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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 12:40am | IP Logged
hello guys ...its my first os ever ... i hope u like it... 

All those who dont like sad 1s plzz refrain cuz it is a sad one...


                                            PYAAR TUNE KYA KIYA...

Sharon's POV...

That was the worst day of my life when i came to know that my mother was alive and i had a twin sister but the time i got to spend with my  maa were just lasy 15 mins of her life when she was just few mins away from her death ...That night when my DAD tols me that my twin sis is none other than Kria and my maa was Smiriti aunty i was in a stage of traumabut wait it was not the time to show my grief ... My maa had met an accident and i had to to meet her ..when i r eached there i saw...

Flashback...(Of Sharon)

I saw my maa from outside the room and Kria was also sitting there outside the room on a chair but she had a expressionless face...My dad told me that Maa want to meet me... i went inside ,i dont know how i controlled my emotions . my tears...when i stepped in and sat beside her she said...

Smiriti: Sharon mujhe maaf kardo , mene itne dinon tak tum donon behenon ko aik doosre se door rakha ,I m sorry...

I was just saying '' dont say anything Maa'' but she wanted to tell me something...

Smiriti: plz, tum Kria ko galat mat samajhna , usne jo kuch b kiya wo mere kehne par kiya ,mujhe nhe pata tha k main use us k dil . dosti aur dance se door kar k apni beti ki hansi kho duun g ..Yahan se jaane k baad Kria bilkul badal gayi ab wo sirf  mere saamne apni juthi muskurahat dikhati thi par main apni  beti ki yeh halat nhee dekh paayi aur isiliye jab main kal use us ka dil uske dost uska dance wapas kane mumbai laayi to...

(Flash back of Smiriti)

Smiriti: Kria aaj tum jakar apna sapna pura karo wo sapna jo adura reh gaya tha ...

Kria: Maa Thank u app ko pata nhee k aapne mujhe kya diya hai ...

Smiriti: arey sirf thank u he karti rahogi ya jaakar apne doston se b milo g and tumhare dost se kuch zyaade se b ...

Kria: maa app b na ... aur main apne doston ko kal achanak college jaakar kar surprise dungi...Tan tak k liye aap mujhe kisi ache restaurant main khana khilao...

Smiriti: acha beta jee chalo...

(Flash back of Smiriti ends)


Maa ne mujhe bataya k ...

Smiriti: par ise pehele k hum restaurant jaate mujhe office se call agaya isilye mujhe jaana para ...mene Kria se kaha k wo andar jaaye main bus dus min main aati hun...par jab wo andar gayi to usne dekha k tum sab log wahan bethe ho ... aur wo buht khush hogai magar is se pehele k wo tum logon k paas aati usne dekha Reyaansh kisi larki ko propose karaha tha ... aur sab buht khush the ...yeh dekhte he usne apne aap ko aik pillar k peeche chupaliya aur tum sab ki baatein sunni ...usne dekha jab rey kisi kaam se wahan se gaya to sab baatein karahe the aur kehrahe the...

Vicky: yaar aaj Rey kitna khush hai na ...

Neha: haan but Kria k jaane k baad use pehli baar itna khush dekha ...

Nil: yaar plzz dont talk about Kria ... wo tum logonko b chor k chali gayi aur tumhari team ko b ...magar thankx to Tani tum logon ko apni 6th dancer mil gayi ...

Swayam: guys plzzz stop this topic here ... warna Rey phir se upset hojaye ga...

Yeh sab sun k meri beti aik baar phie toot gayi ... aur wahan se nikal kar muhhe call kiya ... us waqt main road par thi ... usne kaha ...

Kria: Maa i lost my first love... mene apna pehela pyaar kho diya hamesha k liye mene apne dost kho diye ...

Main uski baatein sunte road cross karahee thi mene kaha...

Smiriti: beta hua kya ap itna ro kyun rahee ho...

Kria: maa sab mujhse nafrat karte hain, sab Rey .Swayam ,meri team sab, maa main phir akeli hogai ...

Ise pehele k main kuch keh paati aik tez gadi ne mujhe takar maardi and Kria sirf meri aakhri cheekh sun paayi and mene aakhri baar uske mun se apna naam suna...

Mene tumhe yeh sab isi liye bataya kyun k mujhe pata hai k mere paas ab zyaada waqt nhee hai aur shayad mujhe us sab ki saza milrahee hai jo mene kria k saath kiya... Mere jaane k baad tum Kria ka khayal rakhna , ab wo tumhari zimaidari hai...

Hearing this i(sharon) said ''nhee maa aap ko kuch nhe hoga aap mere saath rhogi , Kria k saath rahogi ..hum sab k saath rahogi...

Now she wasn't able to say anything , she just pointed me to come near her... t went near her and she kissed my forehead ... doing this she away from us forever ...

 i shouted called Doctor but in vain she left us...doc and dad came in ... Doc checked her . Doc checked her and said '' i m sorry''...I started  crying shuting Dad came to me I hugged him i was just saying ''Maa ...Maa papa Maa ko uthao ...'' then papa said'' Sharon ab hamein Kria ko sambhalna hai ''..Hearing this i broke the hug went out of the room and saw Kria sitting there, i went to her and hugged her but she didn;t replied ..She didn't cried neither she reacted... We thought that she'll come out of the trauma by time passing... But NO she never came out of this ... i never told this whole thing to any1 , Swayam ko b nhee ... Kria now lived with me actually it wasn't Kria . it was body without soul..we showed her to all doctors all qualifies ones but she didn't ever respond ..She just sats and keep on thinking .She never talks , she never asks something nothing ..She do nothing ...and its the fourth time she tried to sucide ... God knows how we saved her...

Next post will b coming soon...
Part 2 : pg 5.

Part 3: pg 13.

part 4: pg 21.

part 5: pg 26






Edited by Angel56 - 18 August 2012 at 4:40am

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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 12:44am | IP Logged
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Yayyv!
First one to commnt ! Embarrassed
Awesome update !
Luvd d way u expressd d feelings n emotions ! Smile
update soon !
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Edited by aashi_arsha - 16 July 2012 at 1:36am

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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 12:49am | IP Logged
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Luved the way u described sharon's feelings

smriti died Shocked

and kriya is not at all responding! Cry

make it good and normal soon!

update soon


Edited by abhiyakreya - 16 July 2012 at 9:22am

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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
wow dis ws amazing...!!


smriti died

sharon nw knws evrythng..

kriya tryng 2 commit suicide..

ol d thngs were good


cnt wi8 2 read wht happens nxt...

plz update nxt prt soon.. cnt wi8...

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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Superb...
Loved it...
It was very emotional...
Smriti told sharon everything...dats good...
N rey proposed dat taani...n everyoner hates kria ...dats terrible...
Kria attempted suicide 4 times...oh no!!!
Ab to sharon ko rey ko bta dena chahiye...or else she will lose her sister forever...
Waiting for next part...

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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
o m g sharon's pov it was just amazing i loved it yarrr really hats of it was tooo touchy i love the way u expressed her feelings 

Edited by enrique - 16 July 2012 at 1:19am

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Posted: 16 July 2012 at 1:16am | IP Logged
pls update fast pls pls pls i just san't wait... pls pm me

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