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I wish I knew more-SwaRon OS (Page 10)

flirteyed IF-Dazzler

Joined: 13 June 2012
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Posted: 21 July 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Superb writing sudha! U gv a new side 2 sharon's character nd thnx a lot fr dat! Each nd evry lyn f ur OS ws heart touching! Kip up ds writing spree nd kip gvng us such wonderful OS more nd more!

Edited by shreyasi28 - 21 July 2012 at 12:00pm

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Snowey IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
Brilliant piece of work sudha just luved it..beautiful OS..

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misha24 Senior Member

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Posted: 31 July 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged

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ShivTRSS IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 September 2012
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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 5:15am | IP Logged
u know what is song pe classical dance bahut acha rehta. Maybe unhone Taani ka kathak bhare naina pe dikhana chahiye. Kyun na bole mose mohan kyun????
gunnu1 Goldie

Joined: 01 June 2012
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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
awesome os!! 
luved it!! 
pls pm me for more such write-ups!! :D

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Destiny_015 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 October 2012
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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 2:52pm | IP Logged

Sudha di ur writings r alwys so full of beauty...Embarrassedafter evry write up i alwys remain spellbound...Smiledis os was another superb wrks f ursClap...seriously sharon's pov z so rarely shown in d soapConfused...u brought sum beautiful incidents nd etched sharon's thoughts beautifully..Big smile.choosin d diary as speaker ws a rly nyc way..Thumbs Up.gr8 Infact...d rdx party incident wen sharon 1st notices him...her fear towards d way he reads her lyk a open buk...finally sum1 ws brkn her shell wich she didn't lyk..Cry.d abandoned corridor incident...her feelins over how Swayam freed her...nd his ignorance..."His nonchalant behavior henceforth added more to her pain. Few more months passed by and she did what she does best, hiding away form her feelings and suiting armor against her true self.  "It hurts, not just figuratively but the, kind that gets inside you and rips your soul apart, pain" I hate him, I hate love, she said not realizing she was in love at the first place."love dis prt..Hugdis story made me nostalgic..i so Luvd dis portion of swaron...wen sharon ws constantly wantin Swayam's much his ignorance affected her..Smile.""I am comfortable with the book being shut" That's all it took, and the smile from Swayam's face faded, now corpselike, his eyes whimpering, he silently turned his back making his way out of the mess he had forged for himself."Let's not risk your comfort here" were the last words she ever heard from him.She knew she'd pushed him far enough, and the next few days established just that."Smilei lykd d way how u explained d both f deir pov's of dese true..jst perfect...nd absolutely Luvd how alas d fear of loosin Swayam made her recognize her feelins nd accept dem.Wink..a gr8 os...gr8 writing...Clap

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Aashu14 Senior Member

Joined: 23 April 2012
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Posted: 15 December 2012 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Wow nice OS.. i liked it.. The dairy telling d story is nice.. i liked d concept a lot.. nice thinking..

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