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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved how she whispered his name and he was checking to c if his heart was in the right place... Loved it I was smiling as I read the update! Can't wait for the nxt part ...Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 4

 

Shiv come home letter. Sudden change in anandi still surprises him but he thought he must imagine. He comes home in afternoon. He knows that his mom is must angry on him, even after he reach home. He is doing only work. He knows that but at the same time she knows him very well to. When its come to work,

 

He enter in room seems like everything is normal.. he welcome by silence.

 

"tufan ke aane ka andesha lag raha hai.. yeh mom aur anandi mai dono mai ek aat common hai.. barsane se pehle dono bahot shant hoti hai." He thinks to himself

 

Savitridevi look at her son and not really like that he spend his half day outside but she maintained her cool and asked him join for lunch..

 

This is not turn to his surprise.. what was happening. Why she is not angry with him..

He join her for lunch food is good to the way he like most . his fev.. but halwa again made him remember anandi

 

He scolds himself

 

"stop it shiv har baat ko anandi se jodna band kar de.. use miss to kar raha hu mai par fir bhi.. is tarah se maa ke samne jatya to wo sab samj jayegi aur fir aur musibat ho sakti hai"

 

Savitridevi look at her son carefully, something is bothering him at the same time he is happy over something to.. the way he smiling in morning holding receiver, she is amazed there is must be girl in his life. but then how she will find out. He never hides anything from her till date. Then why he is not telling her now. She is angry before but then she started to realize she needs to find first about girl so she kept her anger aside

 

 She thought " mujse chuaparaha hai.. ek  kaam karti hu, mera hamesha ka fev  subject  nikalti hu tabhi batayega ye.."

 

"shiv maine tumhare liye ek ladki dekhi hai, ab tum aahi gaye ho to lage hath kal usko dekh kar bhi aajate hai kya kehte ho"

 

Shiv throat become dry as soon he heard that.. he choked his food almost..

 

"mom maine kaha na aap se muje abhi shadi nahi karni"

 

Then he thought to himself.. "jab tak anandi taiyar nahi hojati tab tak to nahi, aur sirf us se hi karne hai par ye maa ko ab batavunga to wo us se milne ke jid karegi.. aur abhi anandi tayiar nahi hai maa se milne kel iye, puri tarah se wo apne gam se bahar tak nahi nikli hai.."

 

He seems to so lost in his thought his mom observe him again and the same time his little sister come to talked to  him and there conversation end there. But looking at his  mom he know she will raise this issue again. He trying to think over idea to escaped from situation

 

After lunch his mom his sister shreya discussing his life in jaitsar.. they are amused to  here everything about jaitsar.

 

Savitridevi notice the happiness on his face and glow when he mention about jaitsar.. everything about jaistar is beautiful for him. She is sure now.. something is happening in jaitsar he must be find girl himself in jaitsar..  but wo hai  koun  aur kaise pata karung mai us ka naam she thought"

 

 

She decided to to leading this conversation through jaitsar  so she will find about that girl easily..

 

" kya baat hai shiv aate hai kaam par lag gayem aaj subah se bahar ho tum.. tum thake aaye they isliye kuch nahi akaha tha,. Par  apni maa ke liye hi waqt hi ki nahi tumhare pass" "aur aakar jaistar ki intni tarif, aisa kya khass hai jaitsar mai jo inta pasand  aagaya., aur itna bhi kya kaam jot um apni maa se milne bhi nahi  aaye ."

 

She said unhappy tone..

"ha bhaiya ye to hai.. aap jaisar se kitni dino ke baat laute hai"

 

Shreya agree to..

 

Shiv face turn in to red as one they mention jaitsar name not get unnoticed by his mom

 

""opps sorry  mom, I know muje aap par dhyan dena chahiye par kam mai ulaj gaya th sorry. Mera aaj ka kaam khatam karke lauta hu. Ab mai aapke pass  hu pura din kahi nahi javunga"

 

And then he continue aur rahi baat jaitsar ki " aise kaam chod kar nahi aasakata na mai isliye" "aur fir tin dino ke baad wapas bhi to jana hai. Wo school ka kaam bhi pending hai na isliye.. anandi kaise akeli sab sambhal payeingi."

 

 

 

Anandi ye koun hai.. shiv mom said with smile. now she is sure this girl is must be reason for his happiness

 

Shiv mention anandi name without even notice to himself.

Savitridevi seems alert as soon as she heard that name

 

"anandi ye koun hai beta"

 

He bit his tongue when he realize he mention anandi name in front of his mom. But what he should he tell her about anandi. She is not even ready for friendship he remember why he come first place but then phone talk made him think that there is no problem between them but still he is confused

 

Before he answer to his mom chirpy shreya talked in between..

"anandi, jaitsar ki sarpanch. ".. bahot pyari  awaj hai unki aur bahot sweet bhi hai"

 

Shiv look surprise at how his sister found about that girl.

 

He thought himself " anandi ki aawaj pyari hai wo sweet hai ye ise kaise pata. Wo jaitsar ki sarpanch hai ye bhi pata hai.. ab kya ye bhi newspaper mai aane laga kya" he thought himself and then look at shreya for explanation

Shreya continue

bhaiya ye mai aapko batana bhul hi gayi…aap aapka mobile bhul kar gaye they to phone aaya tha unka

 

"what anandi ka phone aaya tha aur tum ab bata rahi ho, waise wo hai hi sweet

He almost bit his tongue and correct himself.. mera maltab hai. Acchi hai, , gaav ki sarpanch hai. Itni sari jimmedariya sambhalti hai,pata hai tumse thodi badi hogi wo. Lekin har baat ko  thik se samjtihai wo

 

"ha par aapse thodi naraj lagi wo"

 

"naraj ab maine kya kar diya he mutter himself.

 

Amused shreya look at shiv as he muttering something to himself, she  never seen him like that. She realized when she first talk to with anandi, seems she finally found her bhabhi

 

 

Meanwhile shiv mom watching his expression since shreya told him about anandi. He look more anxious to talk to her. and the way he proudly talk about her and that happiness of his face and told story about everything

 

"to shiv ko is ladki se pyar hai aisa lagtha hai,  kuch to karma padega iska.. varna iskakuch nahi ho sakta,. she thought bemused about her son reaction.

 

Mom ek kaam yaad aagaya abhi aata hu, he run from there trying to save himself to saving from awkward situation.

 

 

Other side anandi is very angry on shiv.. she don't know herself why she is so much angry on him but she know deep down she hurt to listing girl voice over his phone.. she told that girl that she is sarpanch of jaitsar and wanted to talk some important thing  to collector shviraj shekhar.. Could she notice that anger in her voice? She is not sure but now she is hurt to thinking about that girl again and again, who is she.

 

"kya rishta hai uska shiv ke sath, aur shiv ka mobile usne kyu uthaya. Ye bhi ana apna mobile apne pass nahi rakh sakte they."

 

She is pouting over its. She cant imagine to herself being jealous.. Jealous is she jealous over someone. She is always clam and composes but with shiv she reacts weird. When jagya come with  wife even not hurt that much when she heard that girl voice on shiv mobile its hurt lot. Its like someone try to snatch only precious thing she have. She desperately waited for his called.

 

"us ladki ne shiv ko bataya nahi ki maine phone kiya tha… " ha bhala wo kyu batyegi.. par inhe to phone karma chahiye na.. subah baat ki untna hai fir gaya hogaye.."

She is muttering at everything to herself, and then she saw his number is flashing on her mobile screen. she first happy but then picked phone with slightly angry

 

Shiv other hand in confused why anandi is angry on him, "subah to sab thik tha kya hogaya.. chalo ab use se hi pata chalega.. ki kya baat huvi hai.."

 

Anandi blast on him without thinking

 

"aapka phone kaha tha aap apne pass nahi rakh sakte!! kab se phone kar rahi hu,kaha gaye they, aur itna time ho gaya maine phone kiye aapko phone kyu nahi aaya!! , us ladki ne aapko message nahi diya aur last wo ladki koun thi?,

 

Shiv is amused and shocked over her question series.. 

 

Other side anandi is still fuming over that girl. Shreya always talk in mobile informally about shiv because shiv don't like mixed his personal business with professional. So anandi is don't know that she is his sister.

 

"wait wait sab ek sath mat pucho.. eke ka javab deta hu.. mera phone mera pass nahi tha mai ghar bhul gaya tha… aur ha us lakdi ne muje batya lekin wo batana bhul gayi thi.. lunch ke baad batya usne"

 

He empathize word of wo ladki with cute smile on his face 

 

Anandi listen that girl is with him in his house she hated that so much .. she just wanted to throw everything away and go to udhaypur and take shiv with her.

 

 

She surprise at herself and her extreme emotion about him

 

Shiv is amused to he is not understand that his sister connection but he know that something bothering her about shreya

 

He continue further

 

Aur wo ladki wo ladki jot um keh rahi hu. She is my little sister shreya.. aur batao kya kaam tha

 

Anandi feel fool like now. She never asked anything about his family before and now she is angry on him without reason.

 

Wo mai school ke kaam ke liye puch rahi thi.. aap yaha par nahi ho na to kaam mai thodi mushki hogayi thi.. isliye aapkar gussa nikal gaya.. wo aapke behan hai bahot hi pyari hai wo..

 

Shiv smile to here this.. he remember this is exactly shreya said to him about anandi

 

Ha shreya ne bhi yahi kaha tumhare bare mai.. , waise bhi aaj ka din hai fir 2 dino ke baad mai wapas laut raha hu fir ham sab samhal lenge sath mai aur tab tak tum hi ho na..

 

"ha wo to hai par aap bhi jaldi aajayei.. she feel stupid her behavior with shreya.. and realize that she feel so  embarrassed In front of shiv, she replied in fast tone ab mai rakhti hu ha shiv baad mai baat karege.

 

 

Shiv realize that anandi is behaving weird with him, she seems so angry at one time and then he sense happiness in her tone when she talked about shreya , but when she is refer her first as wo ladki .. its seems like so rude to him, like she don't like her. and suddenly realization drown upon to him. Anandi is jealous. She think sherya is girl who is around me 24x7 , he felt so happy that she started to feeling about him something. They way she called him twice and restless over him  coming or no no its proven to him she feel for him too.. he felt so happy . Today his heart feels rest for the first time in his life.

 

Anand other side shocked about her behavior. She is happy when she find out that girl shreya is none other then but his sister. She is jealous of someone because she fears losing of shiv. Why but now she know why she behave like this.. she is in love with her collector sahab ad this time no insecurity and no fear in come between them. She saw raining is still outside.. She run outside to drench in rain. to feel be in love with her shiv..

Edited by DonIsback - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww..yaar bht hi mast hai !! Ekdm dhinchak πŸ˜† yaar aagey ka kab likhegi ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wah..nice ..:D
Ab chal next part update kar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing prati...loved it...!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...Jealousy is a very potent thing...but it all depends on how one uses it.
 
In Gauri, it lead to inecurities and in Anandi, it will lead to realisation of her love
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow me aaj yaha aayi and the first thing was reading your FF😳😳
Really enjoyed itπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
To ab Anu jealous feel karne lagiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh hooo Anandi got jealous of the girl who picked Shiv's call πŸ˜³ wonder when she'll stop being denial and accept that she loves shiv πŸ˜ ek dum mast part hain yaar.. but u need to update soon.. can't wait πŸ˜‰ waise mere romantic OS ka kya hua madamejee??? πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: GoldenDew

Oh hooo Anandi got jealous of the girl who picked Shiv's call πŸ˜³ wonder when she'll stop being denial and accept that she loves shiv πŸ˜ ek dum mast part hain yaar.. but u need to update soon.. can't wait πŸ˜‰ waise mere romantic OS ka kya hua madamejee??? πŸ˜†


oye you still behind romantic os.. likhungi yaar tere liye likhungi. mom ne kal pc par sirf 1 hour hi diya usmai bhi update karke bhag gayi mai.. title tak change nahi kiya tha .. aaj aakar kar diya... πŸ˜†, jaruru likhugi.. tere naam pai credit hoga is baar.. πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
Main nahin chodne waali jab tak I won't get my romantic OS  koi doubt math rakhna πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† waise take ur time and surprise me with a long and super romantic OS πŸ˜ and isko jaldi se update bhi karo madam..