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Pia: Abhay, This is just not fair.
Abhay: Pia, do you think I like it any more than you? Siddhartha is my closest buddy after Kabir. He is going to kill me for not attending his wedding. But what to do honey, you know there is only one month left and I have to do handover so many responsibilities to the new guy. There is no way I can take leave right now especially so soon. I already took a month off for our marriage last month. And so, as much as I hate it, you will have to go alone to the wedding.
Pia: I don't want to go Abhay.
Abhay: Pia, Alina is your cousin and a good friend too. You owe it to Dippanita aunty for taking care of you all these years.
Pia: Fine, I get it that I have to go and attend the wedding, but why do I have to stay on there? Why can't I just come back and we look for a home together when you have to finally move.
Abhay: Pia, we have already discussed it so many times. I would hardly get time to look for a home when I join there. You know how tight my work schedule is here. And it is only going to increase when I join there. And that's why I want you to stay on there and look for a house and buy the one you like best. This way you will also get time to furnish it according to your taste.
"Why don't you clearly say that you just want to escape from all work and make me do all the work?" Pia said while showing fake anger to him.
"My wife is so smart", said Abhay while hugging Pia from back and nuzzling in her neck, but Pia pulled apart and pouted while saying, "What makes you think that you can get away like this?"
Abhay pulled her in his arms again this time holding her by her waist and facing her and replied in his husky voice: Because I know that my wife would love that when her husband joins her after a month, then he should have a nice comfortable warm home of his own to live and a nice, warm, cozy bed to make sweet passionate love to his beautiful wife.
Abhay's voice and closeness was making Pia go weak in her knees and she blushed at his remark. After all they have been married for just a month now. Pia whispered in a shaky voice: Abhay!!But he placed his finger on her lips and said"Sshh.. Pia, we are not going to see each other for a month now. You will leave for Mumbai tomorrow. So, let's not fight tonight and instead let's give each other sweet memories to cherish and pull both of us through this one month. Just because I am more practical of the two of us does not mean I am going to miss you any less." With that he pulled to Pia to their bed and they spent the rest of the night loving each other.
The next morning, Abhay dropped Pia off at the Indira Gandhi International Airport, Delhi, from where Pia took her flight and reached Mumbai. She was received by her cousin cum best friend Misha and her husband Kabir. They reached Misha and Kabir's house after an hour of drive and Pia was seeing around the city of Mumbai for the first time. She had studied in hostels in Dehradun and Delhi throughout her school and college and had spent her vacations alternating between Lucknow and Chandigarh staying with her two aunts and cousins. This was her first visit to Mumbai, a city where all her cousins were now settled and so this was the city where Abhay and Pia had decided to build their own home too. Abhay's office was in the upcoming business hub in Navi Mumbai and so they wanted to buy a sea facing house in Navi Mumbai only. They were driving on the Palm Beach Road when Pia's eyes fell on a house almost hidden behind coconut trees. The house seemed to be existing there for quite sometime and Pia could not help but feel a feeling of home looking at it. She asked Kabir to stop the car and she stepped down to take a close look at the house. The closer she got to the house, she felt a pull towards the house. As soon as she reached the door step, Misha pulled her back and shouted:
Oye, we can start house hunting after 3 days. First let's get over with Alina's wedding. There's so much work left to do at the party hall. Let's go there first.
Pia reluctantly started to move, but before moving she did notice a sign placed on the door of the house which said "Available For Sale/Rent" The sign surely brought a smile to Pia's face. Maybe she will end up buying this house only.
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I was actually on Mobile when I saw this topic of yours.. I was just waiting for you to edit the title (as you said you would) and so that I could reserve..! Lucky me that no one was around at that time and I could be the First one..!
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WOW WOW WOW Dishu..!!! Another Masterpiece..!!!
So.. I am the first one to comment on this FF of yours..!! I had always wanted to be the first one for atleast one update of yours.. and here I am.. the first one to comment on the FF..!!!
"Murder of Retrospect".. A very intriguing title.. Enough to keep me glued to this story..!
I have no Idea about the Original Story.. Agatha Christie's "The
Sleeping Murder".. So I am very much new to this..
Coming to the Character Sketch..
Very different indeed..! Completely different Relationships..
Abhiya are already married.. sweet..!
Coming to the first Chapter..
It was really good..!
Abhiya shifting their base from Delhi to Mumbai.. I found the Abhiya fake fight really cute..
The  at the end of the paragraph made way for a stupid smile on my face..!
So.. Piya in Mumbai for Alina's Wedding.. and Abhay joining her after a month..! Piya will be missing him na..?
Why was there a special mention about the house..? I mean.. I just have some
fear deep down in my heart about the house and I am scared..!
I actually shiver reading the title..!
Thanks for the PM.. And by the way.. who do you think would not want to be PMed about such a brilliant story..??
Love you for this FF and I am sure you'll pull it off amazingly well..!!
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16th dec last date...oh really???
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Today was not PKYEK's last episode
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last post - tears 4rm d heart
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Abhay killed Deepu and Pia witness's the murder
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So, what's up with Shanaya's murder peeps?
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