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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 6:53am | IP Logged
HELLOSmile

Im chandana (u can call Chandu), i had joined the forum initially, but had disappeared, has i had my final exams... I really love Shanak and missing them very badly as Shanak. They may appear in different characters but Shanak are Shanak, that sweet couple, their nok-jhok, haaye...
Anyways, i've started writing a new story, not sure whether its upto your expectations, its my first story, so please bear with me... Please leave the comments, whether its bad or good, im ready to correct my mistakes...
OK here it goes...

                                                                             Raabta



Introduction:-


</p>Dr.Shaantanu Khandelwal, is a pediatrician (child specialist), was working in London, now he's back in India, with his parents Sunil and Madhvi Khandelwal. He's got job in Mumbai Government Hospital, he wanted to help the poor, so he'll be visiting hospital often, but not that often as he has his own clinic. He is not yet married, he's still single. He was so much engrossed in living his dreams; he never thought to get married nor to have a girlfriend. His parents were worriedfor him, but he had now lost the thought of marriage. He's just engrossed in his work. His brother, Akshay and Khushboo bhabhi are staying in London, but they would be coming to India early. Though Shaan stayed in London, he respects his culture and loves his family a lot.

</p>

Dr.Khanak Mishra, is still practising, she's still doing her last year Post graduation in Mumbai Government Hospital.Since its a govt. hospital, she's getting her stipend (salary). She's got only one person for herself in the whole world, that's Aayush, her brother's son. She had lost her family in an accident, only she and aayush had survived the accident. When she had lost her parents, aayush was 4yr old and that yr was her first yr of post graduation. She had to take
care of herself and importantly Aayush. Now she was like mother for him. In first yr she found it difficult to take care of aayush and her studies, later on she had got used to it, Aayush was her strength, he's a good support for her, we can say that she's living only for him, 2yrs have past now, still the thought bring tears to her eyes. She had also left the house, in which her childhood was spent and now she's staying in an apartment with aayush, which was gifted by her brother.


Part1

A beautiful monday morning in mumbai, it will be first day for Dr.Shantanu Khandelwal in Mumbai Govt. hospital, he had opened his clinic last month ago, but he had gained lot of popularity for his work. He's in his room getting ready to go to hospital, his father enters in,

Shaan: Hey dad, good morning, kya baat hain, subah subah aap mere kamre main??? Phir se aapne mom se jhagda kiya??(jokes)

Sunil: woh to hamesha rehtha hain(smiles), so ur ready???

Shaan: yep!!!

Shaan is ready by now but he's searching something in cupboard.

Sunil: ab kya doond rahe ho???

Shaan: kuch nahi dad, aah mil gaya (he shows his pendrive).

Sunil: toh chalo, saath mein breakfast karte hain. Shaan smiles and both of them leavethe room. Madhvi is in the dining hall, all 3 of them sit for their breakfast.

Madhvi: Shaan tumne photos dekh liya???

Shaan:mom please I've said that I'm not interested.

Madhvi: lekin Shaan (stopped by sunil).

Sunil: Shaan photo dekhne main kaisi problem ho sakthi hain????

Shaan: dad abhi nahi, baad mein(gets up to leave)

Madhvi: Shaan aisa nahi chalega(strictly) Shaan runs out.

Shaan: mom raat ko baat karte hain. Saying that he runs out.

Madhvi: pata nahi yeh ladka kab sudhrega, both Madhvi and Sunil are worried.

Khanak,had to reach two places today, first Aayush's school and to the hospital. Shehad waken aayush, got him ready to leave him to the school.

Khanak(from kitchen): aayush r u ready???

Aayush: comes running into kitchen, yes mom!!!

Khanak: very good, mera hero tho ready hogaya, ab chalo jaldi se khaalo, tumhari aaj
parent teachers meeting hain na??? (He just nods whileeating) tho mein meeting ke baad hospital chali jaaongi, and mujhe pata hain ki meri Aayush ka report
card sabse best hogi(she picks him up) she hugs him, even he hugs her.

Aayush: mom dad hothe tho bahut khush hote na???

Khanak(wipes her tears): aur main kaun hun???

Aayush: sorry mom (holds his ears)

Khanak: abhi bi woh bahut khush hain tumhare liye aur mere liye.

Pecks him on his cheek. Both of them leave the house, happily. She holds his hand in one hand and her other hand is carrying her laptop bag and her accessories. She had informed in the hospital that she'll be late'


In the hospital, he's in the cabin of senior Dr.Lata Sheshadri. He's introduced to all the staff. He's now sitting in her cabin.
<p>Dr.Lata: so Dr. Shaan all set???<p><p>

Shaan: oohh yes, and thanks for such a warm welcome.

Lata: oh no problem. Knock on her door, its Dr.Raj, he's a very good friend of Khanak, and her colleague.

Raj: sorry maam, woh main khanak ke bare main poochne aaya tha, uska phone bi nahi lag raha hain, had she called you???

Lata: Shaayad aap bhool rahe ho Dr.Raj, aaj Aayush ka parent teachers meeting hain, she'll finish with that and then she'll come. (Smiles)

Raj: Oh ya actually I'd forgotten that, sorry for disturbing. He leaves, Shaan has no idea who's khanak, so he keeps quiet. He goes out with lata to see the wards and to see his cabin. There comes a girl, she's wearing a white coat and steth hung around her neck, her hairs are flowing in the air, she's walking towards him, he's never seen a girl so simple, and that big brown eyes, which can attract anyone towards her, something about her look, he feels serene.

Khanak: sorry maam, thoda sa late hogayi, u know Mumbai ka traffic (shrugs) (smiles)

Lata: its ok Khanak, now get going on the duty, and ya Raj was asking for you.

Khanak: sure maam.

Lata: ek minute Khanak, this is Dr.Shantanu Khandelwal

Khanak: Hello Doctor (smiles at him), I'm Dr.Khanak, in 3rd yr.

Shaan: nice to meet you Dr.Khanak (hands are shaken)

Khanak: Ok then maam (she leaves)

Shaan is just looking at her going away.




This is it, please press the like button and feel free to commentBig smile



INDEX
Part 1- 1
Part 2- 2
Part 3- 5
Part 4- 6
Part 5- 7
Part 6- 8
Part 7- 10
Part 8- 12
Part 9- 13
Part 10- 14
Part 11- 16
Part 12- 17
Part 13- 18
Part 14- 19
Part 15- 20
Part 16- 22
Part 17- 23
Part 18- 24
Part 19- 26
Part 20- 27
Part 21- 28
Part 22- 30
Part 23- 32
Part 24- 34
Part 25- 35
Part 26- 36
Part 27 - 37
Part 28- 39
Part 29- 40
Part 30- 42
Part 31- 43
Part 32- 46
Part 33- 47
Part 34- 47
Part 35- 49
Part 36- 50
Part 37- 51
Part 38- 52
Part 39- 54
Part 40- 55
Part 41- 56
Part 42- 58
Part 43- 59
Part 44- 60
Part 45- 62
Part 46- 65
Part 47- 66
Part 48- 67
Part 49- 68
Part 50- 69
Part 51- 70
Part 52- 71
Part 53- 72
Part 54- 74
Part 55- 75
Part 56- 76
Part 57- 77
Part 58- 79
Part 59- 82
Part 60- 83
Part 61- 85
Part 62- 86
Part 63- 89
Part 64- 90
Part 65- 92
Part 66-94
Part 67-96
Part 68-99
Part 69-101
Part 70- 104
Part 71- 105
Part 72- 108
Part 73- 110
Part 74- 112
Part 75- 114
Part 76- 115
Part 77- 117
Part 78- 119
Part 79- 122
Part 80- 123
Part 81- 125
Part 82- 127
Part 83- 128
Part 84- 130
Part 85- 132
Part 86- 133
Part 87- 135
Part 88- 136



Edited by chandu8881 - 08 March 2013 at 8:17pm

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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 7:22am | IP Logged
awww so cute their doctors, never expected shaaan loool, plz continue and pm me thabks x

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Its interesting chandu...
go on...
and welcome to the forum again

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wow nice FF chandu...

love that they both are doctors and khanak's story was a bit tragedy...poor gal she had to look after aayush and herself...keep going dear...waiting for the next part...

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wow!!! i loved it very much
hmm doctors very different and interesting story
waiting for next and plz try to update frequently or daily bhi chalega Big smile
do update next very soon

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Amazing FF...so beautifully penned down...love the story so far...

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heyyy chandu...its awesome yaar...m loving dis storyline...

plzzz try to update frequently...Smile

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Good start
Continue Soon

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