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Passionate rain's silent desire
After a long time i wrote a musical OS 4 Maaneet.Even though it's an os plz giv long comments
Maan was lost in his sweet
heart Geet's beauty.He was admiring her beauty secretly.She was dressed in a red
saree.She was removing the bangles while Maan was observing how beautiful her
gesture was even while she was removing her bangles.
She removed her silver earring.It started raining.Geet looked at the rain with a smile through the window.Suddenly her face became dull and she moved her hand to close the window.Suddenly Maan held her hand.Geet looked at him.
M:No need of closing the window.Let it be open.
G:Rain drops are coming in through the window.
M:Let it be so.
Geet could'nrt believe it:But you don't like rain.Right?
M:I did'nt like rain before.But you made me love rain.You want to watch rain.Right?So lt the window be open.
She smiled.
M:I wanted to see this smile in your face.When you smile dimples appear like a blooming flower.
She blushed.
G:Let us go out and feel the rain Maan.
She grabbed his hand and went out.Maan stood at the verandah while Geet stood in the rain.
G:Come Maan.
M:No need Geet.You enjoy rain.
G:Maan,come on.Imagine that this rain is your Geet and hug rain.
He smiled.Slowly he came towards her and held her hand.
M:Now you are completely drenched.Now you look as if you are made of rain drops.So instead of hugging the rain i can hug you.Right?
Geet became shy.His hands moved through her face while Geet drowned in his passionate dark brown eyes.
They noticed the rain drops falling on them.Geet stretched her hands to touch the rain drops and feel it more.
G:Maan...listen to the rain drops.Look at the rain drops.It has some silent desire.It is expressing it silently.
yeh saazish hai buundo.n kii
koii khwaahish hai chup chup sii
yeh saazish hai buundo.n kii
koii khwaahish hai chup chup sii
dekho na...
M:Even the cold wind is talking to us about the silent desire of rain.The rain desires to see us together without any space between us.
Geet blushed.
M:hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyon duurii hai ab darmiyaan
dekho na...
M:These rain drops hide a lot of romantic secrets from us.
She smiled.
M:phir na hawaa'en ho.ngii itnii besharam
phir na Dagmag Dagmag ho.nge ye qadam
haay
phir na hawaa'e.n ho.ngii itnii besharam
phir na dag-mag dag-mag ho.nge ye qadam
G:You are right Maan.These rain drops are saying something while pouring down
Even the wind is saying something quietly
is saying something.It is asking
why there is separation between our bodies now...
She was shy to look at Maan's eyes and so she covered her eyes with her hands.
G:saawan yeh siidha nahii.n khufiyaa bara
kuchh to baraste hu'e kah rahaa
Maan removed her hands from her eyes with his hands softly and looked at her magical eyes.
M:samjho na...(4)
Geet caressed his face passionately looking deeply at him:
hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyo.n duurii hai ab darmiyaan
dekho na...
M:dekho na...
They both smiled at each other.
Her saree's pallu started blowing in the rain.
Maan felt the instrumental music of 'Kuch kuch hota hai' in the back ground.He put her saree properly on her shoulder and danced holding her hands.It was a passionate sensuous dance.
Maan carried Geet to the dark room.There were fireflies.They were amazed to see it.
G:Maan,our love twinkles like fireflies.
Maan smiled.
M:Your eyes also twinkle like fireflies.
G:jugnuu.n jaisii chaahat dekho jale bujhe
miithii sii mushkil hai koii kya kare
jugnuu.n jaisii chaahat dekho jale bujhe
miithii sii mushkil hai koii kya kare
Maan placed her on the bed.He went closer to her.She was so shy that she ran out.Maan ran after her.She was standing in the rain and blushing.
He went near her.
His lips were wet because of the falling rain drops.Geet found his cold wet lips sensuous.
His lips went close to her longing to touch her.She moved away due to shyness.He caught her wet saree's pallu.
His lips shivered:Geet,please don't reject the request of lips like this.The rain will be upset.
She looked at him blushing.He pulled her saree towards him slowly to get her closer to him.As he wisjed Geet was very much nearer to him now without leaving any space between them.He saw burning passion in her sparkling eyes.She moved away from him with an attractive smile and lay down where rain drops were still falling.
Geet said in a sweet intoxicating voice:Touch me Maan...and feel the sweetness of rain.
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
He went close to her.She closed her eyes.
His hands covered her with passionate love.
M:hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyon duurii hai ab darmiyaan
They could hear the rain whispering something witnessing their love.
M:Rain is watching our burning chemistry.
Geet smiled.
M:dekho na...(8)
G:dekho na...
She hummed:dekho na...
The rain covered them as if it was protecting them from the evil eyes.The rain showered blessings on them by pouring water drops upon them.
The End
She removed her silver earring.It started raining.Geet looked at the rain with a smile through the window.Suddenly her face became dull and she moved her hand to close the window.Suddenly Maan held her hand.Geet looked at him.
M:No need of closing the window.Let it be open.
G:Rain drops are coming in through the window.
M:Let it be so.
Geet could'nrt believe it:But you don't like rain.Right?
M:I did'nt like rain before.But you made me love rain.You want to watch rain.Right?So lt the window be open.
She smiled.
M:I wanted to see this smile in your face.When you smile dimples appear like a blooming flower.
She blushed.
G:Let us go out and feel the rain Maan.
She grabbed his hand and went out.Maan stood at the verandah while Geet stood in the rain.
G:Come Maan.
M:No need Geet.You enjoy rain.
G:Maan,come on.Imagine that this rain is your Geet and hug rain.
He smiled.Slowly he came towards her and held her hand.
M:Now you are completely drenched.Now you look as if you are made of rain drops.So instead of hugging the rain i can hug you.Right?
Geet became shy.His hands moved through her face while Geet drowned in his passionate dark brown eyes.
They noticed the rain drops falling on them.Geet stretched her hands to touch the rain drops and feel it more.
G:Maan...listen to the rain drops.Look at the rain drops.It has some silent desire.It is expressing it silently.
yeh saazish hai buundo.n kii
koii khwaahish hai chup chup sii
yeh saazish hai buundo.n kii
koii khwaahish hai chup chup sii
dekho na...
M:Even the cold wind is talking to us about the silent desire of rain.The rain desires to see us together without any space between us.
Geet blushed.
M:hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyon duurii hai ab darmiyaan
dekho na...
M:These rain drops hide a lot of romantic secrets from us.
She smiled.
M:phir na hawaa'en ho.ngii itnii besharam
phir na Dagmag Dagmag ho.nge ye qadam
haay
phir na hawaa'e.n ho.ngii itnii besharam
phir na dag-mag dag-mag ho.nge ye qadam
G:You are right Maan.These rain drops are saying something while pouring down
Even the wind is saying something quietly
is saying something.It is asking
why there is separation between our bodies now...
She was shy to look at Maan's eyes and so she covered her eyes with her hands.
G:saawan yeh siidha nahii.n khufiyaa bara
kuchh to baraste hu'e kah rahaa
Maan removed her hands from her eyes with his hands softly and looked at her magical eyes.
M:samjho na...(4)
Geet caressed his face passionately looking deeply at him:
hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyo.n duurii hai ab darmiyaan
dekho na...
M:dekho na...
They both smiled at each other.
Her saree's pallu started blowing in the rain.
Maan felt the instrumental music of 'Kuch kuch hota hai' in the back ground.He put her saree properly on her shoulder and danced holding her hands.It was a passionate sensuous dance.
Maan carried Geet to the dark room.There were fireflies.They were amazed to see it.
G:Maan,our love twinkles like fireflies.
Maan smiled.
M:Your eyes also twinkle like fireflies.
G:jugnuu.n jaisii chaahat dekho jale bujhe
miithii sii mushkil hai koii kya kare
jugnuu.n jaisii chaahat dekho jale bujhe
miithii sii mushkil hai koii kya kare
Maan placed her on the bed.He went closer to her.She was so shy that she ran out.Maan ran after her.She was standing in the rain and blushing.
He went near her.
His lips were wet because of the falling rain drops.Geet found his cold wet lips sensuous.
His lips went close to her longing to touch her.She moved away due to shyness.He caught her wet saree's pallu.
His lips shivered:Geet,please don't reject the request of lips like this.The rain will be upset.
She looked at him blushing.He pulled her saree towards him slowly to get her closer to him.As he wisjed Geet was very much nearer to him now without leaving any space between them.He saw burning passion in her sparkling eyes.She moved away from him with an attractive smile and lay down where rain drops were still falling.
Geet said in a sweet intoxicating voice:Touch me Maan...and feel the sweetness of rain.
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
chhuu lo na...
He went close to her.She closed her eyes.
His hands covered her with passionate love.
M:hawaa kuchh haule haule
zubaan se kya kuchh bole bole
kyon duurii hai ab darmiyaan
They could hear the rain whispering something witnessing their love.
M:Rain is watching our burning chemistry.
Geet smiled.
M:dekho na...(8)
G:dekho na...
She hummed:dekho na...
The rain covered them as if it was protecting them from the evil eyes.The rain showered blessings on them by pouring water drops upon them.
The End
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