I wish I knew more-SwaRon OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

Sudha you have no idea how much u have grown from ur first OS to this one. It was well thought and well penned. And it seemed complete. We all were at some point of time ecstatic about the actual confession on the show but there was no denying that it was abrupt and seemed incomplete. With sharon mentionin a finale to loose ends and barging into his room the next moment, there wasn't much that could appeal to sharon fans. This OS of urs has done full justice to the sharon we know and the sharon we love. The entire concept was amazing. Even the style of narration was fabulous. Though if u dnt mind me sayin it, it seemed to me that the song video in the beginning sort of broke the flow. The content and concept was so very intense and matured that it didn't need the video. But i speak only for myself here.. :) 

Loved it sudha.. pls keep writing more.. This was by far ur best piece of work!! And one of the most interesting concepts i hv come across so far! trust me when i say this cos i love reading OSs and i hv read quite a lot over here!! This was superb!! 

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

Sorry for the delay in the comment. Illness ridden.

Anyways coming to the OS. This was one well thought out and beautifully written OS. I know most of the Swaron fans crave for Sharon's side of the story, so therein itself you captured my attention. 

You have no idea (or maybe you do, since we are all suffering from the same thing) how good it felt to relieve all those intense even if pain filled SwaRon moments. Nostalgia is the only word that springs to mind after reading this. You managed to capture the essence of every major SwaRon scene. Kudos for that.

I have to tell you this whole concept of a diary's POV was refreshingly new and creatively brilliant. You know I didn't have any idea when I started reading this that it was from a diary's POV. I thought maybe it was a friend or something. But I was delightedly shocked when I came upon that realization. 

And and and, I absolutely loved the last lines of the OS. Absolutely loved them. Nicely done, Sudha. Nicely written in fact. 👏 Like always, keep writing more.😊

Originally posted by: swaron_d3

luved it!

great work!

sorry for the late reply!

Originally posted by: -Antu-_-Aslan-

It was fabulous!!! I guessed dat only a diary can know so mch about Sharon.😃

Originally posted by: neetha

well m too late..😔.m sorry.😔.but sudha ur write up is a treat to read..👏.loved it gal..i loved sharon's monologue..its explained well..awesome is the word.. 👏