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FF: Heart's Owner Chap 9 updated (pg23) (Page 2)

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 12:17am | IP Logged
nice character sketch nice consept  cont soon plzz PM me

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 Nice...cont. soon and do pm me.!Smile
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Hmm interesting.cont soon n pm me only if u can
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awesome i think his win will be manyata on they will meet in delhi please update the next part soon and make it long and full of manveer please please please please please and i loved the writing i am really looking forward to some great work from u 
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It seems intresting but please PM me when u update thanks...
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hey its really interesting loved the prologue i think the bet they r refering to would b manyata... sounds really interesting would love to read it update soon pm me when u do...Smile
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Part 1 – Stake your bet

The lights turned green and Uday pushed the accelerator down, speeding across the street, he was proud of his new Mercedes E-class, the car was smooth and sleek just like a silent deadly panther it sometimes reminded him of his own character. The intercom beeped and Jagat rolled his eyes.

"You're terrible Uday; you sent Yash with Natasha, not only is she a no 1 flirt but she also has an IQ as big as her waistline, which is to say nothing at all. I don't think Yash has the capacity to handle such a responsibility, sitting in her pink Cadillac and listening to her bakwaas has no doubt given him a headache."

Uday smirked; Jagat had pinpointed Natasha so well he doubted if he could have done a better job "well Jagat, imagine how i feel everyday, she glues herself to me and always somehow find a way to be with me, sometimes i wonder weather I'm being stalked" Jagat laughed, and smacked Uday's arm "we couldn't put it past her, mate her life revolves around you." We sat in silence pondering the possibility of how low Natasha could stoop

"Uday, I know that you're interest in women are zero and that you're not also batting for the other team, but have you some secret sideline agenda going on, one that concerns buying businesses and the daughters as well? Is it perhaps a buy one get one free deal you aristocrats are trialling because please do tell me, i think i might take an interest in business after all."

"It's all in the works my fellow friend, all in the works" Uday touched his nose ever so slightly "but for your information, this particular deal was done so that i could show that Kamina, what exactly I'm made of. I was only supposed to buy the house but at the last minute Brijraj's daughter also got dealt in, as soon as i won i lost interest but there isn't any harm in acclaiming my prize or at least meeting it face to face." I turned so that i was staring directly into Jagat's eyes, he seemed to find this situation hilarious but for me this was business and one that needed to be dealt with. "Put the intercom on let's ease some of Yash's Pain."

 

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Natasha squeaky voice was the first thing that attacked Uday's ears; Yash was having a hard a time trying to speak over her. "Uday baby how could you leave me with this arse, he's so improper and he's not treating candy right" candy was the pet name for Natasha car, she was ridiculous a child in the body of an adult, Uday wondered weather Natasha brain had stopped growing at 6 yrs of age she was so shallow it was unbelievable.

 "Uday, yaar what have you left me with, she never stops talking, she told me of the time when she tried to drown a fish, HOW CAN YOU DROWN A FISH? Uday my sweetheart, my sexy caped python save me from this monstrosity, aur else me atmatyah kar bato ga" Uday laughed, he loved his friend and he liked being in his circle they knew him, his every aspect, every achievement and the dream he wanted to reach, they were there for him and he had them to rely on. Uday felt faintly sorry for Natasha, she was the only girl and one much disliked but for this one occasion he'd help her out "Yash you such a disappointment – just like you mum's abortion tablet" they all cracked up it felt nice having a laugh with his mates again unlike the past few days when his rivalry with that Kamina had reached crescendo.     

Uday fell into a deep thought one that began a year ago, in his very own casino. Brijraj Saksena had been one of India's leading billionaires until a series of wrong choices led him to become bankrupt after that he fell into a deep depression and never to far from his mind was his daughter who was not aware of her father's situation. As fate would have it Mr Saksena landed up arriving at my Casino – Casino Royale, were he believed he could change his fate and that of his daughters, he put everything at stake – his house, his business and eventually his daughter. Then i noticed that the Kamina was the one who had raised the stakes and was willing to put heavy amount of money on the table, but would i let that happen i don't think so – i doubled my money and then tripled it for me it was as if i was handing over a candy bar. The shock of losing his only daughter was the final straw and he suffered a heart attack ending up in a coma and the debt payments left to his daughter.

Someone was shaking me, my flashback dissipated and i came back to reality, were we had just arrived at Mr Saksena's house. Oh i mean my new brought property      

 

Sorry guys i know you wanted to see manveer scenes but i do promise that the next part is filled with manveer scenes and i assure you the wait will be worth it. Do comment and thank you

I wanted to show background of each character Big smile

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Posted: 18 July 2012 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
ooosome , love it, have no word to describe how amazing the concept is Clap, would hav loved if u had showed this Natasha to be J, Even she is this stupidAngry, I mean drowing a fishROFL, seriouly? And one suggestion could u please edit ur main title to say which part u have updated and on which page number.


Loved it, Please continue soon Big smile


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