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OS - An eventful karvachauth (part 2- page 4)

liv2laugh IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
This OS will have 3 parts. There will be tons of drama and masala entertainment. LOL

However, please be warned that I am a very lazy updater LOL

An Eventful Karva Chauth - Part 1

It was a beautiful day in Jetsar sunny and beautiful. Anandi hummed to herself as she supervised the decoration of the haveli. It was her first karva chauth tomorrow and she had planned to keep the fast for Shiv. Shiv. The name itself sent chills through her body. She did not believe she loved him so much. After Jagya she never thought she would love anyone but Shiv changed all that. Life with him was the polar opposite of life with Jagya. Shiv gave her space to grow, he was as undemanding and seemed happy with as much time as she could give him. He gave her so much expecting nothing in return. She could not imagine life without him. He supported her in every way so that she could achieve her dreams. He was a gem of a person and she thanked her family everyday for not giving up on her. She felt her eyes tear up as she remembered her mother who ensured that they were married before she left for her heavenly abode.


Suddenly she felt her tears being wiped and felt herself being enclosed in a familiar pair of arms. "Anandi tum ro rahi ho? Kyun? Kisse ne kuch kaha kya? Kahin tumhe chot toh nahin lagi?" (Anandi you are crying. Why? Did someone say something? Are you hurt somewhere?) With that Shiv started examining Anandi closely touching her all over to see if she was fine. Gehna who just walked into the living room blushed and turned her back grinning. Anandi was embarrassed but Shiv was in full blown panic mode and just would not stop. Finally Anandi held his hand and told him "Bas. Tayyiji wahan khadi hai. Aap bhi na kahin bhi shuru ho jaate ho." (Enough. Tayyiji is standing there. You just start anywhere.) Shiv was confused and said "Lekin Anandi tum ro kyun rahi thi. Dekho ye tumhara mayka hai. Agar tum rona shuru karogi toh ye sab log sochenge ki maine hi tumko rulaya. Please batao kya baat hai." (But Anandi why were you crying? This is your mayka. If you start crying, everyone will think I made you cry. Please tell me what is the matter." Shiv went up to tayiji and told her "Sachi mein tayiji maine kuch nahin kiya." LOL (Really tayiji I did not do anything)


Gehna  tried to maintain an angry look but could not hold back anymore and burst out laughing and told Shiv "Patha hai mujhe lekin aap bhi na thodi sambhalke kaam ki jiye. Aur koi bada aa jaatha tho'shukar hain ghar mein aur koi nahin hai"  LOL (I know but you should be careful what is some of the elders had come'.thank god no one else is home). Shiv put his hand in his hair and blushed. Gehna laughed and told him that she was just teasing him. Anandi watched the easy camaraderie between her tayiji and Shiv and turned around towards the mandir and thanked the lord that he was in her life. He would do anything to make sure she did not cry. She then walked to a window and stood near it. She was not looking out but she was lost in her thoughts. Daadisa had insisted that Anandi's first Karva Chauth be celebrated at the haveli and Shiv had given in. Daadisa had also insisted that they come stay and the haveli until then. Shiv had resisted but daadisa had emotionally blackmailed him saying that he did not consider her his daadi and just called her that. Shiv had no choice but to give in and they had both arrived last night. Everyone had been so excited to be under the same roof and so they had stayed up talking for a while. Shiv was really concerned that it was past their bedtime and she had very hectic day. He was concerned that she might be tired because she was the one who did all their packing also on top of that because he had been stuck at work. Anandi assured him that she was fine, so they stayed up with everyone chatting and laughing, like the old times. Then everyone retired. Shiv was insisting that she go to bed immediately because the next day was going to be hectic. She was protesting that she wanted to set their things out, so Shiv picked her up and put her on the bed. Anandi was mad at him and tried to get back up and in the scuffle Shiv fell on her. Then one thing led to another. She and Shiv had been up for a while after that. Anandi blushed remembering what transpired.


She came out of her reverie to realize that Gehna was talking to her. Gehna said to Shiv "Shiv lagta hai ye din mein bhi tumhare sapne dekh rahi hi." (Shiv, I think she is dreaming about you in the day time). Shiv shook Anandi and asked her why she is so pensive and she told him she was counting her blessings because she was so happy.  Anandi looked like she was going to get teary again so Gehna nazar utaroed (dunno how to say that in English'.removed the evil eye I guess) both of them and left telling them "Mujhe bhi bahar jaana hai. Ghar ka khayal rakhna." (I have to go out too. Keep an eye on the house). She told Shiv to make sure Anandi took a nap because she looked tired and was concerned that Anandi had to fast the next day. Anandi groaned ' Shiv was already upset about the fast thing and was trying to talk her out of it. This would only add fuel to the fire. She winced and braced herself for the onslaught of arguments from her hubby dearest.


Shiv, on the other hand, immediately felt guilty for not letting Anandi sleep until late last night.  He had not meant to keep her up but they had gotten carried away. He needed to take better care of her. He did not want her to keep this fast but that conversation could wait. He knew Anandi would not take a nap willingly, so Shiv picked her up. When Anandi protested he quelled her with a look and Anandi knew he would not take no for an answer. She was tired and as Shiv climbed the stairs, she laid her head in his shoulder and closed her eyes, knowing he would keep her safe. Shiv reached their room, set her down on the bed and covered her with a sheet.  As he tried to leave, she caught his hand and put it under her chin. So he sat there watching her as she slept peacefully with a smile on her face. He bent down and placed a kiss on her forehead and Anandi smiled a little more in her sleep. Shiv heard Bapusa and Daadisa return. He carefully extricated his hand making sure not to wake her and went down to greet them.

Preview - The guests arrive LOL

Thanks for reading

Edited by liv2laugh - 18 July 2012 at 7:47pm

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QuagMyred IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Awww!!! Its so cute...Embarrassed
keep it upThumbs Up

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Nice one !

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coolgirl3 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
very nice story...
plz update soon

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Darling stop trying to give me diabetesTongue  My system will go in to shockROFL

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
This is reallly sweet.  Dont stop it and keep continuing.
Statutory Warning:  Dont end the story in just 3 parts, make it more lengthy as it reallly sounds interesting and sweet...Clap

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Such a beautiful OS

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Malika IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 July 2012 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
Dats awesomeee dearClap...dats why I want AnSh marriage ...I am dieing to see them as a couple!! Do update soon Smile

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