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#8 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Skta Hai(AR)prt-228,9:64,5 (Page 52)

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finally the last part of anniversary special... kya koi apna dream gift paakar khush hone ki jagah sad bhi ho sakta hai... lets see...

 

Part-227(a)

 

A: stop.. (she stopped, armaan holds her hand) not now baby..(and slightly pulled her such that now she's facing him)

 

Armaan suddenly lost the track of his words as his eyes finally saw riddhima who's looking just……….. she's wearing pink gown having a beautiful sequence work, her hairs're tied in a beautiful high juda having flowers all around it, her face's partially hidden in a net, armaan's mind again tried to find a word for her but eyes stopped his mind saying let me finish my thirst first then you can continue with your battle.. almost 10 minutes passed, armaan kept on looking at riddhima without blinking his eyes, riddhima moved close to him and in his ears mumbled..

 

R: tumne to mujhe sach mai harwa(lost) diya ritu se..

 

A: (coming in present) huhhh??? (riddhima again repeated her words) kaise?

 

R: mujhe laga tha ki tum jab bhi mujhse miloge to mujhe apni baaho mai bhar loge, par tum..

 

A: (taking a relieving breathe) thankgod, kuch to aisa hai abhi bhi duniya mai jaha tum mujhe lekar galat ho sakti ho.. (riddhima pouted, armaan kept on looking at her and in lost voice) tumhe shayad ye yaad nahi raha hoga ki tumhare taiyar hone ke baad maine tumhe ek baar bhi nahi dekha, agar yaad hota to pata hota ki tumhe baaho mai bharne se pehle aahein bhi bharni padegi..

 

R: (carefreely) to?? Maine bhi khud ko nahi dekha, mere paas waqt hi nahi tha ye yaad karne ka…

 

A: acha?? Kyu???

 

R: kyunki mai khuli aankho se dekh rahi thi ki tum kaise react karoge apne unn doston se milkar jinke saath tumhara bachpan nikla, waise bhi khud ko dekhne ke liye aaine ki jarurat hoti hai par mera aaina mere paas nahi tha..

 

A: (with shocked expressions) ohh.. tumhara aaina kahi ghum ho gaya hai??

 

R: (shaking her head and putting her arms around his neck) ghum hone ki himmat hoti mere aaine mai to wo 2 ghanto mai aise paagalo sa bechain na

 hota jaise phir kabhi meri parchayi usspar padegi hi nahi..

 

A: (pulled her more closer) baat to aise kar rahi ho jaise khushi se khud aasmaan mai udd rahi thi, khud apne aap ko apne aaine ki aankho se dekhne ke liye bekarar thi, agar tumhara aaina bolta nahi hai to iska matlab ye nahi ki wo kuch nahi samajhta… (riddhima raised her brows)

 

R: ohh really?? (armaan nodded) aur kya samajhta hai mera aaina??

 

A: yehi ki tumhara aaina jab tak tumhe dekhkar kho na jaaye tab tak tumhe chaen nahi milta, tumhara confidence down hote hote itna down ho jaata hai ki tum phir kabhi waise nahi dress up hoti naahi uss dress ko haath lagati ho.. (riddhima's cheeks reddened, her eyes were down, she knew he's telling the truth but still wanted to oppose it, sometimes somethings don't need words to express, sometimes somethings meant to be hidden, sometimes it feels great when some feelings play hide and seek amongst themselves..) aur bataun ya itna kaafi hai??

 

R: (lil angrily) aur kya bataoge?? Waise bhi jitna bhi bataya sab galat hai, khuli aankho se sapne dekhna achi baat nahi…

 

A: haan tumhare gaal(fingering on her cheeks) tumhari aankhein tumhara dil (placing hand near her heart thus raising her heart beats more) bhi galat hai bas tumhare words ko chodkar..Pehli baar suna hai ki aaina bhi jhut/galat bol sakta hai.. (riddhima makes face) kya laga bas tumne hi mujhpar PHD kar rakhi hai aur mai to tumhe jaanta hi nahi hun, mujhe to jaise ehsaas hi nahi hoga ki tumhare song ki lines mai konsa hint chuppa hai jo mujhe clue ke kareeb lekar jaayega,

 

mujhe to jaise ehsas hi nahi hoga ki konsa haath meri riddhima ka hai jisse pakadkar meri jindagi ke ye khubsurat 11 saal nikle, jisse pakadne se mai pura ho jaata hun, kya laga agar swati aakar kahegi ki wo uska haath tha to mai maan jaunga, apne aadhe hisse ko nahi pehchan paunga.. kya laga swati aakar kahegi ki uska haath kata hai glass se to mujhe believe ho jayega, jaise tumhara jameen par khoon dekhkar mere andar to hulchul hogi hi nahi.. (riddhima could feel his anxiety as his grip started tightening around her arms, she looked him whose face's giving kind of fearful expressions, she cupped his face)

 

R: armaan chotta sa cut laga hai, jaldi theek ho jaayega..

 

A: (he looked at her hand which had small yet deep cut which'll need 3-4 stitches, though blood's not flowing right now may be due to ointment but it can come out anytime soon, he cursed himself and with tears caressed her hand) I'm sorry, I'm very sorry….

 

R: armaan tum kyu sorry bol rahe ho?? Glass tuta hua tha, mujhe pata nahi challa, issliye ye…

 

A: (looked her with slight hurt) jhut bolne ki to tumhe master degree mili hui hai na…

 

R: armaan???

 

A: tum kabhi mera khoon dekh paogi?? Kaisa feel karogi agar tumhe pata challega ki mere suffer karne ka kaaran tum ho, bardash kar paogi uss insaan ko dard dekar jo bas tum aur tumhare sapno ke liye jeeta hai, bardash kar paogi uss insaan ka khoon dekh kar jo najaane kitne arse(time) se tumhe ek aisi duniya dene ki taiyari kar raha hai jo tumhari fantacy hua karti thi par jis fantacy ke pura hone ka tum besabri se intejar kia karte the, yehi sochte the ki agar bhagwan kabhi saamne aaye to bas yehi duniya maanguga,

 

 aur wohi fantacy waali duniya ek din hakikat bankar saamne khadi hoti hai kyunki uss insaan ko tumhare kissi bhi adhura khwab se nafrat hai phir chahe uss insaan ko namumkin cheezein hi kyu na karni pade, aise insaan ki jiski tumhe sar aankho par bitha kar pooja karni chahiye, jiske pyaar ke karj ko uttarne ke liye najaane kitne janam aur lene pade uss insaan ko dukh dekar tum andar se kaise burden se bhar jaoge iska andaja bhi nahi hai tumhe,

 

mujhse pucho ki kaise mai saans le raha hun, ek taraf tumne mujhse itna pyaar karke mujhse meri aawaj cheen rakhi hai kyunki meri aawaj ne bhi haar maan li tumhare aage, andar se ek hi aawaj aa rahi hai kaha se tumhara karj chukka paunga tumhare pyaar ka aur dusri hi taraf dil guilt aur dard ke bhoj se dooba jaa raha hai, dono taraf barbaad mai hi ho raha hun, tumhe dard de dia, ye jaante hue bhi ki tum mujhe kabhi bhi pain mai nahi dekh paogi,

 

maine tumhe bulaya; ye jaante hue bhi ki mujhe besabr dekhkar tum bechain ho jaogi, itni patience bhi nahi thi ki 2 ghante aur tumhara intejar kar lun,pehle tumhe thankyou karne ke liye words dhund raha tha aur ab sorry kehne ke liye..(he's trying hard to control his tears but they didn't listen and started rolling down, riddhima cleared his tears though she herself was crying) ye (placing his hand on his heart) iska weight bahut jayda bhad gaya hai, bahuttt jayda, iss weight ke kaaran mai khada nahi ho paa raha, isse mujhse dur kar do, mujhe acha nahi lag raha ye…

 

He clutched his heart tightly, riddhima instantly took him in her arms, he first tried to hold his emotions then finally clutched her TIGHT,hid his face in her shoulder, let his tears soak her, a flashback of  all events since morning started running in his mind, first her tile gift, then the way he got surprises at toons world, his hands kept on tightening around riddhima, riddhima kept on caressing him, though they're real close yet they're finding hard to converse, riddhima's heart mumbled "kya hua jaan??tum theek to ho na?? kuch galti hui hai mujhse?? Tumhe surprise acha nahi laga??"

 

A's heart: galti to hui hai tumse, galti to hui hai… itna pyaar karne ki galti to ki hai tumne, mai pal pal wish karta hu ki kaise tumse pyaar karne ke liye meri jindagi badhti jaye, kaise mai waqt ko yahi rok lun taaki tumhare pyaar mai eternity tak jee sakun, kaise kya kar lun hamare saath ka pal pal bhadane ke liye aur tum meri ye wish puri na ho yehi wish karti ho na, jaanbujh kar mujhse itna pyaar karti ho na taaki mai waqt se pehle hi mar jaun..

 

Mujhe tumhara surprise bilkul acha nahi laga kyunki iss surprise ne mujhe dara diya, mujhe tumse dur karne ki koshish ki, tumhara iss surprise ne phir mujhe tumhare paagalpan ka roop dikhaya, tumhare pyaar ki, tumhari deewangi ki jhalak dikhayi, phir tumhare surprise ne ye jataya ki tumhari rooh mai sirf armaan hai, rooh ke aage saanson ki koi keemat nahi, kyunki rooh kabhi mit nahi sakti aur saasein kab mit jaaye koi nahi jaanta..

 

Meri saasein thamne lagti hai tumhara ye pyaar dekhkar, darr lagta hai maut se, ye gujarte waqt se jo kissi bhi pal meri saason ki dorr badi behrehmi se khinch lega mujhse aur mai tumhare pyaar se dur ho jaunga, tumhara pyaar jitna mere liye bhadta hai, utna tumhe khone ka darr pal pal mere andar bhadta hai, mai tumhare pyaar mai pal pal jeeta hun aur tumhara ye pyaar hi mujhe pal pal marne par bhi majbur karta hai… (armaan holds her tighly from her arms and with anger)

 

A: (screaming) bolo kyu karti ho mujhse itna pyaar, kyuuu??? Ye jaante hue bhi ki tumhari aakhri saans meri aakhri hogi, ye jaante hue bhi ki marne ke baad bhi mai tumhare saath hi rahunga,mai maut se darta hun, nahi marna chahta mai, ye itni jaldi jaldi waqt jo beet raha hai isse qaid karke rakhna chahta hun, darr lagta hai har agle pal ki kahi ye pal last na ho, har pal lagta hai ki koi to aisa aaye jo ye aashirwaad de de ki tum sadiyon tak iss duniya mai rahoge..

 

Bolo na riddhima kyu pyaar kiya mujhse itna?? (tears flowed from his eyes) kyu tumhara pyaar mujhse itna tadpa raha hai, kyu mai jee bhi raha hun, mar bhi raha hun, kyu tum mere itna kareeb bhi ho aur harpal duri ka ehsas bhi hai, kyu mai itna khush bhi hun aur dukhi bhi, kyu itna jayda andar se satisfied hote hue bhi itni bechaini hai dil mai, kyu tumhare pyaar se itna pyaar hote hue bhi tumhare pyaar se hi nafrat bhi hai.. kyuuu???? (he falls down on ground, totally broken.. riddhima cried seeing his condition, she too sits, armaan again hugged her tightly..)

 

A: kaise bataun tumhe, kaise dikhaun tumhe apna dil?? Mai kabhi tumse dur nahi hona chahta riddhima, ek pal ke liye nahi, mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hun, mai theek nahi hun riddhima, tumhare pyaar mai mara jaa raha hun, aur ye kya kar diya tumne aaj, ye kya kar diya… itna pyaar karke mujhe apna har janam ke liye apna debtor bana liya, iss baat ki khushi hai ki har janam mai hamara milna decide ho gaya hai kyunki tumhara debtor hun,

 

aur jab tak apna debt nahi chukka deta tab tak hamara har janam mai pyaar ka remaining balance carry forward hota rahega aur hum milte rahenge, par pyaar ka debt uttarte kaise hai ye nahi pata, jitna bhi tumse pyaar kar lun, kam pad jaata hai tumhare aage, aur pyaar ke alava koi or cheez tumhare pyaar ka mol nahi kar sakti kyunki baaki sab cheezo ka to mol kiya jaa sakta hai,

 

par anmol cheez ka koi kaise mol kare, anmol ko to anmol hi khareed sakta hai aur tumhara pyaar anmol hai, bolo ab kya karun?? (he looked around the hall, again reminded each and everything that riddhima did for him and clutched her more tightly, riddhima tried to move a bit so as to look his face but he didn't let her, Ridhima kept on caressing him, though she wanted to say many things to him but words left her side too.. )

 

She kisses on his shoulder with tears flowing down continuously and kept on caressing him while thinking "armaan mai aisa kya karun tumhare liye jo tumhare dil ko shaant kar sakun, kitna ajeeb hai ye pal,tumhari har bechaini ko samajh paa rahi hun,par ye bhi jaanti hun ki mera ek bhi word tumhari bechaini kam nahi kar payenge, tum jiss bechaini ko aaj mehsus kar rahe ho, uss bechaini ko najaane kitni baar maine mehsus kiya hai…

 

Chahun to tumhe abhi sab jawab de sakti hun, abhi bata sakti hun ki mera pyaar tumhare pyaar ke aage kuch bhi nahi, abhi hamare saath bitaaye lamho se gawahi dilwa sakti hun ki mai to ek aam ladki thi, deewangi se bilkul dur, paagalpan ka matlab bhi nahi jaanti thi,

 

pyaar ka matlab sirf ek dusre ke saath chalna, ek dusre ka khayal rakhna hota hai ye samajhti thi, par tumne iss aam ladki ko deewangi se milwaya, pyaar ka matlab ek dusre ki rooh se judkar ek hona hota hai ye bataya, mai to har cheez ka matlab tumse seekhi hun, tumne ek bemol(of no value) ladki ko anmol bana diya, ek aisi ladki jo kahi iss duniya ki bheed mai kho jaati, jaise sab kho jaate hai,

 

par tumne mujhe uss bheed mai se nikalkar apni chaaw(shade) mai rakh liya, apne pyaar se seench kar mujhe aaj iss mukaam par laaye ki aaj tumhare liye tumhare sapno ki duniya reality mai khadi kar sakun,jo ladki ek normal si gynachologist ban ne waali thi aaj uss ladki ke aage "one of the best neurologist in world" ka tag jud gaya, 10 saal pehle koi kehta mujhe ye sab karne ke liye to mai uska majak banati ki wo pata nahi konsi fantacy land mai hai..

 

aur aaj ye sab mai kar rahi hun shayad, par har cheez karne ke piche tumhi reason bankar khade the, kabhi inspiration, kabhi ideal, kabhi strength to kabhi weakness tumhi the armaan, tumhare alava koi nahi tha,haan mai deewani hun, haan mai paagal hun, haan mai behad pyaar karti hun tumse, karti rahungi janamo janamo tak aur iss baat ka dhyan rakhungi ki hamare pyaar ka balance har janam mai bhadta jaaye,

 

tumhe debt pura karne ki tension hai aur mai ye ensure karti rahungi ki tumhari tension bhadti jaaye..par armaan tum tension mai balance sheet dhyan se nahi dekh paaye, debtor tum nahi mai hun, tum to iss nacheez ki jholli bharte aaye ho, par mai sharam(dignity) chodkar phir jholli kholkar tumhare saamne khadi ho jaati hun hak se, to debtor mai hun armaan par ye sachayi kabhi tumhare saamne nahi aayegi; koi paagal hi hoga jo apne paer par kulhaddi maarega jo mai nahi hun…she came in present when heard ritu's voice,she quickly wipes her tears and detangled herself from armaan..

 

Ri: tum log yaha ho, waha hall mai sab log tumhe dhund rahe hai, 12 bajne waale hai…(riddhima looked at armaan, ritu pulled her before riddhima could say anything, she kept on looking at armaan, armaan's hand remained in air, riddhima pained, everyone encircled riddhima asking "what did armaan said to her, taarif sun sunkar kitni baar sharam se laal hui?? Armaan ne kya gift diya etc.. etc…" In between chirag announced that now armaan will sing a song for his sister, riddhima wanted to say no,but all shushed her,

Chirag gave mouth organ to armaan,

 

Both AR kept on exchanging glances, everyone gathered around armaan and started cheering him, but with each passing moment armaan was getting isolated, no cheers, no hootings were touching his eyes and ears, he's only seeing riddhima… his riddhima, at every corner he's seeing his and riddhima's images sharing beautiful moments, a sweet smile crept on his lips, he kept on roaming and feeling those moments, suddenly all images vanished and he's seeing only one riddhima who's glancing him with filled eyes and others, armaan's smile again vanishes and he started playing mouth organ…

 

Ishq leta hai kaise imtihaan, Ishq leta hai kaise imtihaan …

(armaan again got aloof, someone holds his hand, he looked and found riddhima standing with a smiling face, armaan caressed her face with tears and eyes giving proof of his serene love)

 

Ishq mai jeeyu, ishq mai marun, ishq hi mera bhagwan

(armaan then kisses on her forehead and expresses that he wants to live for her love only, then falls on ground as a lifeless body expressing though he's scared of dying but whenever he dies he want to die for her love only, riddhima shaked her head and she too settled next to him, armaan touched his finger on his eyes then on forehead, then pointed towards her saying she has become his bhagwan…)

 

hayee rabba tu hi meri jaan, tu hi jahan, tu hi meri manjil tere ishq mai main kurbaan

(riddhima hugged him tightly, armaan too hugged her as tight as he can, then looked in her eyes saying in ur eyes my whole world resides, then took her hand place near his heart saying you're my sole destination, then bow down his head expressing my every breathe is indebted to your love, I can do anything for you..)

 

Ishq mai deewangi ki hadd se gujar jaun..

(riddhima raised his head, yet again cleared his tears while shaking her head, then kisses on his forehead, armaan got up and pulled riddhima somewhere, she got confused as to where he's taking him, he took him at one corner then placed his hands on her eyes)

 

Tere pyar mai aaj mai jeekar mar jaun

(then removed his hand, riddhima looked at him, he pointed somewhere, riddhima turned and was surprised to see herself standing at the roof wearing red suit, then found armaan standing having bandages on head, his hand on her lower waist and her hand that he's holding near his heart, this is the moment when armaan's asking riddhima to confess her love before new year's… armaan's eyes were again having tears remembering that day, riddhima looked him who's saying I want to die once again by reliving in all those moments once more which are the proof of our love..)

 

Ishq mai jalte hai hum raat din,..

(riddhima looked him with tears but got scared when found him standing in between the fire, she's on the verge of screaming armaaannn but stopped when found fire turning into the moments of love which they shared in last 11 years, he's actually burning but in the fire of love, fire kept on increasing and armaan kept on vanishing and at the end armaan's body was totally hidden by those 11 years as if saying "bas ye pyaar hi armaan hai aur ye 11 saal hi armaan ki pehchaan hai…)

 

Haye ye mera dil na mane tere bin tere bin…

(riddhima broke down completely seeing the intensity of his love, seeing his condition)

 

Ishq leta hai kaise imtihaan…

(armaan looked at riddhima who was crying badly, she instantly rushed to him)

 

Sama rahi hai tu jismo jaan mai, challi jayegi jaan iss imtihan mai

(armaan cupped her face and with tears swinging in eyes expressed that with each passing moment she's dwelling inside his soul, the passion of her love which is getting doubled then the previous day is testing his heart, he's gonna die if she keeps on loving him like this)

 

ab mujhko hai maalum ki tu hai mera junoon,

(he then made her turn such that her back was pressed against his chest and holds her tightly, then slipped his finger on her neck, then bit her on her shoulder lil tightly expressing that her love has made him wild and mad that he sometimes forget that he's giving her pain…)

 

ab tu hi mera rabb jindagi, tujhse hi mera sukoon,

(then settles down on his knees, holds her softly and places his head on her tummy, then closed his eyes and rests as if he's travelling since eternity that too without resting and now he's got her, she's his resting point, where he forgets each and everything; just one thing remains that's her, don't know how but he feels peaceful deep down when she's with him, people oftenly spends their whole lives in search of that peace and his peace lies in her..)

 

Armaan opened his eyes and was shocked when didn't find riddhima, he looked at hall and came back to reality, he's just imagining riddhima throughout the song, everyone's looking at him shockingly as for armaan there's no one around him except his riddhima but in real everybody was around him except for his riddhima and each one was amazed seeing this side of armaan, armaan moved little ahead and found riddhima's sitting on floor in dark with tears flowing down in continuation, armaan continued while looking at her

 

hayee rabba tu hi meri jaan, tu hi jahan, tu hi meri manjil tere ishq mai main kurbaan..

(he pointed towards her then to his body, then rolled one globe on floor which stopped near riddhima's feet, then took out her photo from her pocket and hugged it tightly and lies down on floor as if it's a lifeless body, Riddhima gets up and rushes, stretches on armaan and keeps on kissing him, armaan holds her then mumbled in her ears)

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Part-227(b)

A: I love you riddhima, mujhe nahi samajh aa raha kaise tumhe apna pyaar dikhaun aur kaise yakeen dilwaun ki mai bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta  hun… (riddhima kept on looking him, then cleared her tears)

 

R: armaan waise to tum bhi ye jaante ho ki mujhe tumhare yakeen dilwaane ki jarurat nahi hai kyunki mere yakeen ne hi mujhe tumse pyaar karne par majbur kiya hai par phir bhi agar tumhe mujhe yakeen dilwakar hi iss uljhan aur bechaini se chutkara milega to ek bahut asaan tareeka hai mujhe ykeen dilwaane ka, ek aisa tareeka jiss se tumhari har feeling direct mere dil aur aatma mai mil jaayegi bina shabdo ke jaal mai uljhe hue.. (armaan looked her confusingly)

 

A: kya aisa mumkin hai?? (riddhima nodded with a little smile) kaise??

 

Riddhima took a turn and lies on floor, then asked armaan to overlap her with eyes, as he did so riddhima asked him to close his eyes, as soon as armaan closed his eyes his tears fell and straightway landed in riddhima's eyes, riddhima closed her eyes and let those tears merge in her body as well as soul, armaan asked riddhima what to do next but didn't get reply, he opened his eyes and looked her,

 

again called out her name but didn't get response, he felt weird, he slightly tapped on her cheeks and while doing so again one tear fell on her eyes, he's on the verge of clearing her eyes but riddhima holds his hands in air, armaan was surprised, riddhima shaked her head, slightly opened her eyes and let the tear of his entered in her then again closed her eyes tightly,

 

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 a moment crossed his mind where in riddhima's trying to confess the depth of her love for him but was confused how to do that and at that vary moment her tear rolled down and entered in armaan's eyes and without getting trapped in words web her feelings were already confessed

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Armaan looked at riddhima with shock, she's smiling with closed eyes, armaan too closed his eyes for a moment and realized that he's actually feeling very light, his fear, his anxiety, his pain, his burden all of a sudden seemed to be vanished as if some magic happened, he looked at riddhima emotionally then immediately kisses on her head and hugs her tightly,

 

then placed his lips on hers and in heart mumbled "thankyou….. thankyou…… thankyou…. Thankyou God… bas isse aur iske pyaar ko mere har janam ki kismat ki patthar ki lakeer bana de jise tu khud bhi na mitta paaye kabhi, fir chahe har janam mai runk(beggar) hi kyu na bana kar bhej de, wada karta hun kabhi nahi shikayat karunga, kyunki jiske paas aisi premika ho wo gareeb hokar bhi duniya ka sabse jayda ameer insaan hoga,

 

jinke pass ye pyaar nahi unke pass kuch bhi nahi, aaj ye baat mai vishwas ke sath keh sakta hun kyunki pichle 10 saalo mai tune har rang dikha diya jeewan ka par rang chahe feeka ho ya gehra, har rang behad khubsurat tha sirf ek riddhima ke saath ki wajah se aur mujhe pata hai aage ki jindagi bhi khubsurat rango se bhari hogi ,thankyou God mujhe iss duniya ka sabse rich person banane ke liye, thankyou…"

 

His chain of thoughts break when light started shining in room, they quickly break their kiss as soon as realized the reality, armaan quickly wiped her lips as her lipstick was smudged then lies down on floor and after wiping his own lips and eyes, holds his back, then tilted his neck and with one eye saw everyone coming towards them..

 

A: aaahhh…. Aaahhh..

 

R: (instantly) kya hua armaan?? (quiet worried)

 

A: kyaa huaa??? (widened his eyes) ye bolo kya nahi hua… pehle khud sab kuch kiya phir bolti ho kya hua.. (now riddhima widened her eyes)

 

R: maine.. maine kya kiya….

 

Ch: armaan kya hua, kyu aise chilla raha hai???

 

A: apni bahen se pucho, ussi ne kiya jo kuch bhi kiya andhere mai… (riddhima embarrassed and looked at armaan) kya jarurat thi andhere mai iss tarah baithne ki, na tum andhere mai baithti, na mai tumse yun takrata, na niche girta, na meri kamar mai moch aati… (riddhima again widened her eyes)

 

Ri: par agar tu gira tha to tujhe nahi riddhima ko moch aani chahiye thi  na kyunki gira to tu tha riddhima ke uppar, humne dekha tujhe abhi .. (ritu looked him suspiciously)

 

A: ummm… (he pinched riddhima, she makes face, armaan with eyes pleaded asking if you want them to know the truth)

 

R: ritu kamar mai nahi paer mai moch aati hai, kya ho gaya tujhe??

 

Ri: jab tera pati mr. cool se devdas ban sakta hai, deewaro se baatein kar akta hai, bhooto ke saath dance karke unhe gale laga sakta hai to maine kon sa pahad tod diya?? Waise ek baat bata tune ye sab apne pati ko laughing Buddha mai convert karne ke liye kiya tha  na?? fir ye devdas jaise kyu behave kar raha tha??(AR looked at each other, then caressed each other with eyes thinking "ab inhe kon samjhayega ki iss ghar ki deewaron mai bhi jaan hai, wo bhi bolti hai, jaha har jagah hi sirf ek dusre ka ehsaas hai waha kissi bhi ehsaas ke saath kabhi bhi dance kiya jaa sakta hai.." armaan got up and then picked up riddhima, then hugged her tightly)

 

A: I love you my princess…

 

R: I love you too jaan…

 

Ri: oeee ye kya hua???

 

R: ohh shit.. ritu… (ritu got scared, riddhima showed her time)

 

Ri: ohhh shittt……… chal jaldi se bhaag..(riddhima nodded and turned to go, but armaan holds her hand..)

 

A: (questionably) riddhima???

 

R: Cindrella 12 baje ke baad iss roop mai nahi ruk sakti, use actual duniya aur roop mai aana hai… (armaan looked at time and on the verge of saying something but riddhima stopped him and with eyes said something, armaan smiled and nodded) ritu tum sab yaha ke arrangements check karna properly..(she said somerhing with eyes to ritu too)

 

Riddhima left, armaan acted as if didn't know anything, he started playing with kids, then looked at everyone who were busy, he climbed stairs, in between ritu-chirag searched for armaan but didn't find him, both thought that he must have gone to find riddhima but smiled thinking that he wont be able to get her and till that time they'll do the arrangements…As soon as armaan climbed stairs and looking in rooms, one hand pulled her in and closed his mouth, armaan smiled when realized its riddhima but was surprised that she's hiding in store room..

 

A: riddhima tum yaha store room mai aise kyu chuppi ho..

 

R: meri bhabhi ka ye mind blowing plan tha aapko satane ka…

 

A: (pulling her close) aur aapka iss plan mai koi contribution nahi tha??

 

R: (putting arms around his neck) aapko kya lagta hai??

 

A: mujhe lagta hai ki aapne contribution to pura kiya hai..(riddhima looked him) par waqt ki hera pheri karne mai; kyunki hamari 10th anniversary ke last 10 minutes aap apne armaan ke alava kissi aur ke saath nahi bitana chahti thi… kyuu, sahi kaha na??

 

R: 15 minute hi aage kiye the, jayda nahi…(innocently, armaan smiled, then hugged her tightly, riddhima in lost voice said) kitna intejar karwate ho armaan, tumhari aankho mai ye excitement, ye pyaar, ye smile dekhne ke liye paagal hui jaa rahi thi..

 

A: (cutting her) ab bhi paagal hone ki jagah hai tumhare andar?? Mujhe laga tha ki tum already paagalpan ki charamseema(limit) paar kar chukki ho, waoo yaar kya capacity hai… (he thumped on her back praisingly) I'm jealous; meri tumhari jitni capacity nahi hai aur paagal hone mai.. mere aage to already "the end" ka board laga hua hai.. (he pouted, riddhima smacked him, then with in no time placed her lips on his lips, armaan pulled her more closer, they smiled between the kiss, riddhima kept on caressing his hair, when both break apart both together mumbled "happy anniversary jaan.." then both laughed) I love you… (and the clock started showing 12:00)

 

Riddhima changed into a red saree, armaan's all lost yet again, riddhima first blushed then waved her hand, armaan came in present, riddhima asked with eyes "what happened??" armaan smiled sarcastically then shaked his head, riddhima pouted..

 

A: pehle khud hi jaan lene ki koshish karti ho, phir puchti ho jaan tum theek ho?? (armaan pulled her, then turned her towards mirror, puts her hair on other side of shoulder, riddhima closed her eyes and gulped, armaan hot breathes caressed her neck, she clutched her arm and was getting lost but realized that he's doing something in her hair, she opened her eyes and found him tucking her hair with rose, she smiled and caressed him from mirror, after tucking flower, armaan kissed her on shoulder and before they could proceed forward, she heard interns voice, both gave frustrated look but then holds each other arms and moved out..

 

As soon as they reached down, armaan looked around totally astonished as with in a moment all those toons world, prince's palace were gone, now he's standing in a real party, their balcony's decorated with pink and blue dupattas with lots of flower bonquets, all were dressed like normal human beings, kids too changed their dresses, armaan immediately settled on his knees folding his hands…

 

R: (surprised) armaan??

 

A: maa aur kitne jhatke milne hai mujhe aaj hi ke din?? Aapko mujhse pyaar naa ho to koi problem nahi, par mere dil ka to khayal karo, kitne log rehte hai usme, agar aaj mujhe kuch ho gaya to unn logo ka kya hoga, please mujhpar rahem karo, saare jhatke ek hi baar mai de do na, phir aaram se unka ilaaj karna…(riddhima makes face, vedic came and lies on floor on his tummy and joined his hands) ab tu konsa jhatka dene aaya hai?? (riddhima showed him eyes)

 

Ve: bhaiya aap jitney ilaaj karwana chahte hai karwa lijiyega, but please pehle aap cake kaat lijiye, nahi to aapko real waala jhatka mil jaayega jab hum sab jhatke se hospital mai pahunch jaayenge bhook ke karan..

 

A: gappu kahi ka, kha kha kar phat jaayega ek din.. (both got up, AR goes towards cake table and after cutting the cake feeded each other with love accompanied by a hug, everyone clapped, then ritu came and pulled armaan-riddhima in center and all the kids joined hands and started taking rounds around them, AR with surpise and questionable eyes looked at each other, then suddenly song started playing "ye to sach hai ki bhagwan hai.."

 

AR looked forward and found aarish and angel with pooja thalli, they rolled plate in circle besides AR, then showered them with flowers and joined their hands while settling on their knees, AR had tears, both quickly picked their kids in arms and hugged them, kids clears their parents face, then kisses on their forehead, then jumped down and started dancing then aarish pointed towards some wall,, AR looked towards it, and a movie is played displaying all their family moments, armaan placed his arm around riddhima's shoulder and ritu captured this moment..

 

Everyone's having fun, then finally all wanted to end this party with armaan riddhima's performance, both starting dancing, riddhima asked dj to play "agar tum na hote" song and both kept on melting in each other's arm with the passing of time, everyone joined them, riddhima placed her head on his shoulder, armaan suddenly stopped dancing as his gaze fell on door, riddhima mumbled "kya hua armaan??" but getting no answer from him she looked him… where as armaan was shocked to see shashank-padma, nani, their old gang on door..

 

Shashank falls on door seeing armaan and joined his hands with tears in eyes, padma holds him with tears , nani, anjali-atul, rahul-muskaan too had tears seeing his condition, then they too joined their hands apologetically, riddhima from armaan's arms twisted back as to see where he's looking and why he's so shocked…. As soon as she turned, she detangled herself from armaan out of shock, her smile was completely vanished.. everyone stopped dancing…

 

To be continued..

 

Precap:

 

R: dr. shashank gupta.. aap kya lagta hai ki itna sab ho jaane ke baad aap ek din kahenge ki I apologize to kya sab theek ho jayega, itne saalo tak bina kissi wajah ke aapki wajah se hume itna kuch sehna pada aur aap chahte hai ki wo sab bhulkar hum phir se normal bankar jiyen… kya samajhte hai aap apne aap ko??? Bhagwan hai aap?? Dharti ko khareed rakha hai ya logo ko khareed rakha hai aapne?? Kyun jaisa aap chahte hai waisa hi ho hamesha??

 

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Padma: riddhima ye kya tareeka hai apne papa se baat karne ka..

 

R: (cutting her) mere koi papa nahi hai, unhe to 10 saal pehle hi kho diya tha..

 

Pa: (screaming) riddhima.. jubaan sambhalkar bolo.. kya ho gaya hai tumhe, hosh mai to ho.. kaha gayi tumhari masumiyat, samajhdaari.. tum wo riddhima nahi ho…

 

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A: riddhima tum samajh kyu nahi rahi??

 

R: armaan tum kyu nahi samajh rahe?? Armaan aaj agar mai kahungi ki  tum apne parents ko maaf kar do, kar paaoge unhe maaf?? Ek baar haan keh do, mai vaada karti hun ki bina koi sawaal puche mai dr. shashank ko maaf kar dungi… (armaan looked her shockingly then lowered his gaze) tumne apna answer khud hi de diya armaan…

 

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Rishab: bhaiya maine aur vedic ne shaadi karne ka faisla kar liya hai..

 

A: (screaming) kyaaa?????

 

****

 

Stay tunned…

 

Will update on 30th or 31st jan..


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