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mpatel97508 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:02pm | IP Logged

This is my first fan-fic on this user.... Hope you guyz like it....

.:DoStI nAfRaT yA pYaR:.

This is going to be a story of two people that are best friends, but due to misunderstandings, they start to hate each other.  Soon in college, they hate each others guts.  They meet each now and then and feel like killing the other.  Will they ever be friends again???  Or will they be lovers???

Should I continue???

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Part 1- Page 2

Part 2- Page 3

Part 3-Page 5

Part 4-Page 6



Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 20 June 2006 at 10:43am

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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
yhh duhhh kontinue
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:26pm | IP Logged
yes!! continue soon...its sounds rilly interesting
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 2:57pm | IP Logged
sounds good..cont soon Smile
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
yea cont sooon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 June 2006 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
soundssssss great cont soon
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gr88888888 but im confused wat r the names of ur chracter
mpatel97508 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 June 2006 at 1:39pm | IP Logged

.:DoStI nAfRaT yA pYaR:.

You see a huge mansion.  Taking a look inside you go up the stairs and a door opens.  Inside you see pictures of models (with REALLY short clothes on).  Taking a look on the bed you see a figure sleeping with a cover over his/her head.  The camera turns.  You see a innocent girl.  The girl is none other than Kirpa.  She is wearing a pink salwar kameze.  She gets a glass of cold water and pours it on the person and runs. 

P- AHHHHHHHHH!!!

He takes the covers off and you see that it's none other than Angad that was under the covers.

A- KRIPA!!!!!!!!!!  I WON'T LEAVE YOU!!!

K- First catch me and then don't leave me!!!

Kripa runs down the stair and runs around the dinining room.  Then you see a middle-aged lady coming.

L- What's all this Kirpa??

K- Naina aunty... Thank god..

Kripa hides behind her.

N- Kya hawa Kripa beti??

K- Aunty, Angad mujhe mar delaga!!!  Mujhe bacho!!

N- Angad... yeh mein kya sun rahi hon??

A- Nahin.. mein to bus...

K- Aunty yeh jhoot bol raha hai!! 

N- Bus.. Ub Angad, jou (go) tum na lo (take a bath)  Kripa beti meri kuch madat karo...

K- Theek hain...

A- Mein tumhe nahin chodonga Kirpa... Ab nahin to bade mein tum pachtoge!!

N- Angad... jou!!!

A- Ok mom...

Angad leaves and Kripa giggle.  Kripa helps Naina around the kitchen.  Soon Angad comes down and Kripa and Angad eat.  When they are done they go to Angad's car.

In the car

Kripa is laughing.  Angad gets annoyed.  He starts to drive fast and Kripa gets scared.  She holds Angad's arm tightly.  Kripa closes her eyes tight.  Angad is satisfied that Kripa is now scared of him again.

A- Say sorry!!

K- Kyu mein maffi mangu??

A- Say it now or else....

K- Kya??

A- Mein..mein..

K- Tum kya karoge??

A- Mein hamari dosti todonga!!

K (surprised)- KYA!!!!!?????!!!!!

Will Kripa apoligise???



Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 17 June 2006 at 2:11pm

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