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Streets of KOTA ( EXCERPT REAL EXPERIENCE )

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Posted: 15 July 2012 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Streets of KOTA ( EXCERPT REAL EXPERIENCE )

Whenever i thought that i will be safe, i have always reminded of fear...Shocked
fear to being alone..fear of being hiddenShocked
far from my house i'm living to fullfill my dreams...Tongue
no body here knownConfused , nobody here came...Confused
i was searching my destinationSmile and came to know the only 
thing which can give me space is Steerts of this cityEmbarrassed where students came and go...
life changes...in a moment or so...Embarrassed
in every street, u can find students...Embarrassed
learning..studieng...doing fun..Embarrassed.
in every house u can find a PG there in...Embarrassed
in those small rooms...big big dreams live Big smile
and to overcome lonely fear strangers meet and giggles...Embarrassed
situations make it hard but they dont make frienship slip...Embarrassed
the noise...crowd u find ,only in the streets of Kota...(Rajasthan)Embarrassed

my experience is shown here and My friend  Achin requested me to make this poem...or exerpt...

regards devEmbarrassed


Edited by DevvivekAshNI - 23 December 2012 at 11:39pm

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Give me suggestions pls!

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i really liked the poem.. but don't use the smileys next time, it will look better.
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Originally posted by Clever.Foxxy

i really liked the poem.. but don't use the smileys next time, it will look better.
thnx 4 appreciation! Clever foxxy. Yup ,wil take care dear.

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Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Originally posted by Clever.Foxxy

i really liked the poem.. but don't use the smileys next time, it will look better.
thnx 4 appreciation! Clever foxxy. Yup ,wil take care dear.
u r welcome :)
and pls write more poems 

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Originally posted by Clever.Foxxy

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Originally posted by Clever.Foxxy

i really liked the poem.. but don't use the smileys next time, it will look better.
thnx 4 appreciation! Clever foxxy. Yup ,wil take care dear.

u r welcome :)
and pls write more poems
okie pls give me a subject pls

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Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Originally posted by Clever.Foxxy

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Originally posted by Clever.Foxxy

i really liked the poem.. but don't use the smileys next time, it will look better.
thnx 4 appreciation! Clever foxxy. Yup ,wil take care dear.

u r welcome :)
and pls write more poems
okie pls give me a subject pls
friendship, love, hate, betrayal, loneliness, loyalty ... choose anything Tongue

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Realy? Is it necesary 2 write on them? Anything else pls

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