, before he could understand aakash called him)

 

Akaash: Armaan ji… (armaan looked towards him)

 

A: (horrified) sorry mai iss situation mai aisa kuch nahi kehna chahta tha, par hume jaana hoga, 3 hrs mai flight hai, aur ab late kiya to flight miss ho jaayegi aur vibha ka treatment 1 week aur delay ho jaayega, issliye hume ab nikalna hoga… (armaan put his arms around riddhima and nodded fearfully)

 

Akaash: sab ready hai?? (armaan nodded then closed his eyes) aur angel…( armaan tightened his grip around riddhima)

 

Ak: armaanji angel ka bag ready hai na??? (riddhima heard and looked at armaan, then turned towards akaash)

 

R: angel??? Bag?? Angel kaha jaa rahi hai??

 

Ak: U.S jaa rahi hai hamare saath, vibha ka treatment ab wahi par hoga to angel aur vibha ko mai lekar jaunga..

 

R: (almost screamed) par kyu??? Angel kyu jaayegi??

 

Ak: (confusingly) jaaha maa hogi wahi par to uska bacha bhi jaayega na riddhima ji..

 

R: angel ki maa mai hun… wo mere paas hi rahegi, mere bache ko mujhse kaise koi le jaa sakta hai… bolo na armaan inhe….(mr. malhotra came forward)

 

Mr. M : ye tum kya keh rahi ho riddhima beta?? Angel vibha ki beti hai, aur vibha jaha jaayegi wahi angel bhi jaayegi…. (riddhima looked at armaan but he looked down, riddhima shaked her head in tears and rushed up in her room, ritu came forward)

 

Ri: uncle angel ko lejaana kyu jaruri hai, riddhima se acha dhyan uska koi nahi rakh paayega, riddhima ne usse maa bankar paala hai, angel bhi riddhima ko hi maa maanti hai, aarish ki chotti bahen hai, wo apne bhai ke bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakti, phir kyu le jaana chahte ho aap usko..

 

Mr. M: dekho beta mai aapki bhawnayein samajhta hun, par hun to ek baap na, kaise apni beti ki khushi ki aakhri umeed uss se dur kar dun, riddhima armaan to phir maa-baap ban sakte hai, par vibha kabhi maa nahi ban sakti, aur aurat se behtar kon samajh sakta hai ki aulaad ka sukh kitna jaruri hota hai, aise mai apni bachi ki aakhri khushi uss se kaise alag kar dun??? (ritu moved back as she knew what he's saying is right…)

 

Ritu and armaan goes in room and saw riddhima sitting at the edge of kids bed and crying, both looked at aarish and angel who were sleeping with their hands clasped together tightly, armaan cried then moved to riddhima, riddhima hugged him tightly..

 

R: armaan..

 

A: nahi riddhima, ye rone ka waqt nahi hai, sambhalne ka waqt hai, rishu ko bhi sambhalna hoga hume, we cant break..

 

R: aur angel?? Usse kon sambhalega??

 

A: riddhima hum kuch nahi kar sakte, ye tum bhi jaanti ho, hum bas angel ki khushiyo ke liye pray kar sakte hai..

 

R: kyu kuch nahi kar sakte armaan?? Hum maa-baap hai inke…

 

A: hamara angel se pyaar ke alava koi aur naata nahi hai aur duniya mai ab bhi pyaar ke uppar khoon ke rishto ko maana jaata hai, vibha jab theek hogi usse bhi to koi jindagi jeene ki raah najar aani chahiye na, aur wo raah angel ke  alava koi aur nahi ho sakti, let her go riddhima, apni mamta itni kamjor na padne do, apne rishu ke liye, apni angel ke sukoon ke liye, kyunki chaho ya na chaho angel vibha ke saath hi jaayegi, agar aise bhejogi to angel kabhi  khush nahi reh paayegi aur ek riddhima jaisi maa apne bache ka sukoon nahi cheen sakti kabhi bhi.. haina??? (riddhima hugged armaan once again and cried, angel got up with the noise)

 

Angel: mumma royi royi kyu kar rai hai daeda?? (arman cleared riddhima's tears)

 

A: nahi beta, mumma to hass rai hai.. (riddhima gave fake smile, angel jumped in riddhima's lap)

 

Angel: mumma angel dal lagi, mumma angel ko paal kalo, phil dal ki peeti ho jaayegi aul wo bhaag jaayega… (angel ko darr lag raha hai, angel ko pyaar karo, aise darr ki peeti ho jaayegi aur wo bhaag jaayega)

 

Riddhima hugged angel tightly and showered her with kisses and cried yet again, ritu cried and left the room as she didn't want to break down, then armaan settled angel in his lap..

 

A: acha batao angel daeda ki kya hai??

 

Angel: pincess…

 

A: angel bade hokar kaisa ban na chahti hai??

 

Angel: daeda jaishe stlon.. (strong)

 

A: angel ko agar daeda jaisa ban na hai to ek game khelni padegi.. (angel clapped excitingly) angel ko apne mumma-daeda-bhaiya ke bina good girl bankar rehna hoga aakash uncle ke paas… (angel's face came down) princess ko daeda jaise strong nahi ban na?? (angel nodded) phir angel ye game khelegi na??

 

Angel: pal angel ko mumma ke bina dal lagta hai, aul agal bhaiya na hue to shabko kon daantega, aul daeda jaishe angel ko kon ride dega?? (she asked innocently, riddhima kept on clearing her tears, armaan hugged angel tightly and after controlling himself said)

 

A: ohh matlab princess game khelne se pehle hi dar gayi, ab to princess kabhi strong nahi ban paayegi aur ardhaan bhaiya or apne daeda jaise kissi ki pitti nahi kar payegi.. mai abhi aakash uncle ko bolkar aata hun ki aap strong princess nahi ho…

 

Angel: nai daeda, princess stlon hai..

 

A: to plomish karo ki  tum ye game theek se khelogi, kabhi akaash uncle ko pareshan nahi karogi, good girl bankar rahogi…

 

Angel : plomish daeda, par angel ko kabhi darr lagega to aap uski hupp karne aaoge na??

 

A: promise princess, hum chahe pass ho ya na ho, par apni bachi par kabhi koi aanch nahi aane denge… (angel didn't understand, armaan looked for riddhima but she's not there, armaan kept on caressing angel's hair, angel seemed excited for this thinking she'll be a brave girl after this game,she jumped down from armaan's lap and goes to aarish and mumbled "bhai ab angel b aapti talah blave ban jaayegi, phil jo mele bhai ko paleshan kalega angel uski dhishum kal degi.." then she kisses on aarish's head and mumbled " bye bhaiya, angel loves daeda, mumma, bhai shabshe shaaara..")

 

Ritu enetered in and asked armaan to take angel down, he picked up angel with heavy heart, ritu asked about riddhima and both turned on hearing some voice and found riddhima, trying hard to pull suitcase filled with angel's things, ritu quickly took suitcase from her and they moved out, as soon as they reached down, mr. malhotra joined his hands in front of riddhima..

 

Mr. M.: ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena beti, par majboor baap hun.. (riddhima holds his hands)

 

R: aap kyu maafi maang rahe hai uncle, aapse koi shikayat nahi hai, par maa hun na, apne bache ko khud se dur kaise hote hue dekh sakti hun, maa to hamesha hi koshish karegi ki uska bacha uss se dur na ho, par takdeer se kaise koi lade, jitna marji koshish karun par takdeer se wo panna nahi chura sakti jisme vibha ne angel ko 9 mahine tak apne andar rakha tha aur paala jisne bhi ho baad mai kanhiya ko jaana to apni devki maa ke paas hi hai na, par ye baat mamta kaise samajh paaye…. (she cleared her tears) dr. akaash angel bahut hi najuk sa phool hai aur usse phoolon sa hi bada karna, uski aankho se ek bhi aansoo na gire kabhi bhi, uski diet, uski medicines, sona, khelna sab kuch maine angel ki dairy mai note kiya hua hai, iss phool ko kabhi murjhane na dena…

 

Akaash gave little assuring smile, armaan's not able to say anything, just kept on patting angel, reminding each and every moment with her, akaash asked angel to come, first she happily goes to him saying "mai blave gul hun, ishliye mai je game play kalungi, but as soon as akaash picked her up and started moving towards door, angel started crying loudly and opened her arms towards armaan, riddhima turned her face and falls down on floor lifelessly and cried, angel started screaming while hitting akaash..

 

Angel: daeda angel dal lag laha hai, daeda angel hug, mumma angel hug, mummmaaa, muuummmaaa… daeeedddaaa, daeda angel game nai khelni, daeda angel mumma-daeda pass rehna, liiiccchhhuuu, aaallliiissshhh bhaiyaaa, muje nai jaana….. (everyone kept on crying, riddhima digged her nails in heart, armaan rushed out towards angel but akaash shaked his head in no, armaan stopped in midways, angel kept on crying hard calling he parents, her bhai but…

 

Armaan kept on seeing the car which's moving far with each passing moment, he too breaks down and settled in ground, with in a moment their life again turned upside down, he kept on crying and suddenly aarish's face flashed in his mind, he's shocked as he didn't thought about aarish, he quickly cleared his tears and goes in, settled in front of riddhima and cleared her tears..

 

A: riddhima ek bhi aansoo ab bahar nahi aana chahiye, hum nahi bikhar sakte riddhima, aarish ko kon sambhalega??

 

R: angel ko waha kon sambhalega?? Uska kon dhyaan rakhega, pata hai armaan rishu to phir bhi mere bina reh leta hai par angel to ek bhi din mere bina nahi rahi hai, haye meri beti ko kuch ho gaya to… usse lekar aao na, meri beti ko lekar aao, uske bina sab bikhar jayaega armaan, mai tum, aarish, ye ghar… armaan usse lekar aao, mere liye na sahi to aarish ke liye, angel ko lekar aao….(armaan holds her tightly)

 

A: sambhalo riddhima… (he wanted to console her but don't know why words were not supporting him, he was getting numb with the passing of each moment, one side there was pain of loosing his little princess and other side riddhima's words was not leaving him, he was feeling weak from inside thinking "kyu khushiyon ke theek se jashan banane se pehle hi wo cheen jaati hai, kiss baat ka dukh jayda hona chahiye?? Apni 4 saal ki beti ke cheen jaane ka ya riddhima jiss se ye sab khushiyan thi,

 

Jiss se mujhe itni pyaar bhari jindagi mili thi aaj ussi ka bhari mehfil mai mujhe paraya bana dene ka, riddhima ko pachtawa hota hai ki wo meri jindagi mai kyu aayi..usse pachtawa hota hai… usne hamari saari problems ka kasurwaarun  khud ko hi banakar kyu aaj 5 saal baad phir se mere pyaar ko hara diya…" he just sits on floor holding his hair tightly though his mind was fighting with his heart saying "iss waqt mujhe riddhima aur rishu ko sambhalne ke baare mai sochna chahiye.." but his heart kept on repeating riddhima's words and angel's screams…

 

Though deep down he knew that if he would have been at riddhima's place he would have done the same, he could feel riddhima's pain too but…. He came out from his thoughts as soon as heard "daedaa.." he looked up and found aarish standing..

 

Aru: daeda angel kaha hai?? (armaan was shocked and stood up, looked at riddhima who's already looking at armaan fearfully, armaan goes to aarish and picked him up)

 

A: (smiled a bit and lightly punched on aarish's face) champ angel ko aakash uncle le gaye hai..

 

Aru: (frightened) kaha daeda??

 

A: ummm aakash uncle thoda time angel ke saath khelna chahte the..

 

Aru: to mai kiske saath khelunga?? Aakash uncle ko bolo ki wo meri angel ko waapis karke jaayein, daeda aakash uncle bad boy hai, kissi se puche bina unki koi cheeji ko haath nai gaate(lagate)  aakash uncle ko je nai pata, aur angel meri cheeji hai, phil unhone kun nai pucha rishu se?? aap angel ko waapish lekal aao… mai akaash uncle ki katti hun, bad uncle… (armaan's speechless yet again, riddhima rushed from there and locked herself in bathroom and cried badly, armaan too moved in other room, ritu-chirag, siddharth moved to aarish after clearing their tears and consoled him, they manaofy him saying angel will be back after 1 week, somehow they put him to sleep, riu tried to talk to riddhima but she didn't open her door, ritu asked armaan to take care of her and aru and everyone left from there with heavy hearts..

 

To be continued..

 

Precap:

 

Teacher: hume lagta hai ki aapko ardhaan ko doctor ko dikhana chahiye, uske past records dekhkar lagta hai ki wo kaafi brilliant student raha hai studies and extra activities mai, par ek dum se 100% waale student ka 45% par aa jaana achi baat nahi hai, ardhaan kissi se baat nahi karta, hamesha gumsum sa gate ki taraf dekhta rehta hai, we're really worried for your child mr. malik... (Armaan and riddhima exchanged fearfull looks)

****** 

Nani: riddhima meri aakhri icha puri karogi na?? uss ghar mai phir jaaogi na meri bachi?? Mujhse waada karo.. mai sukoon se aakhri saans le paungi, uss makaan ko phir se ghar bana de riddhima, uss ghar mai phir se jindagi laade.. waada kar mujhse ki mera ye sapna adhura nahi chodegi… (she raised her hand with difficulty, riddhima looked at armaan who's giving her assurance with eyes that he's with her but think before taking any decision..)

 ******

armaan caressed riddhima's hair who's still unconscious and looking pale, then moved out..

Dr keerti: dr. armaan riddhima bahut jayda week hai, i'm worried, dhyaan rakhiyega ki unnpar kissi cheez ka stress na pade..

*****

riddhima stopped at gate, looked at gupta's house and with in a moment she's flooded with sweet memories of her childhood, then bitter moments of last 10 years too crossed her mind, she's on the verge of moving back when armaan holds her hand, she looked at him who shaked his head in no and then placed her hand on gate of gupta' house and helped her in pushing the door slightly...

 

Note: Getting married on 29th april, though I wanted to complete this story before my wedding but kuch na kuch problem ho jaata tha, will surely continue this story but after 1-2 months, will pm you whenever I'll update next part, for these parts I'm not sending any pms, hope you all will understand my situation, will continue this story in june, bas iss se jayda kuch nahi keh sakti, just be with me like always…

 

Lots of  love

Ankita.



Edited by GoDsLoVe - 24 April 2013 at 2:32pm

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shashank knew everything 
he knew and still did not speak 
what right does he have to be forgiven????
why should he be forgiven????
maybe a daughter could forgive him but not a mother and wife
even a wife might forgive him but a mother can never 
because of shashank aarish was  nearly killed 5 times and he wanted to destroy aarish before he was born 
THEY SHOULD NOT BE FORGIVEN 
NEVER 
THEY WILL NOT BE FORGIVEN 

and plz update asap
bahut time ho gaya hain 

and i want to know armaans reaction when he comes to know about these incidents 
then lets see
will he ask ridhimma to forgive her parents 
i hope not 
cause if he does i doubt his love 
cause he cant understand ridhimas pain 
she is beyond teh stage to need father mother naani or sister 
she has formed new bonds 
i want to see that intern who considers armaan as brother 
the orphan 
i forgot his name 
i want him to support armaan and ridhima 
and i want him to live with them 
devar and bhabhi scenes 
though that might come later 

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