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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 4:17pm | IP Logged
            
                              HELLO CYNDREALLASSmile

 ONE MORE TIME I DARE TO WRITE(OH GOD, I'M SO SCAREDLOL), THIS TIME AN OS. NO IDEA HOW TO IMPRESS YOU WITH MY WRITING. IF YOU FEEL BORED AFTER READING THIS THEN THROW AT ME A COMMENT FOR MY POOR WRITING SKILLS JUST LIKE MY TEACHERS.LOL AB TOH   AADAT SI HAI MUJHKO, SO I DON'T MIND.WinkLOL BUT I WANT COMMENTS GOOD OR BAD,IT'S YOUR CHOICE BUT STILL I LOVE YOU ALL.Hug 
I WANT TO ADD LINK OF THE SONG ABHI-ABHI FROM JISM 2 BECOZ MY OS TITLE HUM TOH HAARE MAHIYA RE IS A PART OF THIS SONG LYRICS, BUT I DON'T KNOW HOW TO ADD THE LINK, SO I'M  SORRY. IT'S REALLY A BEAUTIFUL SONG.  THESE DAYS, THIS IS MY FAVOURITE SONG & PERFECT FOR THIS OS.Wink

              OS:HUM TOH HARE MAHIYA RE.Embarrassed
Evening time, in royal palace of Devgarh, everyone busy & moving here & therefor the arrangements of UV's bachelorhood celebration party.Rajmahal decorated with beautiful & expensive orchids, white roses, frangnence candles. Everything looks so beautiful & perfect, after all it's Yuvraaj UV's party.
Manyata in her room sitting on her bed & talking to herself.
Manyata( to herself):- Uday, mein janti hoon ki ye sab tum mujhe sabak sikhane ke liye kar rahe ho aur ye party bhi ek bahana hai. Par aaj iss party mein main tumhe apne dil ki baat bata dungi.Tum mujhse phir se pyar karne lagoge or uss JKamini ko toh mein tumhare paas kabhi nahi aane doongi. HAAN NAHI TOH
Now Party started, The party was on full swing. There are so many hot chicks present in the party in short dresses & skirts. Manyata watches everyone presents in the party from her room.
Manyata(to herself):-OH TERI.LOLYe Uday ne itni saari bina salwar or duppate wali ladkiyon ko apni party mein bulaya hai. Ye Uday chahta kya hai mujhse? wo ye sab jaan bujhkar kar raha hai.Par koi bat nahi aaj mein tumhe sab kuch sach-sach batakar hi rahungi Uday aur aaj mujhe koi nahi rok sakta tum bhi nahi.
Mein jaanti hoon aaj bhi tum mujhse utna hi pyar karte ho jitna pahle karte the tum mujhse naraaz ho sakte ho par nafrat nahi kar sakte. Ek baar tumhi ne kaha tha ki hum kitna bhi ek-dusre se jhagda kar le par nafrat nahi kar sakte.Mein jaanti hoon ki maine tumhein bahut chot pahunchayi hai par is chot par dava bhi mein hi  karoongi.Embarrassed
Now Uday enters in the party. Every girl even J staring at him like they all see a God's Miracle. He looks so handsome & sexy in Trousers, white shirt & waistcoat.
All girls  smiling & blushing after saw him.
Every girl wants to dance with him, touch him & kiss him & moreBlushing (No need to explainLOL) Uday also fulfill their wishes by dancing with them, Touching them, kissing them.At that time a fair girl coming  downstairs looking so simple but beautiful from all the girls which are present in the party. She wears a beautiful anarkali & her long silky hair tied in a bun. Uday also staring at her for a moment but after he reminds all the flashbacks of their marriage come in his mind, he again involves with other girls.
Manyata feels so sad & guilty.Cry
All the girls again starts dancing with him, kissing him, touchimg him. He also smiling at them with giving killing smirks to Manyata.
Manyata(to herself):- Hey bhagwan Ye Uday in sab ladkiyon ke saath kya kar rha hai? Ye sab to Uday se aise chipak rahi hai jaise Gud ke saath makkhi.Agar in sab ka bas chale to ye Uday ka 100-100 gm. karke apne-apne ghar le jaye.Ek J kya kam thi jo uski itni saari bahnein bhi yahaan aa gayi Uday ke liye.Par mein aisa kuch nahi hone doongi.
Manyata watching Uday dances with all girls with anger & pain.Uday giving her Now you see what you lost look to Manyata. She feels so-so Jealous because of all this.
Now J who wears a beautiful orange backless gown & her hair tied up in a one-sided bun going near to Uday.
J(to Uday):- Shall we dance?
Uday:- Of course J, anytime.
Now they both dancing with each other on a romantic slow song. Uday giving killing smirks at Manyata.
J:- Uday aaj hum kitne dino ke baad ek-dusre ke saath dance kar rahe hain.Warna to tum  humesha Manyata ke naam ka jaap karte rahte the.
Uday:- J, Sweetheart. Par ab to hum tumhare saath dance kar rahe hain na. So, just enjoy this moment. hmmm.
J(smiles):-Pata hai Uday aaj hum tumhare liye bahut khush hain.
Uday:- Humare liye. Oh, that's a surprise.Wo kaise?
J:-Ab dekho na Uday accha hua tumhe Manyata ki hakikat shaadi se pahle hi pata chal gayi ki wo kis tarah ki ladki hai. Usse na tumhari, na tumhare pyar ki or na hi tumhari feelings ki respect hai. Hum to pahle se hi jaante the ki ye Gawarni tumhare layak hi nahi hai
Uday:-J, ek baat kahein tumse?
J( Puts her head on his shoulder):-Ek baat kya 1000 baatein kaho na Uday hum to tumhari baatein sari zindagi sunne ke liye ready hai.
Uday:- J, hum jaante hain ki tumhara target humesha se Manyata rahi hai.Par agar tum humare saath time spend karna chahti ho toh Pls Manyata ki baat karne ki koi Jaroorat nahi hai.
J:- As you wish Uday.As you wish. 
Manyata fuming with anger after watching UV & J dancing & talking with each other.
Manyata:-Ye J ki bacchi. Mein isse acche se jaanti hoon abhi  bhi Uday ko mere khilaaf aag ugal rahi hogi. Ye sachmuch humare Ghar ki MantharaLOL hai. Jab dekho sabko mere khilaaf karne mein lagi rahti hai. Par J Beta, mein bhi galti se hi sahi par teri badi behan hoon. Mein itni aasani se tujhe Uday ko apne se door nahi karne doongi.
Than a waiter comes. Manyata takes a glass of  wine.
Waiter:-Yuvrani sa, ye softdrink nahi wi...
Manyata:-shhh. maine tumse kuch poocha nahi na toh phir.
Manyata takes one sip.
Manyata:- YikesDead.Iska taste kitna bura hai. Lagta hai mere saath bura hote-hote iss drink ka taste bhi bura ho gaya hai. After that she drinks 4-5 glasses of wine. Now she is fully drunk & walking towards stage where J & Uday dancing with each other.She pushes J one side & starts dancing with Uday on Aadha Ishq.
At  the time of dancing. both looking straight in each others eyes & no one speak a word from both side.Both lost in each other eyes. Their eyes are talking with each other. After some time, Uday realizes what he was doing?Uday stops dancing with Manyata & left her alone on the stage. Manyata looking at him with her teary eyes.Cry
Now Rain also starts with thunder. Manyata can't bear ignorance of Uday, so she left the party & running towards terrace garden & crying  continuously. Nobody listening her their becoz everyone busy in the party. She fells on the grass of  garden. Her tears mixed with rain water. She crying so loudly.CryCryCry
After some time Uday notices Manyata is nowhere in the party. He trying to find her but he fails.
He asked to a servant:- Manyata kahan hai?
Servant:-Yuvraaj sa, humne Yuvrani sa ko terrace par jaate hue dekha tha.
Uday:-OK, Thank you.
He also reached in the terrace garden & saw Manyata lying on the grass & crying continuously &  shivering from cold.
Uday running towards Manyata.
Uday( in anger to Manyata):- Manyata ye kya pagalpan hai. Andar chalo tum bimar ho jaogi.
Manyata:- Toh, tumhe isse kya. Tum jao aur jakar un chote-chote rumaal pahanewali larkiyon ke saath dance karo, unhe kiss karo or jo bhi karna hai karo.Waise bhi hum aapke hai kaun?
Uday:-Tum sahi keh rahi ho tum humari koi nahi ho aur humein bhi koi shauk nahi hai tumse baat karne ka hum to bas insaniyat ki vajah se bol rahe the. Tum apni marzi ki malik ho.
Manyata:-Tum jao Uday. Waise bhi wahan kisi ko meri zaroorat nahi hai. Sab log mere bina bahut khush hain.
Uday(in angerAngry):- Waah Your Highness. Bas itne se mein hi aapka ye haal ho gaya humein kisi or ke saath dance karte use touch karte dekh kar aur tum humare saath itne dino se jo kar rahi thi wo. Tumne kabhi socha jab tum us Akash ke liye hum par naraaz hoti thi, uske liye tumne humein kabhi nahi apnaya, Yahaan tak ki humari shaadi wale din humein akela chod kar chal gayi. Tum soch bhi nahi sakti ki humein kitni takleef hui hogi.Aur tum ye sab ek shaam bhi bardasht nahi kar paayi. Ab pata chala Manyata ki jab pyar ke badle pyar or saath ke badle saath nahi milta toh kaisa lagta hai.
Uday starts to going from there but Manyata stops him.
Manyata(sobbingCry):- Uday, ye sach hai ki Moniya ne tumse kabhi pyar nahi kiya par Manyata tumse bhut-2 pyar karti hai.Pata hai humari shaadi wale din jab Unnati ne mujhse apni eyes band karke us insaan ka chehra dekhne ke liye  kaha jiske liye maine Shadi ka joda pehna tha wo Akash nahi tum the Uday or Usi waqt mein samajh gayi thi ki main tumse pyar karti hoon Akash se nahi
Haan ye sach hai ki mein Shadi wale din tumhe chod kar chali gayi thi par agar mein wahan nahi jati to AkashDead ki asliyat kaise dekhti. Shayad usne toh kabhi mujhse pyar hi nahi kiya. Maine uske liye apna parivaar, apna taaj or apni riyasat ko daav par laga diya or wo to sirf mujhse bdla lena chahta tha. Mein bina ateet ke panno ko nband kare Humari zindagi ki nayi shuruvaat kaise karti. Mein nahi chahti thi ki shadi ke baad mein tumhare nahi balki AkashDead ko apne dil mein jagah doon.
Par  ab mein sach mein sirf tumse pyar karti hoon, iss baar koi jhoot, dhoka nahi hai.Manyata said all these words  to Uday in one breath.
After hearing all these words from Manyata Uday looking at her with shock.
Uday:- Manyata wo wo hum hum..
Manyata:- Shhh. Kuch mat kaho Uday. Mein hi shayad tumhare layak nahi hoon. Par mein sach mein bahut sharminda hoon. Mein chahti hoon ki tumhe wo larki mile jo tumhe sach mein bahut pyar kare tumse bhi zyada.
Manyata starting to left him, then Uday holds her fists with his hand.
Uday:-Jab se bolna shuru kiya hai tab se bole ja rahi ho. Kabhi-2 dosre ki baat bhi sun leni chahiye Princess. Humesha se humari Zindagi ki faisle tum karti aayi ho kabhi engagement ka kabhi shadi ka or kabhi shadi nahi karne ka. Humesha bas tum, tum,tum. Humein bhi kabhi humari zindagi ka faisla karne diya karo Princess.
Jo baat hum itne dino se tumhare muh se sunna chah rahe the. wo baat aaj humein sunne ko mili hai.
Manyata:-Uda...(interrupted)
Uday:- Shhh,,,,Humari baat abhi poori nahi hui hai Princess.Pata hai jab tum humein humare shadi wale din chodkar chali gayi tab humein aisa laga jaise hum apna sab kuch haar gaye. Par aaj humein aisa lag raha hai ki humein apna sab kuch wapas mil gaya wo bhi pehle se bhi zyada. Haan.. Princess hum aaj bhi aapse utna hi pyaar karte hain jitna pahle karte the.Humein aaj bhi aapki utni hi fikar hai jitni pahle thi.
Manyata saw him continuously with smile on her face & tears in her eyes.
Manyata:- Sacchi Uday.Smile
Uday:- Mucchi Princess.
Both hugs each other & Manyata breaking hug & said:-To phir tum un larkiyon ko kissi kyun kar rahe the?
Uday:-Kahan Princess?
Manyata:- Jyada bano mat Party mein aur kahan?
Uday:-Hum unhe nahi wo humein kissi kar rahi thi. Hum itne hot jo hai.Wink
Manyata:- Haan, Haan sab dekh rahi thi mein party me. Un sabka bas chalta toh wo tumhare saath or na jaane kya-2 karti.
Uday:- Kya-2 karti Princess. Detail mein batao na.(smirking at her)
Manyata:- Ud... ACCCHOOO.. ACCHOO.
Manyata sneezing continuouly.They ran towards a shed.
Uday:-Humne kaha tha na ki tumhein thandi lag jayegi.Ab dekho kya ho gaya. Manyata humein lagta hai tumhein warm ki zaroorat hai.
Manyata:-Matlab? ACCHOOO.
Uday:-Matlab Princess hum tumhein samjhate hain. Actually hum tumhein practically karke dikhate hain.
Manyata Confused. Before she says anything to Uday pressing his lips on her rossy, pink, soft lips for two minutes.
Uday:- Toh Kaise laga Princess?
Manyata:-Bahut zor se laga Uday.LOL
Both starts laughingLOL & hugs each other more tightly & background music starts...ABHI ABHI FROM JISM-2( THIS OS TITLE FROM THIS SONG LYRICS)


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I know this was too filmy .LOLLOL In this OS too much dialougebaazi from both sides( Uday & Manyata) & No actions( Ahem Ahem..LOL) If u like this Pls hit like button & also comments(good/bad,that's your choice) I want comments. I always threatening you.LOLLOLLOL My all frustration after reading shocking news of UV's accident & DEK ending in August inspires me to write this filmy type OS.LOL & Sorry for grammar mistakes.











 











Edited by Vasishtha - 10 October 2012 at 9:05am

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Awww it was cute!

Though I rarely read OS etc... you sent me a PM so thought I'd try it out and it was very good!Thumbs Up


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Dhamakedar OS!! loved itt
perfectly written!!!
please continue more !!
and thanks for pm
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this was awesome totally loved it hayee the kiss was lovely really loved it thanks u so much for the pm 

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Tooo cute!! Loved it!! I'll really be looking to read more from u!!:D

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ACHOOO ACHOO ek dum Rabchik RapchandasBlushingtoo goodClapthx for pm sweetyHug

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So sweet and romantic os!!! Very nicely written and full of emotion...thanks for such a lovely OS and PM...

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Posted: 14 July 2012 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
The last line... ROFL
Really cute OS! Love it!
You got the party and rain scene + confession all in one!

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