Navya

SS:Banogi tum meri Dulhan?

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Posted: 11 years ago
this SS  is my first attempt...plzz do read n comment...


Disclaimer: this is just my imagination. if anyone feels that this is related

to any real life hero-heroine then it is not coincidental but deliberate:))
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Situation: College got over. anant navya went to their own homes. but

here anant's family is not in mumbai but in jammu;). n anant is staying

alone in his flat but navya is with her family. after one week anant plans

to go home to jammu. n he leaves leaving navya in tears. both misses

each other alot for one month but still calls n messages. n finally one day

she is informed that he is returning n she goes mad of jo
y.

the day he came back:

navya:anant tum pauhanch gaye ghar?

anant:haan main abhi abhi pauhanchaa.

navya :achha teek hain ..n cuts the fone b4 he asks anything more.

she suddenly gets ready n jumps into her car telling her mom main jaa

rehi hoon anant se milne(here navyas family know abt anant)

wen she reaches his flat she runs to his flat even faster than a lift n

reaches his door which was not locked. she pushes n open it n rushes

inside throws her bag n mobile to the sofa n runs to search him. mean

while anant was busy with some work in his camera n was standing his

back in the room. she just saw him n her breath stops...she moves like a

rocket n hugs him from his back  n starts sobbing. anant was shcoked as

who is this.but he realizes her touch.he keeps the camera on the table n

calls.. navyaaa...

but she is not at all in senses n not ready to leave him.
he tries hard to turn back n finally he manages to..but she is still in her

tight grip..n he too tightens his grip...
there was silence for a looong time n just emotions playing...

finaly after a lonnng hug he asks..tum kab aayi navya...

she is still crying...but manages to ask...tum mujhe itneee dinoon tak

chodke kyun gaya...

anant: kabhi kabhi aise jaana chahyee...tabhi tho pyaar badhta hain...hain

naa...n smiles...
she hits him n again hugs...but finally patcehs up.

n he starts sharing his jammu trip n shows her the pics he clicked..n she

was so happy...
navya:anant kya tumne gharwallon se humhare baare main baath ki?
anant:(sudeenly makes a gloomy face) haan...magar...mujhe nahin laghta

ki woh loog...choodo..hum baad main manaayenge unko...

navya was sad hearing this...but he cheers her up n ask her to see the

pics..

in b/w he secretly takes his fone n gives a call to his mom n cuts it..(that

was a symbol for her to call to navyas fone).

while navya was seeng the pics anant "achha tum pics dekho main

tumhareliye chaay banadetha hoon.." n goes to kitchen.

suddenly navyas fone starts ringing...
navya: ek unknown number hain...lagtha hain mumbai ke bahar ka number

hain
anant:udhaoo shayad tumhara ko rishtedaar hogaa..n starts making tea.

navya: hello...
other side(OS):navya beta...
navya:ji..aap????????
OS:pehchana mujhe?
navya:ji...nahin..
OS:main anant ki maa bol rehi hoon..
navya gets shocked n looks at anant but he is not looking at her n busy

with his work. but on his back he is making naughty smile.
maa: tum kahaan ho?
navya: ji aunty main ...woh...ek dost ke yehaan hoon...
anant still makes a smile ...(like "acchaaa jhootiii" wala look)
maa"tum kaise ho beta
navya:ji aunty main teek hoon..aap kaise hain
maa:haan theek hain..buss ek hi dukh hain.
navya:kyaa????
maa: accha beta..anant ne bataya ki tum uski bauhat achhi dost hoo...tho

tumhe uska har ek pasand ke bare main patha hi hoga naa..
navya:haaan?????(questioned look)
maa: humne usse kahaan ki ek bahu laakar do humhe par woh suntha hi

nahin..kehthe hain ki aap loogon ko meri taste nahin maalom hain. tho

maine soch ki tum uski itni achi dost ho tho tumhe patha hoga ki usse

kaisi ladki chahyee..kya tum meri madat karoge uskeliye ladki doonde

keliye?????
navya: goes sad hearing his n is about to cry...aunty..woh...main kaise...
maa: kya hua beta..tumse nahin hoga kya?
navya:ji..woh...navya moves to th e kitchen n still looking at anant..but he

is not even turning to her but givin more n more smiles at his back..
maa: accha beta..agar tumhe koi problem ho tho koi baath nahin..hum

khud doondenge uskeliye ladki..

tears started rolling from her eyes..but she still manages to hide it from

maa.

maa: ya phir ek kaam karo beta...KYA TUM BANOGI MERI

BAHU..?????????

navya ggets a surprized shock...she is silent...no words coming out of

her throat...

maa:navya beta...tum sunrehi hooo???????????hallooo..
navya:after some time...ji...auntyyy...
maa:kya tum mere bigade hue bete kiii patni banogiii???????

navya was in a confused shock..she dint know wat to say...she was

uttering something...jii...aunty...main..woh...

maa:sudeenly bursts to laughter n says..beta..sorry yeh sab usne mujhse

kelhalwaaya...tumhe pareshaan karne keliye...hum sab ko tumhe bahuat pasand

hain...humari bahu ki roop main..tho beta tyaar ho jaooo..jammu aane

keliye...hum abhi tumhare ghar phone karne wale hain...theek hain..ab

rekhthi hoon..bye beta..apna khayal rekhna...aur usskaa bhi...

n cuts the phone...

navya still in another world...out of senses..anant gives her a small hit n

asks"kya huaa..kiska phone tha?"(as if he dint know anythinggg)

n gives her the tea cup n goes out...

she follows him n ask..."kya tumhe nahin patha kiska phone tha?"
anant: kaisi baath kar rehi ho navya..mujhe kaise patha hoga kiska phone

tha. tumhara phone main call aaya tha na..aur mujhe kaise ..."
navya starts hitting him n he starts running all over the

house...areyyy..yeh kya kar rehi ho navya...mujhe kyun maar rehi

hoo..maine kya kiyaa...

navya: tumne yeh sab natak karwaya apni maa see..aur mujhe acting kar

rehe ho ...finally he catches her n tells "main apni jhalli ko badaaasa

surprize dena chahtha tha...aur diya...accha laga?"
navya: in tears...anant..yeh sab kaise hua..tumne unloogon ko kaise
manaya?
anant: tum tho itnii acchi ho ki koi bhi tumhe naa nahin keh saktha...aur

mere ghar waloon bhi nahin...

both share a sweet hug...
anant: tho meri jhalli jammu ki bahu banogii?
navya: nahin...(smiless)
anant: nahinn?????????!!!!!!!
navya: jammu ke prince ki dulhan banoongi...☺️

both have a sweet romantic smile n hugs...πŸ˜³πŸ€—

suddenly it starts raining...
both goes to the balcony n enjoys the rain n have the hot tea...

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Posted: 11 years ago
hahahahahahahaha what shuld i say nw? no idea.. well plan badiya hai.. naam thodasa change hogaya.. excellent.. stil cant stop my grinn... speechlees.. ab bus ye sach hojaye.. 😍Edited by -diva-shamya- - 11 years ago
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Hmmm... what should i say apart from the fact that you made me smile.. πŸ˜Š
Loved it..
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wow!!! too gud😍 luved it..
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 smiling and dreaming now.
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WOW! Ye sweetestest   RS likhnewali old member kon hai?jisne ye likha hai this for uπŸ€— I think in real, the meeting scene will be more romantic than this.
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niceπŸ˜πŸ‘wish this come true soon
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Now all are in Shamya land.wish our dream come true πŸ˜Edited by asihaseen - 11 years ago
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sach mein hum sab pagal hai 4 shamyaπŸ˜† kash yeh sach ho jaye 😍 Edited by rashi_anya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
iam so happy after reading ur post kaise i praise u ke u have written a v v v beautiful ss i loved it kash ye sach hujyae tu hum sab bht khush hunge wase now u plz do continue it...
shamaya ki story anya ke roop mei hi sahi hum smile tu karahe hain