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I wish I knew more-SwaRon OS (Page 2)

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Once again awesome os sudha
We didn't get any sharon pov in show n this is really amazing
Loved it

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 3:35am | IP Logged
Awesome OS Sudha. You got me thinking that was actually a third person telling this story, maybe her dad or someone. But that's really good thinking to give life to her diary. Loved it. And well penned. 

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
awesome
loved it
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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 5:21am | IP Logged
It was awesome...the way you described their journey right from RDX's party to the abandon staircase corridor to the charity event scene is beautiful...found solace in this OS after knowing how pathetic scenes we are getting to see on the show...how i wish sharon ka monologue show mein dikhate...anyways loved it when she accepted her feelings for him finally
and as i always say...keep writing more...love to read your worksEmbarrassed

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Didn't knew that Sharon had Tom Riddle's Diary LOL. But jokes apart beautifully compiled. All the emotions , vulnerabiltiy and insecurties of Sharon could not have been better expressed. I have one complain though how did you missed the Shivam party fiasco. That is one hell of a turning point for Sharon. Loved the style of narration . Something innovtive and awesome.

Edited by marauder - 18 July 2012 at 6:10am

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:00am | IP Logged

Beautifulll sudha, you have analysed sharon so well, Poor sharon, I just cant imagine what will happen today. Khair chodo, AS ususal it is just mindblowing.I love to read from sharons pov, you have taken into even the minute details of their love. Supberbbb. Loved it. Thanks.

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by varoo28

awesome awesome write up Sudha !! you have totally justified Sharon's character !! u gave her a meaning (not like the 1 in show ) very nice update :))

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by meevee

Hey Sud...why is it that everytime you write sumthing, I invariably happen to stumble upon it - much much before u make it evident...luv u for this one - u breathed life into that diary - cum to think this is one song I had been carrying in my mind the whole time since I had seen that precap from last week abt Swayam saying "mujhe akela chod do" and that look on her face then...that lost, guilt-ridden & dejected one - lost as to what to do next, guilt-ridden that she had hidden facts from him and dejected as to why this keeps on happening to them - to summarize, this OS was a need of the hour and an ode to the Sharon we luv - iHappy!!!! 
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Thanks for liking and commenting. I felt the song goes with Sharon's feeling for now. So decided ot write something around it. Glad that it made you happy :) 
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