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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Srishti_SwaRon

Awesome OS Sudha. You got me thinking that was actually a third person telling this story, maybe her dad or someone. But that's really good thinking to give life to her diary. Loved it. And well penned. 

Thanks Srishti :)
What do i say, i have a feeling that Sharon can never be so close to anyone to share everything about her life..except may be a non living diary..which i gave life too LOL
Thanks for commenting in all my work dear, it means a lot :)

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by frankyfio

awesome
loved it

Thank you Smile
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chimpukli10

hey dear nice OS..i was wondering who is d speaker. first i thought abut sharon's mother but at d end cme 2 know it was her diary..felt good toread sharon's pov

Thank you Big smile Yeah as i reader myself i enjoy reading Sharon's POV. 


Edited by Sudha-SK - 18 July 2012 at 6:31am
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rutu

It was awesome...the way you described their journey right from RDX's party to the abandon staircase corridor to the charity event scene is beautiful...found solace in this OS after knowing how pathetic scenes we are getting to see on the show...how i wish sharon ka monologue show mein dikhate...anyways loved it when she accepted her feelings for him finally
and as i always say...keep writing more...love to read your worksEmbarrassed

Aww..thats so sweet of you to say. I sure will try writing more :)
Thanks for liking and commenting dear :)
And i too wish ki Sharon ka monologue show mein mile ..
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
thnx for pm ...just loved the os ...u hav very well written sharon's pov Clap...n described her emotions beautifully.

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by marauder

Didn't knew that Sharon had Tom Riddle's Diary LOL. But jokes apart beautifully compiled. All the emotions , vulnerabiltiy and insecurties of Sharon could not have been better expressed. I have one complain though how did you missed the Shivam party fiasco. That is one hell of a turning point for Sharon. Loved the style of narration . Something innovtive and awesome.

Tom Riddle's Diary LOL Yeah this is Sharon's world and everything is possible out here.
let me start with a sorry. Sorry to have disappointed you, along with Shivam party fiasco i wanted to combine the scrapbook and gift burning scenes too..but it got too long and too late in the night to have finished in by yesterday..and i wanted to post it sooner. sorry again..
Thanks for liking the style of narration, this is the first time i wrote on a 3rd person (diary Smile) POV.
happy that her emotions and insecurities came out well.
Thanks for commenting in all my works Shishir..it means a lot :)

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suku_SwaRon

Beautifulll sudha, you have analysed sharon so well, Poor sharon, I just cant imagine what will happen today. Khair chodo, AS ususal it is just mindblowing.I love to read from sharons pov, you have taken into even the minute details of their love. Supberbbb. Loved it. Thanks.


Thanks for the kind words gal, thanks for liking it :)
As a reader myself..i like to read Sharon POV the most..so decided to write it in a new style :)
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madhura..

Sudha, u seem on os spree!
This was beautiful, made a mast read, and you penned down Sharon's thoughts well connecting with d3!
 
Thanks for pm.
PS I will read ur other os soon!Just dont wanna reserve, as I miss out to unres.
 
Madhura..

Yeah on a OS spree !
I am happy that it was a mast read. 
Madhura, take your time, its ok :)

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